MW Title: Born To Kill (2-0) vs. Mr W.Rite (2-1)

[Richard Parker]

Verses due Friday 11:59 PM
Check In by Wednesday dudes.
Verses must be 10-20 lines,
Agree on it w/ your opponent.

[Mr W.Rite]

hi born i say somewhere between 12-16
cool...

[Born To Kill]

12-16...

Yep.

G'luck...

21 Grams vs. Ochoa

Walter Wall vs. Com

[Born To Kill]

W.Rite’s posed for attack, but he’s nothin, let’s be frank…
Cuz as I try ta paint his portrait, I just keep drawin blanks.
And he’s so far back from me, no way this kid contends…
He can only picture us equal, with the help of a zoom lens.
It’s ironic he’s washed up, cuz the dam in his sig killed flow…
And yet he earns a title shot, after losing 2 weeks in a row?
He was beaten down by Aisle 5, then Com wins via no show…
Seems W.Rite could even bite as long as he stays Feeble’s ho!
And it’s true he fucked ya bad, by already naming me…
LLL’s Middleweight Champion, cuz ya just a formality.
Meaning ya weak, already beat, and now respect’s taking flight…
RB’s mistake’s will now inflate, cuz no one’ll wanna be W.Rite.
I’ve cornered tha market on humor, my portfolio on Mr. ain’t thin…
W.Rite’s such a laughing stock, peeps have started to invest in him!
Listen ta everyone cheer when the belt’s on my waist next…
Cuz it’ll look way better here then on a fuckin waste of text.

[Mr W.Rite]

Whored you before, but its all for not, cus even when this dude dies
Wackness wont be extinct, his mom refuses to get her tubes tied
The truth lies in your text, skills died, so go ahead and grieve bitch
And its sad when Hence Forward and a 1-2 victory’s your greatest achievement
Had ya chance to shine, increase ya winning streak, and he blew it
I’d throw shots at your wife, but judging from her pic
………someone already beat me to it
Loss record is on the rise, seems your career is nearly shattered
Just shows, this dude aint been dope since post count really mattered
I knew you had a twisted family, some may be appauled when I mentioned
Wifey wasn’t mad ya got raped, but jealous you’re getting all the attention
I admire you though, frontliners approve, you must take pride in your votes
The type who only gets a thumbs up from guys on the side of the road
His verses put you to sleep, known for clearing the room when he speaks
If i’m the bred winner, guess Born and family wont be eatin for weeks

[Mystery~Murdera]

Since I've been here BTK has much improved.
And on first glance I think he won this battle...

umm... you had quite a few played lines but
I think the personals took it. BTk worded his
personals better and carried them off witier.
I think his punches held more impact. And
Mr Writes stretched bars took away from
his verse to me. The flow of the whole thing
was eh....

vote - BTK

[Mr W.Rite]

^thanks MM..didnt expect to even get a vote that fast..
by the way nice verse Born
we'll see what happens from here

0-1 B2k...

[Born To Kill]

Returning the props, W.Rite...

Respect to ya.

[Erupt]

this was a very nice battle.... I'm gonna have to go through each bar coz i see it close as hell.....


W.Rite’s posed for attack, but he’s nothin, let’s be frank…
Cuz as I try ta paint his portrait, I just keep drawin blanks.
7/10
And he’s so far back from me, no way this kid contends…
He can only picture us equal, with the help of a zoom lens.
6/10
It’s ironic he’s washed up, cuz the dam in his sig killed flow…
And yet he earns a title shot, after losing 2 weeks in a row?
7/10
He was beaten down by Aisle 5, then Com wins via no show…
Seems W.Rite could even bite as long as he stays Feeble’s ho!
8/10
And it’s true he fucked ya bad, by already naming me…
LLL’s Middleweight Champion, cuz ya just a formality.
7/10
Meaning ya weak, already beat, and now respect’s taking flight…
RB’s mistake’s will now inflate, cuz no one’ll wanna be W.Rite.
8/10
I’ve cornered tha market on humor, my portfolio on Mr. ain’t thin…
W.Rite’s such a laughing stock, peeps have started to invest in him!
6/10 (coz its really like a concept i used last week or the week before)
Listen ta everyone cheer when the belt’s on my waist next…
Cuz it’ll look way better here then on a fuckin waste of text.
8.5/10 (my favourite born 2 kill line)

