Ya Hood aink like mines

[Omniscient]

I came from jacking and robbing around da hood
Da place where if u could afford a dollar meal ya doing good
Hoes stripping butt naked in the streets for greens
Hospitals not able to help people in need for spleens
Sex and murder running the streets like coke and ecstasy
Niggaz selling drugs over the fact that they hav no complexity
Crack heads over dosing so much they make it as a tradition
They shoot the needle so fast it’s like da in a competition
Kingpins and pimps cutting all the deals in da streets
While da rest of us is struggling to buy some sneaks
Cadillac’s and hummers swerving in and out da lanes
Niggaz hand washing their clothes to get out da stains
Crack being made and hidden up in fortresses
Piles of coke looking like bunkers in golf courses
Niggaz having babies and not paying their child support
Then they act all confused when they have to got to court
Gangstas wearing their colors and strapped wit heat
Vest bullet proof so they don’t eternally go to sleep
All the kids look up to nothin but killers and villains
Because mostly all their relatives have spent days in prisons
Police don’t show up on the scene when it gets too hot
Because the last one that did found his self gettin jacked and shot
I spit the everyday reality of where um from in my lines
So don’t say you know what I mean if ya hood aink like mines


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...96#post1979096

[Omniscient]

uppin for feed plz

[GhettoFabolous]

This was aiight Yungsta, could feel alot of that shit mayn. Only thing i dint like is how it jumped from topic to topic, like gangsta niggaz to coke to girls then back to g niggaz again, nah mean? Try n keep it fluent on topics. Other then that, nice drop.

Return da favor on my collabo, link be in my sig.

Keep droppin.

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[Duval]

Aye I liked that. That was tight. Nice Vocab. Aww man that was tight.

[F.A.M.]

this was aight isnt this like the 3rd post with this topic from u? but it was aight it wasnt to creative ,but it wasnt at all basic i think with this topic you gotta add alot of creativity cuz this some eyday shit we hear,,but it was nice it blended showed were u from or whatnot but its really the same thing across america i would love to see some different topics from you ...aight

[Omniscient]

Thanks for the feed homies and F.A.M i'll bring sumthin different next time ight

uppin

[Novacain]

Yeh man, i liked this piece...
Sex and murder running the streets like coke and ecstasy
Niggaz selling drugs over the fact that they hav no complexity
Crack heads over dosing so much they make it as a tradition
They shoot the needle so fast it’s like da in a competition
...Them lines were really hot, great wordplay.

This is a good solid drop man, keep it up

[Omniscient]

thanks alot man_uppin

[Omniscient]

uppin 4 feed plz

[Lil'Young]

This shit was tight. Yea your hood is something like mine.
This had alot of fealing and emotion.

Shit I like cause I could relate to:

Niggaz having babies and not paying their child support
Then they act all confused when they have to got to court
Gangstas wearing their colors and strapped wit heat
Vest bullet proof so they don’t eternally go to sleep
All the kids look up to nothin but killers and villains
Because mostly all their relatives have spent days in prisons
Police don’t show up on the scene when it gets too hot
Because the last one that did found his self gettin jacked and shot

[Omniscient]

Cool man_uppin