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Lyricallyabbusiv
Born to Kill
Check in by Friday.
10 lines max.
you know the rules.
500 post to vote.
Due by Sunday.
good luck...
ight chek chek...imma spit by sunday...maybe sooner...gotta go 2 skool....1...
Aight...
Sunday?
Please...I don't need 4 days...
Don't change anything about ya sig, avy, or whatever!
I'm serious, I'll just DQ the fuck outta you.
G'Luck.
If ya art's like ya craft at rap, Abbusiv needs growth...
Cuz if ya crime like ya rhyme, then kid, ya suck at both.
Leavin trash on walls and soon in this thread for me to read...
But after researching ya raps, I suggest ya post ya graffiti.
Ya 9 and 1 record’s off herbs, more like chickens and hens…
He faced guys that can’t fly but still got pecked by one of them.
Reppin a weak crew, and though we’re cool, I will diss Ace….
Cuz he’s always kissin my ass so much he know’s how it tastes.
Look at you disrespect kid cartoons, you really are an abuser…
Cuz Charlie Brown distracts from the fact that ya the bigger loser!
haha...damm....i really thought u wuld come better.....Originally Posted by Ambiguous
Stoppin em in his tracks,Hence,he wont go Forward,he came 2 an end..
I really dont know y u agreed 2 fight 4 a crew,dat u cant defend!
Born to kill is it?...but uve already been merked b4, 91 times ...
But after this,i'll have em more depressed,dan his crew member Dimez!
Its funny too...when you see a 34 yr old, get beat by a teen..
battlin me?ur insane,look at his brain__its as big as da space b2ween!
your shits weak,no punches or flow,while my shit flows like da Niagra
His brainz smaller dan his dik, and thats small, cuz he uses viagra!
Born to kill has died...again...the death of this emcee is untold..
a mystery HF cant unfold,cuz ya crew='s da sentence i rote in bold!*
*Hence Forward Is Wack
and about that dimez thing..i read in hf's forum dat Dimez is sad...or suttin..shes depressed bout suttin..so used it gainst em...i luv u tho dimez!
iight...uppin this easy battle..
I did come better, way better than you!
Yeah, easy for me, in fact too easy...
You're only swaying cuz you know you need to...
Now...
Just the votes, anything else gets deleted.
Peace
lmfao... born 2 kill ruled this.... the other kid seriously needs to sort out his shit....
quotables:
wow,, there isnt any
anyways.. born 2 kill obviously merked this kid.... i mean come on.... is there any explanation needed?
better vocab. better flow, better punches. better wordplay enough said
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wow
incredibly crap battle
btk just scaped t i thought
neither was pulling any great punches out the bag here..but btk had a slightly beter erse and was better sructurally
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You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection
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it's a bold statement - the new youtube
^ I have to aggree with him.
Born i have to say L got you on this man by a pubic hair..
Nothing really stood out in my eyes.. It was pretty boring to read...
^too bad ya can't poll. uppin this for my peep.
I liked this battle right here...it was fun to read!My compliments go to both of you...votes....Born to kill lives up to his name...I liked the opener...the second line had a good concept and quite a punch but unfortunetely didn't ryhme...third line was a gooood personal punch, setup and smacked very well.You could of pulled the fourth line a bit better and not diss someone else and....the closer was an ok personal......Lyricallyabbusiv I say you came pretty close but you missed out on a few things...the first line was a played played played played (do I have to go on?) crew/personal...the second was ok but I don't like disses to other people in battles,third was wack...if the fourth one was meant to be a punch you screwed up on setting it up and Niagara is the proper spelling...the bolding letters idea must be a fad in here but the last line,the closer,was too weak to compete for being even a minor punch..the setup was promising but once again you blew it!
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if you are interested...
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127387
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127115
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127702
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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^^^^Jesus this keeps happening....I'm sorry but I didn't know wasn't elegible to vote...my bad!
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Bah Born to kill wins. Not a great battle, but Born came more creative, even though it was even in my eyes. I guess both half assed this...So yeah...Born wins, but this was pretty BLAH.
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ehh... not one of BTKs better reads...
If ya art's like ya craft at rap, Abbusiv needs growth...
Cuz if ya crime like ya rhyme, then kid, ya suck at both.
ehh, not much of a diss.
Leavin trash on walls and soon in this thread for me to read...
But after researching ya raps, I suggest ya post ya graffiti.
average
Ya 9 and 1 record’s off herbs, more like chickens and hens…
He faced guys that can’t fly but still got pecked by one of them.
nah...
Reppin a weak crew, and though we’re cool, I will diss Ace….
Cuz he’s always kissin my ass so much he know’s how it tastes.
above avg diss... plus... im sure its true...
all the front lines kids love you born.
you took over my newbie dr/s!
Look at you disrespect kid cartoons, you really are an abuser…
Cuz Charlie Brown distracts from the fact that ya the bigger loser!
ehh? i guess. lol.
Stoppin em in his tracks,Hence,he wont go Forward,he came 2 an end..
I really dont know y u agreed 2 fight 4 a crew,dat u cant defend!
the second line wasnt even a punch... the first one was a bad flip on a played concept that was never good in the first place.
Born to kill is it?...but uve already been merked b4, 91 times ...
But after this,i'll have em more depressed,dan his crew member Dimez!
would be effective, if dimez was known as depressed.. ?
Its funny too...when you see a 34 yr old, get beat by a teen..
battlin me?ur insane,look at his brain__its as big as da space b2ween!
nope...don't use things like that to make punches... its played & really not a diss... there are exceptions but very rarely.
your shits weak,no punches or flow,while my shit flows like da Niagra
His brainz smaller dan his dik, and thats small, cuz he uses viagra!
an old joke? this is BTK... he may be old... but so are those lines...
Born to kill has died...again...the death of this emcee is untold..
a mystery HF cant unfold,cuz ya crew='s da sentence i rote in bold!*
ok, it was creative, but kinda lame... you should have made a punch out of the bolded words which rhymed with 'wrote in bold' , and it would have been good, depending on the punch of course. the 'hence forward is wack' thing was creative but... battles are good...when creativity is coupled with dissing... can be good with only dissing, rarely good with only creativness, if at all.
vote - born. a close battle, both were kinda boring.
iight...uppin this shit..............and mah 1st line was a personal...
and this was a crew battle...
PANDORA'S BOX VS. HENCE FORWARD!
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