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Check Ins Due By Wednesday Midnight Eastern
Verses Due By Friday Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday Midnight Eastern
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Rules.
^Read & Good Luck..
Check Ins Due By Wednesday Midnight Eastern
Verses Due By Friday Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday Midnight Eastern
checkin in for Ambitious cause he can't right now
12 lines
how do u check in for someone else
if there banned and cant check in......... its not reall ymy fault
tell him to get an alias and do it himself
cuz until he does that, i aint excepting ur check-in
call me unfair or wutever
but when i was banned, did u see me have other people check me in
but that's cuz you have no e-friends.
i had people that couldve done it...... dummy
vote - dizzle.
^ blah, check.
my voted links are on my uppn post on page 2.
12. drop soon you herb.
Dizz cant close`is mouth, and he just a chump I bight thru,
yea u try to impress people....but no1 wants to like you!
I've beat u so much it`s routine...I`ve learned to smother geeks...
......& u have an excuse to ½ ass, wen u turn the other cheek!
this herbs droppin hot, but righteous smell chicken spit quick,
besides he aint burnin' emcees, lifes just hell he's livin in it!
I expect a rest then I'm less a test wen, dizz contests & steps in,
how u droppin good wit Lyrics, wen u can't even accept his check in!
u kno u wack as fuck, but u still in denial u stuck & you staybull,
could sign to laybulls..n break one'a they legs like chairs or tables!
erybody despizes his posts......so I try'ta shut this li`l bastard up..
whiles he's jocking for position, I leave'em crushed like plastic cups!
peace
well u can choke on this punch, well atleast choke
cuz i didn't even need to drop and i still got a vote
from last week to this week, u seem to have worsened
went from sloppy to wack.. wut a simple conversion
now hes using others Lyrics, look whos befriended
u couldn't serve a punch if u were a flight attendant
get it? prolly not, not like someone dumb could
ur about as fly as paper airplanes made of wood
wow this dude is femine, a diva like diana ross
female? u were banned for BITCHing about a loss
weak fucker gets walked over more than a floormat
and thinks its "his" punches, cuz he changed the format
LoL sdizzles that was startling. That was good and it had good punches and personals in there.
wow this dude is femine, a diva like diana ross
female? u were banned for BITCHing about a loss
HAHA-
well u can choke on this punch, well atleast choke
cuz i didn't even need to drop and i still got a vote
LoL
now hes using others Lyrics, look whos befriended
u couldn't serve a punch if u were a flight attendant
haha
sdizzle you got lucky for the turn of events that happened.
I found ambitiouses verse quite good also, but he didn't have the personals that sdizzle had. I personally would hate to battle sdizzle, because everything you try to use as a personal is so god damn played. It's impossible, what kinda of mess-up gets to be the punch in a punchline in battles.
vote-sdizzle for the better personals.
Conversation...
Dizz cant close`is mouth, and he just a chump I bight thru,
yea u try to impress people....but no1 wants to like you!
played...but ok i guess
I've beat u so much it`s routine...I`ve learned to smother geeks...
......& u have an excuse to ½ ass, wen u turn the other cheek!
lol...decent
this herbs droppin hot, but righteous smell chicken spit quick,
besides he aint burnin' emcees, lifes just hell he's livin in it!
heard the punch before...decent concept
I expect a rest then I'm less a test wen, dizz contests & steps in,
how u droppin good wit Lyrics, wen u can't even accept his check in!
ok
u kno u wack as fuck, but u still in denial u stuck & you staybull,
could sign to laybulls..n break one'a they legs like chairs or tables!
lol
erybody despizes his posts......so I try'ta shut this li`l bastard up..
whiles he's jocking for position, I leave'em crushed like plastic cups!
decent
sdizzle...
well u can choke on this punch, well atleast choke
cuz i didn't even need to drop and i still got a vote
lol..i like this
from last week to this week, u seem to have worsened
went from sloppy to wack.. wut a simple conversion
ok
now hes using others Lyrics, look whos befriended
u couldn't serve a punch if u were a flight attendant
nope
get it? prolly not, not like someone dumb could
ur about as fly as paper airplanes made of wood
ok, personal
wow this dude is femine, a diva like diana ross
female? u were banned for BITCHing about a loss
heard the concept before...decent punch i guess
weak fucker gets walked over more than a floormat
and thinks its "his" punches, cuz he changed the format
played concept, punch could of been better
ok battle between both of you but i have conversation taking this
for coming more creative and a bit harder with his punches...
V/ Conversation
pz
Aiight...I aint gon judge amb's verse on playedness cuz of it bein sdizzle.
Conversion...
Dizz cant close`is mouth, and he just a chump I bight thru,
yea u try to impress people....but no1 wants to like you!
Ok personal n punch.
I've beat u so much it`s routine...I`ve learned to smother geeks...
......& u have an excuse to ½ ass, wen u turn the other cheek!
Lol good personal n punch
this herbs droppin hot, but righteous smell chicken spit quick,
besides he aint burnin' emcees, lifes just hell he's livin in it!
Nahh, not as good as other 2...
I expect a rest then I'm less a test wen, dizz contests & steps in,
how u droppin good wit Lyrics, wen u can't even accept his check in!
Great multis, made sence n nice personal/punch
u kno u wack as fuck, but u still in denial u stuck & you staybull,
could sign to laybulls..n break one'a they legs like chairs or tables!
Lol ok
erybody despizes his posts......so I try'ta shut this li`l bastard up..
whiles he's jocking for position, I leave'em crushed like plastic cups!
Weak closure...
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Da Dizzle...
well u can choke on this punch, well atleast choke
cuz i didn't even need to drop and i still got a vote
Lol good personal, not really a punch tho...
from last week to this week, u seem to have worsened
went from sloppy to wack.. wut a simple conversion
lol good personal n punch...
now hes using others Lyrics, look whos befriended
u couldn't serve a punch if u were a flight attendant
Played, but not badd
get it? prolly not, not like someone dumb could
ur about as fly as paper airplanes made of wood
Played concept bout paper planes n shit
wow this dude is femine, a diva like diana ross
female? u were banned for BITCHing about a loss
Lol good personal again
weak fucker gets walked over more than a floormat
and thinks its "his" punches, cuz he changed the format
Ok closure
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While Amb came played wit the punch concepts, i think he delivered the punches better wit good set ups and rhyme scheme. Dizzle was personal n punchin, but i feel his 2 played concepts wit no personals bars (middle 2) hurt it for him.
Vote - Amb.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
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2-1 upping
Amb no doubt came more original, and less played, dizzle ya open was just was ya glory while amb's actually hit you i like bight shit, amb with the nice use of lyric's check in, dizzle you had nice shit but played lines and open killed you i mean the attendant, and wood shit was used a whole damn lot, but nice shit with the simple conversion
vote amb