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Artificial Intelligence.
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Artificial Intelligence.
Fuck dizz, this battle is worthless
I could hold up my loose leaf like a dummy..
..n' he still couldn't tackle my verses
I do this for fun, n' scold him for practice
He got his whole crew in his sig..
..n' bolded the Wackest
Fuck ya pic, fuck ya style, n' fuck a crooked cap
Cuz its not that i dont get the line in ya sig..
..I just dont get which mirror your lookin at!
But fuck the core, I'm smashin the liner
Cuz you couldn't size me up..
..if you were a fuckin fasion designer
I'm givin the visuals, cuz he's late on the scenics
I'd say you'll have better luck next time but..
..He didn't even make the season (LLL)
He's greedy with shit, I cant stand this clown
Cuz what i call a punch to the face..
..He calls a hand me down
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Last edited by Auspicious; June 3rd, 2004 at 06:59 PM
Artificial Intelligence.
crack ur skullz, leave ur head bouncin wit me
leave u down on ur luck like bobby before witney
sdiddy run the city, aus barely has a town
have u pickin up slacks like a samesex wedding gown
im the best around, ima give u da quick fix
this dudes two faced like the wayons in white chix
lines 7 and are filler, yes i copied ur verse
i mean ur styles so basic, itd be the same in reverse
9 and 10 come next, starting to sound like jkwon
merk merk merk.......... im startin to sing ur song
.. im back
alright upping....... elite front lines is very inactive
.. im back
Vote - Aus
Easily .. Aus was just on the clownin' tip .. Nice witty punches .. Better verse hands down .. And I know sdizzle didn't call himself sdiddy .. WTF .. No man .. Ur forcin' ur ideas for punches too .. Tryna make a punch outta a concept that ain't there .. Aus' sig play was murder .. LoL .. Shit had me gone .. Easy battle to judge ..
A.i
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aus got this...i felt he came way harder than sdizzle...
sdizzle just threw a bunch of shit together and hoped,
it was good but it fell off as being kinda half assed...
i felt the punches from aus they came together well...
didnt really feel sdizzles punchlines they came bland...
sdizzle had good flow though and ok rhymescene...
but it didnt help him much...he needed direct hits...
he needed better personals...his were blah n some points...
overall vote/aus...he came with the better verse...
hit my battles up please when u get some time...
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aus overall stayed concistant with quite creaty witty punches...and came personal pretty goot at times
sdizzle stay in front lines
vote-aus
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Aus got it...
Way better punches, personals...Everything...
Is there really need for explanation...?
Besides, sdizzle, you gotta work on your punches, some had nice wordplay, but they didn't really hit that hard...
Also, you need to incorporate personals too...
Vote=Auspicious
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Artificial Intelligence.
Hit this for me, will ya?
Vicious clowning by Aus...
Dizzle had a few nice concepts...
"whitney" "white chicks"...
But they were worded weakly, and weren't at all effective.
Aus tore it up with personals and wordplay.
Just brutalized him.
Peace
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Edit: They're not falling off, man, they're obvious. You should really save that kinda strictness for a closer battle, dude.
Peace
Last edited by Born To Kill; June 7th, 2004 at 03:42 PM
ageed, should let him have the win.... dont let it drag out
.. im back
n' plus its elite FL .. we barely get
votes in here, so any votes we get should
count.. unless its a blatant d.r.
Artificial Intelligence.
Auspicious took this easily. I don't know about personals, but when it comes to flat out punches...it was clear cut who the winner is. Auspicious had a much stronger verse with much harder hitting punches. Better concepts, flow, everything outshined sdizzle. Is this sdizzle dude really what this site calls Elite? If so, damn. Anyway, Aus took this no doubt. I can't poll vote, but I have a battle going on in this forum. Figured I'm supposed to put some votes in
Vote ~ Auspicious
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