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I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter
Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant
I Predict The Hottest Flame Will Win !
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20 Minute Key
<>George Washington Carver Invented Peanut Butter<>
This kid lives in fantasy, to hiM TV is the REAL WORLD
Claims to key but known to C TRL like 12 year old girls
Make him fold and curl, he buckles when the heat is on
His only hot SHIT is the heated STOOL he puts his feet upon
I’m strong, enjoying your weakened stance even more
C’mon whore, we all know what B.F. really stands for
Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire
Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire
I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter
got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter
be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers
claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver
Harvard? Nah, we all know you went to the school of hard cocks
Audios? You’ll never go PLATINUM when I install credit card blocks
Make him start and stop, die then breathe when I rewind the clip
I’m directing this documentary entitled; Black Flame: Inside The Bitch
I’ll make you LIe LOw in STITCHes, when I DIS kNEY’s & break joints
only because I shake hands at introductions but B.F. shakes groins
He’s got caked loins, three layers of shit, damn he’s full of it
Black Flame, hollow be thy name like the end of my bullet tip
He ain’t pulling CRIP, it’s a fact that he wants to say he BLUE fools
Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools
Fangs aren’t in rules, so take them out you fucking biter, your snake rattles
I bet you anything that you use at least 2 lines from your last phynam battle
This bitch is cattle, getting branded and he’s running like mayors
And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors
I’m just a player, making him mad when I steal this B’s honeys
He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy
Feeling lumpy? Just put it in your cup cause I know your style to a TEA
No pills for me, because I’m so ill that I make you reach ecstasy when I COUGH E
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but here is my verse
Liquid's carrer is going no
where, like broken throttles,
but i'll have him running for
cover like swimsuit models/
call me the devil because i
got Wicked Game, i put water
on lava thus rocking Liquid
Flame/ your no one but still
not unheard of, yell 187 cause
this is murder/i like your jokes
kid you think you a comic?
i'll make you show your guts
by ripping open you stomach/
dick riding is the only time he
stays on top of his biz because
liquid flame has a worst rap then
unpopular kidz/ with ease I'll
top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken
but he know to eat a cockatoo/
i ripped you i know it makes you
mad u hater, but i just because
liquid likes given oral sex doesn't
mean that he's a glad he ate her/
homo i will never miss a gay,
you could battle the sun and still
couldn't diss a ray/he could sell
drugs and couldn't push his joint,
but i stab him just to push my
point/ so tell how does it feel to
take a thrashing barred? you
like dmx in movies you only
acting hard/ bitch i'll trick you
because your ass is mine, I'll
smash his mind, so he can't
think of winning, i'll make your
career like your sex life, quickly
ending/
things to know liquid flame lost to listen/chicken 3 times
Last edited by BLACK FLAME; July 13th, 2002 at 12:32 AM
I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter
Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant
Nice heavyweight shit here. I'm looking forward to getting in on the next round. Nice battle here.
Liquid Flame...
be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers
claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver
Probably your best section. Nice wordplay.
he could sell
drugs and couldn't push his joint
Not bad.
Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools
Not bad.
And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors
lol
He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy
Not bad.
Black Flame...
i'll have him running for
cover like swimsuit models
Nice beginning.
with ease I'll
top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken
but he know to eat a cockatoo
lol Nice multi too.
just because
liquid likes given oral sex doesn't
mean that he's a glad he ate her
Niiiice.
i'll make your
career like your sex life, quickly
ending
Great ending.
The Breakdown...
They had just about the same amount of hard hitting rhymes, but Black Flame had better fillers, and a more complex multiple rhyme scheme throughout.
Vote: Black Flame
vote=BF
liquid flame had to many played lines
plus i think BF edged this battle out wit a better personal
"top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken
but he know to eat a cockatoo/"
^best line out of the battle^
LIQUID FLAME::
This kid lives in fantasy, to hiM TV is the REAL WORLD
Claims to key but known to C TRL like 12 year old girls
THIS WAS OK , SETUP THOUGHT WAS OK..PUNCH I FELT COULD OF CAME A LITTLE BETTER..NOT TOO EFFECTIVE HERE
Make him fold and curl, he buckles when the heat is on
His only hot SHIT is the heated STOOL he puts his feet upon
NOT BAD HERE..OK WORDPLAY..PUNCH NOT HITTING..
I’m strong, enjoying your weakened stance even more
C’mon whore, we all know what B.F. really stands for
USELESS WORDING HERE..TOO ME ALL FILLER..MAYBE IF REWORDED..COULD OF CAME HARDER..
Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire
Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire
OK...
I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter
got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter
LOL..MADE ME LAUGH..NOT BAD
be-headed and slaughtered, took a little off the top like barbers
claim toast? Then I’ll P & NUT in your BUTTER like George Washington Carver
THIS WAS COOL..SETUP THOUGHT COULD OF CAME BETTER THOUGH..
Harvard? Nah, we all know you went to the school of hard cocks
Audios? You’ll never go PLATINUM when I install credit card blocks
OK..PLAYED CONCEPT THOUGH
Make him start and stop, die then breathe when I rewind the clip
I’m directing this documentary entitled; Black Flame: Inside The Bitch
OK..BUT BLAH..
