When I Speak...

[Kaos Theory]

...When I speak..I make warmth basically retreat
Breeze takes over tha sky..& dilutes all tha heat
When I speak in this tone..I turn water to chrome
A milk deffinecy..like a lack of calcium in ya bones
...I make em weak when I speak..oceans spread
Kaos'll turn clear blue sea's into deep colors of red
Just by sticking in a wooden staff in from my hand
Make a person that wife just died..start to laugh
Make tha over confiedent assholes suddenly gasp
Think this is Picasso art..instead of a kid who raps
Use mics as a paint brush..make colors with a touch
Feels like someone who gets migranes..a head rush
& its more than just words from a useless mouth
Lowest tones combined with high talent equals clouds
Thats where you can find me spraying my lyrics
Creating energy waves so powerful you can't get near it
Words jump from cloud to cloud..hop about tha O-zone
My words are tha difference between all chromazones
Make you scream like that Culken kid from Home Alone
OD sniffing herion..like Pulp Fiction..you'll foam out
They make mute people..yell..sing..jump & shout
It echos off walls..& hits mass..where it down plays
& soaks in tha volume..& it stores all my sound waves
I spit rock hard..or I could spit smooth as linen
I've only touched upon this..its just tha beginning

..keyed..enjoy..

[Kaos Theory]

Thanks yall..
Much Apriciated

[FormulaMC]

Pretty Nice For A Key, Although Self Loathing Is Getting Old Quick In This Forum. Some Of The Lines Were Nice. . But Damn You, You Played One Of My Lines. .

Think this is Picasso art..instead of a kid who raps

I've Obtained A Tongue Similar To Picasso. . . .
. . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. .
^ ^ Me from "Can You Feel Me ?"

I Should E-Kick You. . But It's Straight. . Flow Was Good ON This, Structure Was Great. . Like I Said, Some Lines Were Nice. .

& its more than just words from a useless mouth
Lowest tones combined with high talent equals clouds
^ ^ Dope.

Keep Um Droppin, Pz.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post1168376
^ ^ Check It. . Appreciate It.

[Intoxicated]

Good shit Kaos

The fire line was fire... 2nd was nice, coulda fixed the flow a lil...3rd bar was ok...

after the first 6 lines it kinda fell off, but not by much, it was still tight but the opening was the best for me...Except the bar second from last was very dope... about the sound waves... nice drop man

wanna hit my battle wit John up...

"& its more than just words from a useless mouth
Lowest tones combined with high talent equals clouds
Thats where you can find my spraying my lyrics
Creating energy waves so powerful you can't get near it
Words jump from cloud to cloud..hop about tha O-zone
My words are tha difference between all chromazones"

^^ This part also wasnt bad...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112858

[Nic Caesar]

Thought i would speak on this

this was neat... good for a key (i like keys)

i was feelin it... the whole "When I speak" skit

shyt had me diggin it fa sho is like yeah uh uh uh yeah BOOOOIIIIIIIII... ya digg

i was diggin it... had me on tip toe... good ish dunny

Caesar - On3

[Dios de Hip Hop]

was nice... i felt it right there *open chest points at heart*
hehe shit is word. if yah feel, structure could have been helped
word choice was superb, emotions stuck but after this line
Thats where you can find me spraying my lyrics
^ i fuckin lost u... i didnt like it at all, thats why i just like the
beggning lines...then u just kind...fell off.
and formula, paccaso lines are played like woah.
from every where from everybody .so no.
ps flow of beggning was also sick.

[lunatic]

it's striaght