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Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
Last edited by Erupt; May 7th, 2004 at 10:57 AM
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(it would help my verse if Walter would post his pic in here... I can't link to it as it has been deleted)
Watch me gnaw on this hoar... eat the core of his mind
Coz..
Walters only got game... when I'm hoaring his rhymes...
You're in awe of my lines... You won't be smiling like your picture
Coz when THAT jaw hits the floor....... it'll be 10 on the Rictor.....
So we know who's the victor... Defend Walt coz he blows
He only stands up for himself... at his comedy shows...
When I'm comin he knows... I mean he thinks... he's the man
Wall's s'posed to support ceilings ... but can't hold up his hands...
I've heard of your demands... champ and didn't have to spit
So tell me...
How'd those goofy teeth.. not scrape on feebles dick?...
I'll give this bitch some stick...coz he's made his own bedding
Couldn't pre-pair for this fucking... with an organised wedding....
Check Deja Vu betting... their reputation that you'll cruise
I wonder why they're sweating?...when they've nothing to lose..
Nothing to bruise, The Deja Warriors can't divide us
This shits a walk in the park... and this bitch just shot Cyrus...
You can't rile this.. its evident... watch this mark crack the sediment
Walters out to prove himself.... but falls apart from lack of evidence....
You're expected to be iller but Half of Walters shit is fillers...
I'll leave you stuck to your seat... like Texas does to killers....
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Twenty lines til ur death and I wont even come hard
You’re a HW?
LLL lowered its standards…almost as much as ur guard
Always whining and bitching, give it a rest good grief
U won the gauntlet? Then the English dont have bad teeth
Im sarcastic, ur wack its about time you learn thanks
Com fuckin comes with more cum lines than sperm banks
If you're original, then text battling as a whole is dead
But com's a vet..........just consult his tryout thread
Been doin this for years, still will till you’re ripe old
But u fucking suck at text, even your blood type is typo
Merk squad dosen't want you! U gotta be dope you see
U've been known to come ill, but then u dropped the e
I’ve heard all ya lines before, your droppin morse code
I’m a crossing guard, I stop kids like you by the busload
Your dope? Naw, fraid not; rumours are simply fallacies
I know ur wack….
Wouldn’t even think twice if u had multiple personalities
Two faced kid hasn’t quit yet, shit you need to face fates
U couldn’t get a pound for ya 2 cents if u spit exchange rates
Fuckin backpacker nerd, wanna be dope? change is vital
Walt left you needin new books…cuz I just took your title
Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever
^post your pic ho..
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still no votes??
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This battle is close as fuck....
But, I read the verses like 4 times over and Walt gets my vote...Com started off aiight with the rictor line, than fell off after that, then it was nice again with the stand up for himself line, and the rest of the lines were kinda 'eh' lines, where they coulda been tighter.. Walt didnt start off too hard but then he had some nice ass lines that were in tyhe middle of his verse and it finished all the way strong...
V/Walt
7th|SEVENTH MOVEMENT|7th
this was close
neither came bad but neither cam extremely dope either
overall this was a good read
i really enjoyed Com last couple of bars, the "evidence" line was my favorite
he was pretty consistent throughout his verse, but i felt most was just average
the same for Walt... i understand he hasnt battled for a while, but he was average too
but he did have a few stand out line, like the opener i thought was good
and the 'Come Ill" line was nice, didnt get it at first but i read it a few times and thought it was tight
anyway i am going to vote walt on this one too
i was feelin his verse a little more than Com's verse
i would like to personally thank both of you for post a verse
unlike half the league.. but that theme is getting redudant
*shakes head*
but yea v/walter
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Com...
Watch me gnaw on this hoar... eat the core of his mind
Coz..
Walters only got game... when I'm hoaring his rhymes...
hum... didn't like... was pretty simple and blah... sorry C...
You're in awe of my lines... You won't be smiling like your picture
Coz when THAT jaw hits the floor....... it'll be 10 on the Rictor.....
these have been used 2389042384 times... played sorry...
So we know who's the victor... Defend Walt coz he blows
He only stands up for himself... at his comedy shows...
stand up lines are played... sorry...
When I'm comin he knows... I mean he thinks... he's the man
Wall's s'posed to support ceilings ... but can't hold up his hands...
could have been worded MUCH better... don't like...
I've heard of your demands... champ and didn't have to spit
So tell me...
How'd those goofy teeth.. not scrape on feebles dick?...
actually... nice... I like...
