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Last edited by L.I.; August 1st, 2004 at 02:31 PM
Last edited by Kon Quest; August 1st, 2004 at 12:24 PM
Toss this herb....my punches leaving your jaw concerned
I mean, shit....even his open mics are at a loss for words
I'll have you speaking Espanol....shit, you even felt my wrath
Cause I drug you across the border and left your el eye black
Got L.I feeling crabby.....his verse is just wack, ya got the boos
A bottom feeder...even his sig is just a fraction of the crew's
Laughing at ya dude.....I even got your head full of doubts
It's like the pussy's on lock.....cause he'll never pull it out
Damn kid, this is a man's game.....while you're just a fake lyricist
Dawg, listen to me....cause your bitchass just ain't here in it
This guy dont use skills he just does it like the nike swoosh...
His lines rep pussy shit.. thats why they call him a douche...
Looked for personals but it seemed his mouth was chompin a rag...
He aint much for words, so he joined a crew that'll use the "tags"...get it?
Goin for the kill against this kid.. seriously he says he don's a purse...
The way I have him walking with jesus, you'd think he's at a kanye concert...
Givin a heads up hes DQ'd.. cause all his hits are low blows...
He's showing off nothing.. like a carjacked autoshow...
Maybe focus on your audio cause text aint earnin you respect...
Can boast on herb site but here your....just a Relaunched reject...
bad battle for LI...
you came weak....
This guy dont use skills he just does it like the nike swoosh...
His lines rep pussy shit.. thats why they call him a douche...
no
Looked for personals but it seemed his mouth was chompin a rag...
He aint much for words, so he joined a crew that'll use the "tags"...get it?
nope.
Goin for the kill against this kid.. seriously he says he don's a purse...
The way I have him walking with jesus, you'd think he's at a kanye concert...
didnt hit.
Givin a heads up hes DQ'd.. cause all his hits are low blows...
He's showing off nothing.. like a carjacked autoshow...
better, still wack. good meta tho
Maybe focus on your audio cause text aint earnin you respect...
Can boast on herb site but here your....just a Relaunched reject...
decent personal, punch didnt hit
come wittier next time. weak verse.
kon
Toss this herb....my punches leaving your jaw concerned
I mean, shit....even his open mics are at a loss for words
lol decent.
I'll have you speaking Espanol....shit, you even felt my wrath
Cause I drug you across the border and left your el eye black
nice little name play
Got L.I feeling crabby.....his verse is just wack, ya got the boos
A bottom feeder...even his sig is just a fraction of the crew's
decent.
Laughing at ya dude.....I even got your head full of doubts
It's like the pussy's on lock.....cause he'll never pull it out
decent, but played conxept
Damn kid, this is a man's game.....while you're just a fake lyricist
Dawg, listen to me....cause your bitchass just ain't here in it
nahhhhhh...
u didnt come too bad, enough to win,
vote - kon. for obvious reasons
L.I. = Your punches weren't so great..neither were your meta's..didnt see much wordplay that "stood out"..lol..not much creativity involved..i think you could come better than this...
Kon Quest = nice meta's...and good punches and personals..much more wittier than L.I's verse..which i felt was a key factor to you winnin this..
Vote - Kon Quest
LI you need to read up on other peeps verses in LLL n Jr.
seriously, don't ever come like that again.
Kon took it because there's no way he could of lost to that verse.
Kon you came halfway decent, some ok punches
vote - Kon
L.I- Blah. your punches were that. none hit at all.
Kon- decent. won because his verse sucked
v/kon
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
v/ Kon
LI... I'm hoping you didn't try all that hard ... a bit dissapointing. Gotta elevate the wordplay/wit, come with more hardhitting stuff.
Last Word
I must last... word
L.I
This guy dont use skills he just does it like the nike swoosh...
His lines rep pussy shit.. thats why they call him a douche...
wack opener
Looked for personals but it seemed his mouth was chompin a rag...
He aint much for words, so he joined a crew that'll use the "tags"...get it?
actually...no I don't get it
Goin for the kill against this kid.. seriously he says he don's a purse...
The way I have him walking with jesus, you'd think he's at a kanye concert...
a little better, but not real hard
Givin a heads up hes DQ'd.. cause all his hits are low blows...
He's showing off nothing.. like a carjacked autoshow...
not bad...not good...
Maybe focus on your audio cause text aint earnin you respect...
Can boast on herb site but here your....just a Relaunched reject...
ehhh
verse coulda been a lot better, but might have been good compared to ur competition
kon quest
Toss this herb....my punches leaving your jaw concerned
I mean, shit....even his open mics are at a loss for words
not good...not wack tho
I'll have you speaking Espanol....shit, you even felt my wrath
Cause I drug you across the border and left your el eye black
lol...kinda witty actually...
Got L.I feeling crabby.....his verse is just wack, ya got the boos
A bottom feeder...even his sig is just a fraction of the crew's
not really good...
Laughing at ya dude.....I even got your head full of doubts
It's like the pussy's on lock.....cause he'll never pull it out
kinda played...and not hard hitting anyway
Damn kid, this is a man's game.....while you're just a fake lyricist
Dawg, listen to me....cause your bitchass just ain't here in it
....I'm assuming u were showing off a 3 syllable rhyme talent or something...b/c the punch sucked...
decent verse for the most part, the closer was awful though...had a funny spanish line tho...
V/ Kon Quest...
I.J.L.
On the closer I was trying to play on being here in the game.....and hearing it when I said listen to me......I guess I didn't really word it right since no one got it
^ okay then ill explain my 2nd bar you HOE!..
his crews quotables so i say theyd use the ""<>-- quote tags
LOL.....I got that punch....don't know why Rapid didn't. Anyway....I wouldn't have explained it, but this one looked like it was over, so I was just pointing out my punch that no one got. I even said I worded it wrong......don't get all bent outta shape
*bends back into shape*...i wasnt
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