=57.5



Whored you before, but its all for not, cus even when this dude dies
Wackness wont be extinct, his mom refuses to get her tubes tied
8/10
The truth lies in your text, skills died, so go ahead and grieve bitch
And its sad when Hence Forward and a 1-2 victory’s your greatest achievement
6/10
Had ya chance to shine, increase ya winning streak, and he blew it
I’d throw shots at your wife, but judging from her pic
………someone already beat me to it
7/10
Loss record is on the rise, seems your career is nearly shattered
Just shows, this dude aint been dope since post count really mattered
7/10
I knew you had a twisted family, some may be appauled when I mentioned
Wifey wasn’t mad ya got raped, but jealous you’re getting all the attention
8.5/10
I admire you though, frontliners approve, you must take pride in your votes
The type who only gets a thumbs up from guys on the side of the road
8/10
His verses put you to sleep, known for clearing the room when he speaks
If i’m the bred winner, guess Born and family wont be eatin for weeks
7.5/10


=51


as mr write dropped less lines i'mma go on averages and the chances that mrwrite was gonna drop a line with less then 7 (which he would have to, to lose) was sumthin like 38 percent... so Mr Write Wins with a better overall verse.. but props to both... you both dropped nice verses

[$pitacular]

this was pretty good....

Born - consistantly witty punches (good to see you back on the rise) and some nice personals (liked the 'just a formality' line LOL) all in all nothing bad in your verse. Nothing was really played and it all seemed to have an edge of humor to it... decent stuff there my man

W.rite - starte dout very nice, stayed consistant through the majority with some nice punches and personals (the 'wife' and 'tubes tied' punches were dope) but then toward the end you just.... fell off for some reason. All of the sudden it was just blah.... and that's really the only reason you lost this.

Vote - B2K

pz

[21 Grams]

BTK:
W.Rite’s posed for attack, but he’s nothin, let’s be frank…
Cuz as I try ta paint his portrait, I just keep drawin blanks.
And he’s so far back from me, no way this kid contends…
He can only picture us equal, with the help of a zoom lens.

-Good shit. Lol@drawing blanks.

"Meaning ya weak, already beat, and now respect’s taking flight…
RB’s mistake’s will now inflate, cuz no one’ll wanna be W.Rite.
I’ve cornered tha market on humor, my portfolio on Mr. ain’t thin…
W.Rite’s such a laughing stock, peeps have started to invest in him!"

-Lol

The Feebs line was aight, closer was cool too. Good verse.

Write:
Had ya chance to shine, increase ya winning streak, and he blew it
I’d throw shots at your wife, but judging from her pic
………someone already beat me to it

-Buwahahaha!!! The lines before this were par.

I admire you though, frontliners approve, you must take pride in your votes
The type who only gets a thumbs up from guys on the side of the road

-Lol

Overall, I think your other punches would have been a little better if they weren't stretched. Respectable verse.

I think BTK just had more funny lines throughout, and a more consistant verse, so he vets my vote.

Vote: Born To Kill

Note: I'm in BTK's crew so you can dissmis my vote, if you wish.

[Mr W.Rite]

naw man its cool.. the vote stays..
if B2k had the better verse then he deserves to win and it looks like he will be MW champ....props to him
thanks for voting

more votes would be appreciated..

[Judge Judy]

Ooo very nice match but I ain't got time to explain.

V/B2K

Close but pulled it out of the bag in this for me.
Both have elevated immensely, good idols
for us part time battlers lol.
Pz

[crimily insane]

b2k all the way good ryms from a gooood mc BIG UP YOURSELF!!!!!

[Richard Parker]

btk wins, mr write loses..