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  1. December 8th, 2004, 04:22 AM #1
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    Your All I Got

    I havent done this in a while lets see what I can do

    Your the one I can count on ta listen to my thoughts
    without you I'd be nothin cuz your all that I've got
    and your the one I can tell all my dreams and fantisies
    can come to you when these devilish thoughts are harrassin me
    ur whom I speak my mind to when I'm havin thoughts of murda
    twisted fantisies of killin I mean shit you neva heard of
    you've never failed me, there to listen no matter the situation
    from when my grandma died to when me and my girl was separatin
    told you my infatuations, even told you all the things that I hate
    there when I was an wreck, and to catch me when I break
    you mean so much to me, I mean really your irreplaceable
    want the world to know my opinions, without you I'm incapable
    you take in my thoughts and words an amplify my feelings
    gonna be the reason I blow up and sky rocket through the ceilings

    Dedicated to the "Microphone"

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  2. December 8th, 2004, 04:37 AM #2
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    Dope shit, yo. I can relate to that a lot. My best friend K.C. and I are just like that. Talk to each other about anything. You came real in that right there Steven, and that's appreciated. My favorite bars:

    Your the one I can count on ta listen to my thoughts
    without you I'd be nothin cuz your all that I've got

    and..

    you mean so much to me, I mean really your irreplaceable
    want the world to know my opinions, without you I'm incapable


    Powerful shit, keep it comin'. Word.
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  3. December 8th, 2004, 08:51 AM #3
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    some kool shit u've put down here...


    you mean so much to me, I mean really your irreplaceable
    want the world to know my opinions, without you I'm incapable
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    Nice Lines...

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  4. December 8th, 2004, 09:32 AM #4
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    yo i liked this peice alot..i think it flowed perfectly..the rhyme scheme was great...the structure was great...the imagery was outstandin dog..you did real good there...umm..i think you worded your lines good as well...the only thing i think that would make this better..is to make it longer..cause it has a thing about it..that makes it a dope drop..so it needds to be longer.....but overall great job g...if you get the chance hit up my collab OM with B2K..and berlin..its called "Different Day, Same Old Shit"
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  5. December 8th, 2004, 09:50 AM #5
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    definitely a fairly dope verse... cool concept with ya dedicatin' it to tha mic... like when nuthin' was goin' right, tha music was there for ya... i'm feelin' that... flow was smooth from start to finish... rhymes 'n' word choice were also good... grade A shit right here... keep spittin'... peace...

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  6. December 8th, 2004, 04:14 PM #6
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    ^^^ yo thanx for the feed yall.....keep it comin..
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  7. December 8th, 2004, 04:35 PM #7
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    i liekd this shti i was feeling the flow and all that shit was it bout a girlie oooo but stay up from what ive seen ur great at text
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  8. December 8th, 2004, 05:04 PM #8
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    ^^^ thanx for the feed dawg...keep it comin.
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  9. December 8th, 2004, 05:10 PM #9
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    your all i got

    i enjoyed this peice it was real deep and well thought, keep the stuff comin, and hit up my peice wit feedback... its called "thy eye"...
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  10. December 8th, 2004, 05:42 PM #10
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    This was nice yo... made me think for awhile... i bet most people have a situation like this and for me right now its almost perfect... dno tho yo this really touchin me right now... you kno y... but yo serious... nice stuff man
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  11. December 8th, 2004, 08:22 PM #11
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    thanx for the feed...........uppin keep it comin..
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  12. December 9th, 2004, 02:30 AM #12
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    c'mon keep the feedback comin
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  13. December 9th, 2004, 02:54 PM #13
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    Very nice open mic, flowed brilliantly and although it wasn't as deep as it could have been it really made me think of a guy who has become obsessed with rapping and can't call it quits. A man who has lost so many other friends that all he's got is his microphone and his rapping ability.

    Nice work TR, very nice indeed
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  14. December 10th, 2004, 03:58 PM #14
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    i was feelin this piece too maybe u should do that again....i mean take a week off n let those thoughts sink in n drop again cuz i really felt this piece, well since we've been spittin together at least... good shit ~ one ~
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  15. December 10th, 2004, 06:08 PM #15
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    Thanx for the feed family..........lets keep it comin
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