www.soundclick.com/paranoidcan
or
www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
"The Savior"
first verse: para
hook: para
2nd verse: para
3rd verse: para
beat: spontane
hit me up with some good feedback and ima get you back
www.soundclick.com/paranoidcan
or
www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
"The Savior"
first verse: para
hook: para
2nd verse: para
3rd verse: para
beat: spontane
hit me up with some good feedback and ima get you back
returnin tha favor... i like tha beat, simple but nice, flow is aight, could use a lil work, dont try to over enunciate ur words to make it flow, make it flow literally, quality is real good tho, u got a nice voice [nohomo] it jus sounds like ur readin ur verse, u should try n switch up ur flow a lil, its too repetitive n gets a lil boring, ur voice never changes, lol, but keep doin u, id love to get a track goin sometime
PM me if u interested!
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alright thanks for the feed.
good lookin on the feed returnin the favor... I like the beat... your flow is pretty nice but yea, you just need some delivery... change up ya voice so you don't sound so monotone... you did a good job of stickin to ya topic... you had the right vibe on the beat, it fit... good lookin man, just try to be more layed back but make sure to watch the monotone...
wun
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delivery is boring
lyrics were simple
nothin special here
thanks for the feed.....uppin.
uppin.......
flow wuz kewl deliever wuz ok but ya delivery in chorus wuz wack - get a new chorus
lyrics were decent in some parts - emotion wuz ok- not really feelin cuz of the chorus nothin special -- but keep workin at it
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