Northern Lights

vibes miraculously heating
others masking the reasons
people are actually seeing
the surest sight
blasting and beaming
haven't you seen them?
Northern Lights..

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I remember...
when you was a fern and wasn't burned in the weather
now our world's lit by twirling whirlwinds of pleasure
your my girl for forever, and I can carve it in you
not an issue, I'll tattoo it on me if your mom'll let you
charge and step through testing my leverage, thc hides away,
progressing to help my expression of what a mind could gain;
forgetting lies and pain, eyes are blazed, she calms nerves
glossed firm, ready with hairs making memory glands long term,
got herbs? burn it back into soot, if your life's low
like the price goes up with casting a hook for fly flows
tight growth on compiled pockets of forgotten dreams
might those shocking oddities contain psychotropic properties?
the mind you lost so suddenly.. what you've not been today
you lost in a daze, wondering how you've gotten this way
while weed stalls your dismay, its unlocking a place
loved cause it's comfortable, find yourself talking too late
summed up in front of you, spots of green patches the red
and heavy lids, its like I got 2 ten gallon hats on my head
your passionate end left me where I'm not certain whats real
inverted inside some circular cells, deciding virtuous skills
our lurking is filled
with micro(de)fying cycles of shining that took what atoms see..
the riddle lies in a billion little eyes looking back at me,
gods of good anatomy.. I vow now to never sell again, then blink..
never felt a friend and then think about intelligence and instinct
this celebrant has lived sweet.. she's inspired me, entirely
used to freestyling to you, so you can help me write a scheme
like a king.. enticingly, i'm applauding your long stems
buds throbbing from forcing portions of carbon and tungsten
never stopping consumption.. yes, I voted yes in question 2
not the fucking other dudes, nothing substitutes instead of you!
the hate thats bred intends to lose what heartless intentions do
cops with thoughts to set the rules, call this goddess - impeccable..
in general, I don't see how smoking weed effects the families
I cant believe..
justifying the fruits that bless the plants and trees
its a damn stampede and on that track, I need to know,
I have these seeds to grow in the cracks of streets with hope
but no hope is evil though, something you should just leave alone
till our suns bakes a beaming gloam and responsibility is shown!!!

so until then..
our love remains unseen
people can hate and bring
-a fine to pay,
increasing my pride to say
"it wont change a thing."

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...me-382220.html

heres your pathetic links :)

Really feeling the rhyme scheme like the flow and the multis all in all it's good didn't quite get the intro tho, maybe it's not for me to get but never the less great job. Hope to see more from you, one thing you can work on tho is emotion and puncuation.
your vocab is great but other than what i said you got it and it's harder to get emotion cause it's written instead of recorded but hey keep at it...
check out my written please leave some feed back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6706837

the whole things packed with emotion?> lol
im hitting your link up yo

dope piece, i can def relate and the rhyming was complex. it was a smooth read and kept me interested throughout the whole thing. the topic of weed is taken in very different ways but this one was approached real uniquely. you went in depth. i liked this part a lot, it stood out to me...


tight growth on compiled pockets of forgotten dreams
might those shocking oddities contain psychotropic properties?
the mind you lost so suddenly.. what you've not been today
you lost in a daze, wondering how you've gotten this way
while weed stalls your dismay, its unlocking a place
loved cause it's comfortable, find yourself talking too late


me and a friend was reading this shit, we both think its dope. ight well keep writing. peace.

damn up again.. leave links

I really liked this alot....one reason is cause you're so dope with the multies man:

in general, I don't see how smoking weed effects the families
I cant believe..
justifying the fruits that bless the plants and trees
its a damn stampede and on that track, I need to know,
I have these seeds to grow in the cracks of streets with hope
but no hope is evil though, something you should just leave alone
till our suns bakes a beaming gloam and responsibility is shown!!!

Those were some of my favorites but there were alot of quotables in this.
I like how this wasn't your typical "I love mary J" piece or whatever.
You seemed more like the type of guy that would get a petition started to make it legal and study that it doesn't really have ill effects on the health of the user,

glossed firm, ready with hairs making memory glands long term,
got herbs? burn it back into soot, if your life's low
like the price goes up with casting a hook for fly flows
tight growth on compiled pockets of forgotten dreams
might those shocking oddities contain psychotropic properties?
the mind you lost so suddenly.. what you've not been today
you lost in a daze, wondering how you've gotten this way

I liked the flow of this part also...it had some good assonance in it,
Your flow and sometimes humorous tone made this a really fun read,
I read it with a smirk the whole time.

hmm....gotta say, this was pretty nice. slick rhyming made it an easy read. I've read ode to tree pieces before but this rank up there with some of the better ones. And haha, ill reference to the question 2 thing (im from boston also). A very impressive showing, bruh. keep it up.



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bumping......