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<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>IJL & DWI</table>
Dozen shots with one verse.. i hate to merk one of my own
But hell.. you aint no brethren.. ya just his fucking clone
I`m in the zone.. while Mac falls short of the mark each time
Trips at the idea of losing.. so i leave him a mountain to climb
Duke used to tap his foot.. impatiently waiting to give it a try
Missed ya chance.. patiently elevating while i passed you by
On my way to the top.. test me? Kid`s a rung on the ladder
I chose to take the piss.. you just can`t control ya bladder
So i burn an scatter.. ya ashes to all four corners of the earth
Ya went out on a limb.. while twelve from mine put you in a hearse
You`re a disgrace.. the only thing you cause in LLL is IJL to blush
Maybe a win was on the cards.. `til i gave ya shit the royal flush.
<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>IJL & DWI</table>
yoyoyoyyoyyocheckcheckcheckitoutcommoncommonyoyoyo .
Hot chick in your av..someone like that you couldn't match..
..but you've got plenty of dolls in your stable..Barbies & Cabbage Patch.
Illtalic who..I'll demolish your reputation with a kick..
..'n sure you're a monster..looking like Charleze Theron in her flick.
When it comes to whackness..you deliver in hoards..
..and on RB you'll NEVER be kinged..like endless checker boards.
2-0? your record reminds people of my own, but w/e..
..kinda like your style, punches, structure, etc.
I'm quick to bruise whack herbs..that's why you're black and blue..
..dumb kid..i'd need to toss you board games for you to catch a Clue.
I slice kids to pieces..'specially when they often drop duds..
..'n now you're knee-deep in shit...e.g your own blood..
/v up people.
Not too bad of a battle...
Ill came sorta hard, with decent ersonals and some stand out punches...
Mac came wittier though, with pretty decent personals and punches...
So...
v/mac
Yeah both came extremely well.
I thought this was one of the best battles of the week.
But Illtalic came out good, but i felt he fell off towards the end. But the closer was good. Opener was fine and the Structure was good. Not stretched. Punches connected. personals were ok.
Mac came really good though. His verse was good and his punches connected more than Illtalic's did. I was surprized with this outcome. I think mac just took it cuz he made me laugh more. Good punches by you.
V/mac
good battle fellas.....but my vote goes to macabre
Explaination - good verses dropped by both..decent punches....hittin personals...nice wordplay things of that nature...my vote goes to macabre because against illtalics' verse his was more interesting to read..funnier or wittier howeva u wish to say it... that pulled the battle out for macabre..that and that ill broke off toward the middle end of the verse...good battle fellas.
B/s.
RealiM thinks he can vote with one sentence.
An who the fuck is that above this post?!
<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>IJL & DWI</table>
I don't agree with RealiM, Illtalic's punches hit harder, really.
Mac came dope too, but Illtalic had a great use of personals. Flow was alright with both verses. But anyhoo...
V/Illtalic
^^^ you guys better break down more... or I'll shit on you all
Illtalic:
Dozen shots with one verse.. i hate to merk one of my own
But hell.. you aint no brethren.. ya just his fucking clone
feeling it... 7/10
I`m in the zone.. while Mac falls short of the mark each time
Trips at the idea of losing.. so i leave him a mountain to climb
decent... 7/10
Duke used to tap his foot.. impatiently waiting to give it a try
Missed ya chance.. patiently elevating while i passed you by
iffy... 5/10
On my way to the top.. test me? Kid`s a rung on the ladder
I chose to take the piss.. you just can`t control ya bladder
halfway..5/10
So i burn an scatter.. ya ashes to all four corners of the earth
Ya went out on a limb.. while twelve from mine put you in a hearse
feeling... 7/10
You`re a disgrace.. the only thing you cause in LLL is IJL to blush
Maybe a win was on the cards.. `til i gave ya shit the royal flush.
nice finish...8/10
Decent verse all in all Got 39/60
Macabre:
Hot chick in your av..someone like that you couldn't match..
..but you've got plenty of dolls in your stable..Barbies & Cabbage Patch.
nope... 3/10
Illtalic who..I'll demolish your reputation with a kick..
..'n sure you're a monster..looking like Charleze Theron in her flick.
bah... not feeling, ya flow changed too much also... 4/10
When it comes to whackness..you deliver in hoards..
..and on RB you'll NEVER be kinged..like endless checker boards.
a little bit better... 5/10
2-0? your record reminds people of my own, but w/e..
..kinda like your style, punches, structure, etc.
Wasted line??? Rhymed well but nothing... 2/10
I'm quick to bruise whack herbs..that's why you're black and blue..
..dumb kid..i'd need to toss you board games for you to catch a Clue.
Tight... 8/10
I slice kids to pieces..'specially when they often drop duds..
..'n now you're knee-deep in shit...e.g your own blood..
cool...7/10
Got 27/60... wasted a few lines I thought
Vote - Illtalic
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
decent battle but I was feelin Mac's shit more... wittier
and that w/e - ect. punch had an edge to it, somethin about it hit hard, but just more consistant, better punches
vote - Mac
oooooh..this is tight. Keep voting peeps
Since you're both my boys...I must vote...=)
Illtalic's Verse: 31/60Originally Posted by illtalic
Notes:
Punches were good at times...but some of them couldve been better if you would've thought up a better concept or flip for them....otherwise nothing too bad...
Macabre's Verse: 29/60
Notes:
Your punches were kinda off then on....best lines were the endless checkers and the closer...the rest was either played...or almost weak....in other words...try working on your consistency...and thinking up better concepts...dont type the first thing that comes to mind...
BreakDown
Punches - illtalic
Metaphors - illtalic....not as old
Personals - Tie
Overall - illtalic took this by a small margin in the points...and it looks like a large margin in the breakdown...but it's a bit closer than iam saying....Macabre had lines that were awful in some parts...but made up for it with a few lines....illtalic had halfway good punches all throughout and about one or two hard ones...which is what pulled him through in my opinion...
Vote - illtalic
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"I`m in the zone.. while Mac falls short of the mark each time
Trips at the idea of losing.. so i leave him a mountain to climb"
"You`re a disgrace.. the only thing you cause in LLL is IJL to blush
Maybe a win was on the cards.. `til i gave ya shit the royal flush."
Both ill lines from illtalic. Wasn't feeling much more, but these lines were decent.
"..and on RB you'll NEVER be kinged..like endless checker boards.
2-0? your record reminds people of my own, but w/e..
..kinda like your style, punches, structure, etc.
I'm quick to bruise whack herbs..that's why you're black and blue..
..dumb kid..i'd need to toss you board games for you to catch a Clue."
Nice from Macebre. I also felt like the monster and doll line were decent concepts that were worded horrible. I enjoyed his verse more so he has my vote.
v/Macabre
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