I'll give this bitch some stick...coz he's made his own bedding
Couldn't pre-pair for this fucking... with an organised wedding....
uh... I don't like it... not played or anything... just don't like it...
Check Deja Vu betting... their reputation that you'll cruise
I wonder why they're sweating?...when they've nothing to lose..
this is a flipped Avalon line... *shrugs shoulders* wasn't hard hitting either...
Nothing to bruise, The Deja Warriors can't divide us
This shits a walk in the park... and this bitch just shot Cyrus...
lmao best line from you...
You can't rile this.. its evident... watch this mark crack the sediment
Walters out to prove himself.... but falls apart from lack of evidence....
*sigh* could have been worded better...
You're expected to be iller but Half of Walters shit is fillers...
I'll leave you stuck to your seat... like Texas does to killers....
eh... heard similar shit before... sorry...
2.5...
Walter...
Twenty lines til ur death and I wont even come hard
You’re a HW?
LLL lowered its standards…almost as much as ur guard
booooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
Always whining and bitching, give it a rest good grief
U won the gauntlet? Then the English dont have bad teeth
LMAO... nice personal... good punch...
Im sarcastic, ur wack its about time you learn thanks
Com fuckin comes with more cum lines than sperm banks
eh... I'm impartial... it's a cum line... but it's a reference cum line...
If you're original, then text battling as a whole is dead
But com's a vet..........just consult his tryout thread
lmao... nice... ask a MS member...
Been doin this for years, still will till you’re ripe old
But u fucking suck at text, even your blood type is typo
nice... I liked...
Merk squad dosen't want you! U gotta be dope you see
U've been known to come ill, but then u dropped the e
*shrugs shoulders*
I’ve heard all ya lines before, your droppin morse code
I’m a crossing guard, I stop kids like you by the busload
LMAO this is probably the best line I've seen in awhile...
Your dope? Naw, fraid not; rumours are simply fallacies
I know ur wack….
Wouldn’t even think twice if u had multiple personalities
played... but I like...
Two faced kid hasn’t quit yet, shit you need to face fates
U couldn’t get a pound for ya 2 cents if u spit exchange rates
lmao again nice n' witty...
Fuckin backpacker nerd, wanna be dope? change is vital
Walt left you needin new books…cuz I just took your title
clincher... I probably wouldn't use it as a closer... but good...
4.5..
Winner: Walt... just more consistent... better lines...
Tag'D
Legend: Merk Squad
Read this battle a couple times. It was pretty close, but this is how I see it.
Com:
"You're in awe of my lines... You won't be smiling like your picture
Coz when THAT jaw hits the floor....... it'll be 10 on the Rictor.....
So we know who's the victor... Defend Walt coz he blows
He only stands up for himself... at his comedy shows.."
-Good shit here.
You can't rile this.. its evident... watch this mark crack the sediment
Walters out to prove himself.... but falls apart from lack of evidence....
-Good shit.
Besides those, you have a few Ok lines throughout your verse. Decent shit.
Walt:
Twenty lines til ur death and I wont even come hard
You’re a HW?
LLL lowered its standards…almost as much as ur guard
-Good shit.
Im sarcastic, ur wack its about time you learn thanks
Com fuckin comes with more cum lines than sperm banks
If you're original, then text battling as a whole is dead
But com's a vet..........just consult his tryout thread
Been doin this for years, still will till you’re ripe old
But u fucking suck at text, even your blood type is typo
-Decent shit. The Typo line was ill. Would have been better if you cut out the "type" after "blood"
Your dope? Naw, fraid not; rumours are simply fallacies
I know ur wack….
Wouldn’t even think twice if u had multiple personalities
-Should have been worded better, but this was decent.
Very close battle, but Walt's was a little more enjoyable, overall.
Vote: Walter Wall
oh well Walt wins...... well done you fuckin ho
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im not voting... but i will give some feedback
You can't rile this.. its evident... watch this mark crack the sediment
Walters out to prove himself.... but falls apart from lack of evidence....
nice..
Been doin this for years, still will till you’re ripe old
But u fucking suck at text, even your blood type is typo
dope..
props.
Great battle here...
Props to both for the effort, it entertained.
I've got 3 quotables from Com...
"Wedding", "Cyrus" (ultra mega props for the Warriors reference), and the "evidence" lines were really nice.
But Walt came up with...
The opener, the "teeth" line, "typo", "busload" and "exchange rates"...
Just too many from Walt.
He wins.
Peace
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