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drop an hour from checkin. house rules
much respect. good luck.
10-14 lines
drop an hour from checkin. house rules
much respect. good luck.
Do me a favor and help me close this up.
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checkin' in, right back atcha homie
check..
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When you "flex" your lyrical muscles, you ain't lookin' "tense",
tryin to "raise the bar", but can't handle the weight it represents,
flex reppin' a "hiero" sig, but none of his punches "paint pictures",
no "rosetta stone" is needed to decipher his scriptures,
"MC's should know their limitations", seems flex missed that track,
'cause he's still rappin', even though he knows he's whack,
got him mad, watch him flex, tryin to battle cats in text,
but he's out-muscled in this tuscle, got his mind perplexed,
head back to the gym, where you might have a chance to win,
'cause on rb weight dun mean shit, it's about what's within!
Quicksand is approprite, I taught him “walk proud”
but this nigga stays “down under” once the bottom drops out
This cat is more Square than a Garden garnished in Knick’s fans
he uses wooden dildos, ridin harder pine than the sixth man
you supposed to show improve, come high school this whore was finished
so I’ll drop this deadweight quicker than a drive-through abortion clinic
I’ll contort this motherfucker til he can’t be identified
when he asked me how to elevate his lines, I sent him mine
no time to blind a silly bitch who acts and defines “fake”
but fuck goin easy, I wouldn’t tab you a line break
I’ll beat you like a stepson.. but without the namesake
next time you get run over, catch the nameplate... aye, mate?
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When you "flex" your lyrical muscles, you ain't lookin' "tense",
tryin to "raise the bar", but can't handle the weight it represents,
NICE
flex reppin' a "hiero" sig, but none of his punches "paint pictures",
no "rosetta stone" is needed to decipher his scriptures,
NICE
"MC's should know their limitations", seems flex missed that track,
'cause he's still rappin', even though he knows he's whack,
NAH.. 2 OLD
got him mad, watch him flex, tryin to battle cats in text,
but he's out-muscled in this tuscle, got his mind perplexed,
GOOD
head back to the gym, where you might have a chance to win,
'cause on rb weight dun mean shit, it's about what's within!
AVERAGE FINISH... 7.5/10.. PRETTY GOOD.. SHOULD BE A LIGHTWEIGHT SOON
Quicksand is approprite, I taught him “walk proud”
but this nigga stays “down under” once the bottom drops out
GOOD
This cat is more Square than a Garden garnished in Knick’s fans
he uses wooden dildos, ridin harder pine than the sixth man
LOL NICE
you supposed to show improve, come high school this whore was finished
so I’ll drop this deadweight quicker than a drive-through abortion clinic
NICE
I’ll contort this motherfucker til he can’t be identified
when he asked me how to elevate his lines, I sent him mine
SELF GLORY
no time to blind a silly bitch who acts and defines “fake”
but fuck goin easy, I wouldn’t tab you a line break
AVERAGE
I’ll beat you like a stepson.. but without the namesake
next time you get run over, catch the nameplate... aye, mate?
OK FINISH... 7/10
v/ quicksand... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161156
ssinner...that's twice now. im starting to think you don't really get what self glory is.. anyway...up 1.
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MC, ur shit was pretty good, nice flow, aight punches but u coulda came harder, good structure, but u didnt hav much wordplay, so ur rap sounded pretty plain.no haitin.7/10.
flex, i liked ur shit, flowed nicely, good punches, good structure, nice wordplay, u dropped pretty well.8.5/10.
i think flex came harder in this battle wit punches, he also had more wordplay.
V//flex 4 havin the better punches and more wordplay.
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flex reppin' a "hiero" sig, but none of his punches "paint pictures",
no "rosetta stone" is needed to decipher his scriptures,
Real nice.
Your verse was a not too hard, but this^ is good.
I liked some ideas, but most were played...
Decent Verse.
This battle was won by Mad Flex... good verse. i liked lots...
I’ll beat you like a stepson.. but without the namesake
next time you get run over, catch the nameplate... aye, mate? - good closer...nice personal.
Quicksand is approprite, I taught him “walk proud”
but this nigga stays “down under” once the bottom drops out
This cat is more Square than a Garden garnished in Knick’s fans
he uses wooden dildos, ridin harder pine than the sixth man
you supposed to show improve, come high school this whore was finished
so I’ll drop this deadweight quicker than a drive-through abortion clinic
really solid, took some iffy concepts and used them well.
v/ madflex
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161184
The Next Level
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MC quicksand... in the future if you say ' return the favor' i will vote against you just for saying that. Just drop alink thats all thats needed
my vote goes 2 flex 4 good word play better structure and more decent punchlines
v/flex
o yeh hit me up with this i wanna close this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161534
madflex wins this simply cuz i felt his punches came harder than quiks.........good flow and structure all round....jus came down to punches where mad took it away man ....safe
drop some votes man ..USE THE POLL !!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161476
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...37#post1923837
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161266
My vote, even though it wont be polled... goes to quicksand...
Multi-rhyme scheme lines, harder punches, and not one line of praisin himself... ending could have been tweaked a lil...
Flex, you had some hits in there, and my fav. line from this battle came from your verse (abortion clinic)... just not enough hard hits to take it...
hit the links whenever you get the chance...
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F*ck the commercial bullshit,and the artists that sell units due to good marketing teams... support local/underground music."
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