M'Fresh - "Pin The Tail" (ft. QMB)

"Pin The Tail" ft. QMB
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4933960

(don't have QMB's lyrics)

[M'Fresh verse 1]
Last name Nichols ain't even called Marc
M'Fresh yall couldn't play in my ball park
plus... My bones break sticks n stones
so my words like bricks are thrown see em hit ya dome
i'm ill as it gets so ma brilliance gets dough
til i'm sittin silly wit a million wrist glow
spillin this shit... WAOH... I get it right
I been gettin spite... tell me they been gettin nice
no... sir... I ain't really feelin that
I hear em rhymin but I ain't really hearin rap
now I'm hot and you poutin
thats cuz it's 2 Cold up here on the top a the mountain
I'm gettin shiver's i'm so cold
litlle kiddies witcha silly gimmics is so old
clones n wack names hoes that lack change
we froze so ya know pros own this rap game

[M'Fresh verse 2]
Now let the lesson be learned, My whole profession is earned
I rattle battle rappers laugh at what is left of his verse
got a perpetual urge, to speak incredible words
I dominated competition only settle fa first
I emulate to demonstrate wit a veterens curse
how I could peddle a verse, n make it better than yurs
i been clutchin this mic wit
skills to make it flip like I'm clutchin a sidekick
I get money don't test me
I am the Adoa Gretzky, hatas don't press me
tell ya camp to come and getchu
fonie homie ain't fuckin witchu flowin ain't a fuckin issue
ain't nobody scared to prove that
n ain't anutha muthafuckin pair can do that
compared to you hacks... we on a better level
never let em revel when I'm pressin n I been a rebel

uppin

str8

ite good lookin

haha

yo dawg I was feelin this

maybe vocals up just a tad....just a touch at some points.....adlib levels perfect

beat is tight

hook is tight

flow was off only at maybe 2-3 points that I could tell...thats pretty fuckin good for this site though

overall shit was str8 dawg

so whats up MFresh

ready for a collab??

let me know

yea man collab sounds good... I just need to get involved here... I like how fuckin organized this site is... it's just hard as fuck to get enough posts to vote on anything... I just saw you get on aim so I'll hit ya up fam...

uppin

ITs a seems like a battle track to me
vocab was good, and i like the topic
it had a decent hook and yall both did yalll thing

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ITs a seems like a battle track to me

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lol, this track was actually a subliminal diss to this group outa Lansing, MI called "Made Music"... but yea man thnkz for the feed

Beat was tight..flow & delivery needs work..but good drop homie...hook is a winner, it makes it a hit..ya dig

The beat: Im liken how it opens up..sounds like sum fifty beat.. or sumthan hed use or em for that fact..i dont like the drums.. an the snares or claps.. w/e needs to be picked up a but.. still coo beat still worth a listen..

The flow: On point.u got a aggressive flow.. voice is ez to listen to listen too..

Lyrics: Hook is cool.. Ur lyrics are str8 cocky swagger.. I liked this "pros own this rap game!".. the outro.. lol.. okay?..but overall decent listen.

props.

props.

Ayo this is a sick track forreal.. i agree with pro, the melody for the beat was cool but the drums were kinda shitty.. but neways, your verses were pretty hot, straight fire, cocky ass shit, get ya head bouncin, lyrics were good, not meant 2 b sophisticated so they served their purpose well.. i was really feelin that chorus, like how y'all put it 2getha.. sounded really dope.. flow was insane and in your face.. good work on the real people... keep it up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325843 hit up my track when u got a minute.

good lookin on all the feedback... i'll hit u up soon on the feedback homie...

im not really feelin this beat man it's got good bass but it's too fuckin slow for me. first dude keeps it good nice flow no hesitation on the flow nah. lyrics was decent. delivery was pretty good and emotion was pretty good too. 2nd cat flow is pretty good and some pretty witty lines in there. delivery is def dope and im feelin ya swagger man. pretty hot verses duke. overall decent track i was def feelin fresh's verses.

rtf here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...05#post5518405

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Originally Posted by M'Fresh

yea man collab sounds good... I just need to get involved here... I like how fuckin organized this site is... it's just hard as fuck to get enough posts to vote on anything... I just saw you get on aim so I'll hit ya up fam...

uppin

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Meh, I wouldnt waste your time voting on battles to be honest. A lot of the battles arent that great and dont deserve to be voted on but.. do what you gotta do.

Nice track, I like your style. Lyrics are pretty raw, not the greatest but I was into it. Good shit, peace.

good lookin to all the feedbak... uppin this