10-12 lines...
no krew votes...
due whenever...
check ins...
house rules...
10-12 lines...
no krew votes...
due whenever...
check ins...
house rules...
ok i accept since you been here longer you go and spit first
fuck it ill drop
this dude got me waiting for his drop a hour
this herb not even from pittsburg
why he trying to cowher(bill cowher is the pittsburg steelers coach)
he could'nt flow if he wrote his shit in a rain shower
one bar i spit like his whole verse to the 8th power
see how i break cowards?
ya shit unelevated like broke stairmasters
im way past ya
ya still there bastard?
should'nt known im the wrong nigga to push
since ya got a muslim name(ishmael)
just consider me George Bush
i seem a pre-write this dude is online and still aint post a punk ass 12 lines damn i hate scared niggas buy a fucking dog or something
checking in...
he checked in aint drop and went off line what the fuck drop already
TheGhettosShakes?, does that mean yur alone?, what the heck
snap his neck, im leaving this kid abandoned n triple effect...
cuz hes home alone 1, 2, & 3, hes maucawly caulkened* n a sense
emmense playedness i smell, his verse was worse than broken tents!
i'd throw n my 2 cents, but hes not even worth half of one...
like being sonned dont mean shit to him, hes an herb for fun...
like a jammed gun, he trys to shoot but weight is holding him back
then i'll just hack him so hard that his firewall wont be able to react
attacks more common then chuck norris on crack, there to ranger like
cuz even if u was walker u still couldent step over me, let alone hike
this such is like a used bike trying to be sold at a yardsale, hes abused
im confused?, cuz even let go my eggo is a 10 times better phrase then u
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Weakkkk..
But, Ismael won this rather easily. Ghetto, you need to work on your structure man.. its really choppy. You had some nice potential disses, but work on the wording an' shit.. I guess the structure is what really killed ya. Punches were alright.. showed signs of creativity.. just fix up your structure and use the amount of lines req'd in your favor ... you only did 4 bars by my count.. use the max line limit to add punches..the more the better bro.
As for Ismael, dont get all big headed about the win man.. you can improve too. Especially with personals and punches.. alotta your verse was either played or just blah punches.. however, you had a more complete verse with consistency in punches, that actually hit.. therefore thats why you win. Improve alot though, to both.
Vote / Ismael
thanks for the honest vote man...uppin this battle...Originally Posted by d.cross
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yeah i was gonna say the same thing and agree that Ismael took this win EASY, but, it was pretty weak... the punches were alright for Ismael.. better than GS BUT it still wasnt up to par on how it should of been...bLAH
and GS... your structure was garbage.. you need to definetaly work on that, and you had some alright punches but i just feel like Ismael came a little bit Harder in this battle... good jobs to the both of you though.. good battle..................................
v/ Ismael...
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Meta. Convicts
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oh yes and sorry for the double post but it wont let me edit... but RETURN THE FAVOR...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140943
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^^^^is yaw 4 real?
yo threatin a nigga aint a punch ppl!!!!!!
and it seemed like he jus said words that rhymed jus cuz dey rhymed...
but nethier was dat bad or good
but i seemed 2 like GS's more cuz better PUNCHES not threats...
and dat don't look like a newb structure 2 me..... lol
nice struc ismael tho... even tho it look like u been here a while...
but still vote/ghettoshakes
can't poll yet doe
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slept on battle
how bout returnin da favor ppl......... both if possible
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uppin 2...
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