money money money

sell crack over money/get slapped over money
end up with your thumbs bent back over money
hit the block over money/get locked over money
thieves will run up with pistols cocked over money
fiends throb over money/ get a job over money
i will go to new york and rob Arod over money
get high with your money/people lie over money
def jam even went and signed shyne over money
people cry over money people/ people die over money
suit up in all black and driveby over money
stay strapped over money/ get slapped over money
your best friends would stab you in the back over money

EHH.....no you need to elevate alot...never rhyme the same word over and over.....look at other OM's and take notes....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158966
check this out and gimme some feed back

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

cant yall see he wanna rewrite white tee DUH

Yo it weren't bad but u need ta elevate more..dont just rhyme with one word through ya whole post...cus niggaz dont like that on this site...i learnt that when i did sumthin like this...but keep droppin...holla back

DaYoungsta boy!!! :shoot: :cussing: :shoot:

i agree with the critics the one word thing is a lil basic but i do feel the scenario money do cause alotta problems in this world ya dig,,keep doin u stay up

:thumbup: Yea I agree with Youngsta. Niggaz get bored reading da same shee. But u good keep cha head up

Not to be so Mean,

But.... I'ma Bend You Over And fuck you Over Money...HAHAHAHAHAHA

keep elavating...use more rhyme words 2 make the verse better..

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This was the gayest shit I have read in months.

MONTHS.

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