I’ll make you LIe LOw in STITCHes, when I DIS kNEY’s & break joints
only because I shake hands at introductions but B.F. shakes groins
THIS WAS COOL..NICE PUNCH.
He’s got caked loins, three layers of shit, damn he’s full of it
Black Flame, hollow be thy name like the end of my bullet tip
GOOD..FEELING IT
He ain’t pulling CRIP, it’s a fact that he wants to say he BLUE fools
Meanwhile I’m making him SHED BLOOD like gang garden tools
LOL..WAS NICE..BUT NOT EFFECTIVE
Fangs aren’t in rules, so take them out you fucking biter, your snake rattles
I bet you anything that you use at least 2 lines from your last phynam battle
OK PERSONAL..AGAIN NOT TOO EFFECTIVE..
This bitch is cattle, getting branded and he’s running like mayors
And it’s a fact that Black recycles more than ecology majors
NICE PUNCHLINE HERE..ECOLOGY MAJORS SHIT MADE ME LAUGH..WILL BE IN TOP PUNCHES..
I’m just a player, making him mad when I steal this B’s honeys
He got more than sonned, I dwarfed him 6 times and just left him Grumpy
NOT REALLY FEELING THIS..GRUMPY LINE WAS ALRIGHT NOT TO HARD THOUGH
Feeling lumpy? Just put it in your cup cause I know your style to a TEA
No pills for me, because I’m so ill that I make you reach ecstasy when I COUGH E
NOT A GOOD ENDING ,SHOULD OF CAME HARDER HERE..PLAYED CONCEPT THE TEA LINE..BUT NICE VERSE..
BLACK FLAME::
Liquid's carrer is going no
where, like broken throttles,
but i'll have him running for
cover like swimsuit models/
NOT BAD OF A BEGINNING..PRETTY NICE PUNCH..BUT SORTA PLAYED..
call me the devil because i
got Wicked Game, i put water
on lava thus rocking Liquid
Flame/
OK,..SOME WONT GET THIS..BUT I FELT WAS DECENT SHIT..NOT TOO HARD BUT COO
your no one but still
not unheard of, yell 187 cause
this is murder/BLAH
i like your jokes
kid you think you a comic?
i'll make you show your guts
by ripping open you stomach/
NICE..I LIKE THE VISIUAL SHIT..
dick riding is the only time he
stays on top of his biz because
liquid flame has a worst rap then
unpopular kidz/
UMM NOT FEELING IT..
with ease I'll
top ya crew, couldn't eat chicken
but he know to eat a cockatoo/
NICE PERSONAL..
i ripped you i know it makes you
mad u hater, but i just because
liquid likes given oral sex doesn't
mean that he's a glad he ate her/
NOT FEELING IT..I KEEP READING IT AND CANT FEEL THIS..
homo i will never miss a gay,
you could battle the sun and still
couldn't diss a ray/
NOOOO
he could sell
drugs and couldn't push his joint,
but i stab him just to push my
point/
SETUP WAS COOL..BUT THE SECOND LINE FOR PUNCH NOT EFFECTIVE AT ALL..FILLER NO NO
so tell how does it feel to
take a thrashing barred? you
like dmx in movies you only
acting hard/
NOT LIKEING IT..
bitch i'll trick you
because your ass is mine, I'll
smash his mind, so he can't
think of winning, i'll make your
career like your sex life, quickly
ending/
OK ENDING..NOT REALLY HARD THOUGH..
UMM BOTH OF YOU FOOLS.CAME NICE..LIQUID CAME NICE FOR A KEY..I FEEL YOU SHOULD WRITE YOUR VERSES AND THINK ABOUT YOUR SHIT..BUT THIS WAS A NICE VERSE..HE HAD SOME OK WORDPLAY..AND FEW NICE PUNCHES..BLACK FLAME NOT LIKE YOUR USUAL VERSES..I FELT DIDNT COME AS HARD AS USUAL..BUT HE CAME WITH SOME NICE PERSONALS IN HIS VERSE..THAT WON IT..
VOTE BLACK FLAME..
Vote liquid flame his punches were better and i was felling his style more than b f's but his flow was cool too
vote liquid flame
Man, I just wasn't feeling Black's verse this time around. Liquid's flow was awesome, his wordplay was good, and his punches hit pretty hard. He could of set some of them up a little better though. Black had some good multi's and personals, but it just wans't his usual caliber. Vote to Liquid for a tight verse.
Liquid's carrer is going no
where, like broken throttles,
but i'll have him running for
cover like swimsuit models/
call me the devil because i
got Wicked Game, i put water
on lava thus rocking Liquid
Flame/ -Caught mah attention better than any other line, fuckin creative as hell black...
Flame the Chancellor, I kinda like that, bitch, call me sire
Liquid always extinguishes Black when you fight fire with fire
I’m a dryer for hire, spinning the hottest threads for a quarter
got you still finding traces of my kids dead in your daughter
--Ill ass lines from liquid....
Overall vurses breakdown
Wordplay-Liquid
Creativity- Black
Punches-Black
Rhyme scheme-Liquid
Tha rest-Black
Overall two fuckin ill ass vurses, but in end, better worded an written by Black
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BLACK FLAME- 8-0
LIQUID FLAME- 7-5
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