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10 to 20 lines
no d/r
and useless to say no biting or feeding
I'll let you have crew votes...I don't care
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Kay
sdizzle
kapitolins
Rules
10 to 20 lines
no d/r
and useless to say no biting or feeding
I'll let you have crew votes...I don't care
Check in
Kay
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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no crew votes, for me or against.. check
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ur miles from a rap career, quit now and join rock
closed the door on his future....
...... now hes stuck tryin to knock
ur wack, but did u really need me to say ur borin?
told him hes not wanted here...
....................... so he posts in my crews forum
dropping wack verses asking us if he needs elevation
well duh....
......... like asking if orage juice needs concentration
completely insane, naw turns out that hes just out his mind
hes just dressing criss-cross......
................. no wonder his styles years behind
u coming expecting a win? how when u come with those rhymes
only way u getting wins on this board..
............... if they make a forum before front lines
u have no skills, ima keep this real, so heres the deal
u rhymes wouldn't be tight if....
................ if they were air-tight sealed
ur raps plain, i mean its the same borin shit ever day
only time u ever time u spit fire it get put out by the rain
so quit posting in shock value, ur not getting us excited
know why ur not in are crew..... cuz ur ass wasn't invited
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Ok SHOCK Value is hot but I sure hope this cat S can dizz ill
electricity can burn anything...he can't even shift chills
I'm essential in here thats why Miles_Tone is my full name
think you're fly?Man you're as flat as an imaginary air_plain
I'm a star to this, elevatin an art you just can't master
with me all you're doing is ruin you record and diss_asters
my rhyme goes On_and_on in its process to sistematically smack you
hits you once,turns and comes back for more...I call it bad_U
not even a horse shoe can help you for I strike strongly
I eat fake computer gangsters like you, ya hear mister Don_Key?
these verses are like a loaded Rod so you chickened out
now we all see rap to you is a stew_art...ain't no lifting doubts
he won't be around that much with his average word casting
better tattoo you verses' verbs on your skull 'cause when I'm done they'll be you last_ing
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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ok votes people.......... up1
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uppin 2
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SD-your verse was ok wasnt really feelin it your structure was bad your punches eh flow bad multis none personals ok
K-verse was good flow was nice structure was ok punches eh multis eh and personals were ok
fav line
SD-ur wack, but did u really need me to say ur borin?
told him hes not wanted here...
....................... so he posts in my crews forumnes
K-I'm a star to this, elevatin an art you just can't master
with me all you're doing is ruin you record and diss_asters
vote/K
Plz return the favor in a poll vote in my battle against yellow rapper
your verse was ok wasnt really feelin it your structure
^ that would be becuase its not a newb structure its way beyond newb structure
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i understood it i jus wasnt feelin it no hate
can u return the favor in my battle against Yellow rapper POLL VOTE IT plz
Nice battle guys.
dropping wack verses asking us if he needs elevation
well duh....
......... like asking if orage juice needs concentration
I'm essential in here thats why Miles_Tone is my full name
think you're fly?Man you're as flat as an imaginary air_plain
^ nice bars...
uppin for votes herre...
one up for votes...kap vs sdizzle...
thanxxxxxxxxx!
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Ok you both came pretty well i think best line from s dizzle was
ur wack, but did u really need me to say ur borin?
told him hes not wanted here...
....................... so he posts in my crews forum
that was a good line and was worded nicely
i liked yer structure and i thought it had good flo also most of yer lines were all direct diss's rather than filler lines which was good over all id give you 8/10
Ok the Other Niggas Opener was good but you finsihed it terrible
but here you had
I'm essential in here thats why Miles_Tone is my full name
think you're fly?Man you're as flat as an imaginary air_plain
but the first line i felt was more of a filler line and the second part was ok
also your structure and flo was fine
also the personal you did do didnt hit hard and it was mroe of a play on his name that didnt get worded well over all i would give you 6/10
Ok so My Vote goes to sdizzle ok holla
two up for votes...it's a tie for now....
thank you!!
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Vote - Kapit
I felt he came at the dude harder, nothing really caught my eye from either verse but Sdizzle was iusing a LOT of played old cliche crap that i dislike in verses, its like evry god damn new kid here uses that crap and the format looks horrible. Didnt like much from this battle kids, sorry. Kapit did enough to edge it.
cough up
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