HW title: Feeble Minded(8-4) vs. Avalon(10-1)

[Richard Parker]

check in's by: wednesday.
verses due: friday, 12 am Eastern Time.
Read LLL rules. Read LLL announcement.
Agree on line limit in check in.

[Richard Parker]

Checking In. How Many Av .. 18 ?

[Allen McGregor]

20... this is a HW match...





















why are you here..?


^ you can use that in a punch...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...17#post1183217
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post1183223
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post1183228
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post1183239
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113519

[Richard Parker]

no personals & ya punches suck, but your flow is the worst
reverse in goes always career ya how symbolizes line this..
your not creative, & u know you'll lose so u damn competing,
and Av's a poetic expert, but he still can't stanza beating ..
ya blown & dispersed, average at text, its vowed in stone,
i'd still read "dope" turned the opposite way, like im a palindrome..
i'll kill you with lyrical dopeness, he's shitty & far from it,
& Av'll die quick Aztecs fire, like Indian arsonists,
i blow ya away, have to call for someone to git the medic,
cuz only way you can split Mind, is if your Schizophrenic,
& my chem experiment, shows i'll leave you raped & dead,
but ya face has so much acne, it'd turn the Litmus Paper red,
there's no repercussions, when i renounce & step on whores,
and a vacuum just describes the contents of av's repertoire,
your banned under ya other name, you were tested & blew it,
& you were nicknamed island cuz you do best in seclusion ..
we have mutual enmity, cuz this Brit's fighting is wack,
we kicked ya'll out in 1776 & no one fucking invited you back ..

[Allen McGregor]

(Feeble's sig...)
LLL tourney winner.
LLL HW title holder.
Deja Vu, bitch(es).

hiphopscotch420: feeble whored sum one for once (ref. line 6...)



Fuck tryin on this kid... he feels at home with the dick,
n' his verse was about bad as... all the goals in his sig...
Feeb's stop while you're ahead... drop the mouse n jet,
cause voters give less care... than project housin gets...
when it comes to the belt,
Mythsofmind: i dont feel like holding the title anymore anyway
hiphopscotch420: he just whored himself...
son you ready to test text... n' clash with vet champs,
well get ya feet wet... n' they'll fuckin match ya pants...
I posted ya dealt wit... really Feeb's cant get with me,
ya sister is a winner,
only way you'll have a hand on victory...
Quote me: Feeble knows talent... but this son's a bum,
although he's top of the damn line.. that I hung him from...
don't play... stand back... cause... Verb'll add fire to this,
n' scare ya fuckin race back out the gas pumpin business...
Feeb ya think ya to dope... but uh with ya last appraoch,
losings a laughin matter... so now you can take the joke...
and if he beats me clearly it's nothing he's written recent,
voters stuck to Feebs past, back when you were decent...
I'll beat your ass Feeble... n' leave all ya 2 friend n' shock,
I just pist'on this square
...........................................like a fuckin engine block...







Thanks for holdin my belt...

[Chrit.]

Umm...
Feeble came weaker than expected...
That first bar was incredibly played as a concept.
Had a few other played bars as well.
Also a few good quotables

Verb came much more consitent...
Nice quotables with only 1 or two played concepts....


Vote- Verb

[SmokaJoka]

^Agree....

Feeble had some good lines.....and some old ones....Av. came with better punches, harder personals, and nice wittiness....here's some quotables...

QUOTABLES:

Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
your not creative, & u know you'll lose so u damn competing,
and Av's a poetic expert, but he still can't stanza beating ..

^Nice..lol

Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
your banned under ya other name, you were tested & blew it,
& you were nicknamed island cuz you do best in seclusion ..

^nice personal....your opener was tight too...

Originally Posted by Verbal Kent
Quote me: Feeble knows talent... but this son's a bum,
although he's top of the damn line.. that I hung him from...

^LoL....funny

Originally Posted by Verbal Kent
and if he beats me clearly it's nothing he's written recent,
voters stuck to Feebs past, back when you were decent...
I'll beat your ass Feeble... n' leave all ya 2 friend n' shock,
I just pist'on this square
...........................................like a fuckin engine block...

^first two lines = nice personal and funny....last two was dope

Punches - Verbal
Personals - Verbal
Opener - Feeble
Closer - Verbal
Overall - Verbal wins this with harder hits and more up to date metas....Feeble had niceness in some parts....but others just made it look like he couldnt care less if he won or lost...

Vote - Verbal aka Av.

peace

[Sand]

i vote for feeble minded.

he came waaay more original
and consistent, av had played
lines and concepts that have
been soooo overused in the rbl
it isn't even funny. but you both
did come out with above average
verses for an rb battle, so i give
you props for that. but yeah...

v. feeble minded.

[Auspicious]

ima have to go wit av
i mean feeble came deff less dope than he usually does.
his first lines were very blah, but he did pick it up torwards
the end.. should have had punches in the beginning like
the end of your verse was

verbal just came off with more consistency. i few blah lines
but more good lines than anything. He just hit you harder
here feebs. More personals also.

v/ Verbal

[Wise Ways]

Hmm...aight battle...
I was expecting more from feeble though
He came a lil lacking in punches
Ya repetoire line was good..

But Av had a more solid verse...
Better and way more punches
Was more consistant with them too
Tha closer was nice..same with tha pants, and project line
sorry feebs..Av got this

v/ Verbal

[Mystery~Murdera]

I found Feeb just a little too played. I dont
think he came like Feeble this week, Just
Feeble this week.

Av took this with a more solid verse. Both
of you have came better. Thats not even
needed to be said. You both know this was
sub-par for y'a'll.

vote - av

[Walter Wall]

Feeble wasn't that bad
but it was nothing
compared to the last few weeks
the stanza and a couple other punches were dope
but there was a couple of lame ones in there too

Av didnt come as good as last week either
but still came nice
(the line, the joke and the wet punches were dope)
The one I inspired over AIM was dope.....Im hiphopscotch

overall, av was wittier, more consistent and all that good stuff

Vote - Verbal

[Erupt]

oooooh i didnt really know who to vote for till the third read through and i think feeble was JUST edged out in this one,,, i agree the stanza line was dope but the first bar was a bit played and most of Av's was on point.. i liked the top of the line bar.....

so vote AV

[.Razah]

feeble:
i blow ya away, have to call for someone to git the medic,
cuz only way you can split Mind, is if your Schizophrenic,


coo, Namix did that Stanza line, bad flip..


Verb guy had all aight lines


so, vote = him for consistency

[Chrit.]

Av wins 11-1 and becomes HW Champ
Feeble loses 8-5