City Rep

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First drop, tell me if you like it, drop feed and whatever the fuck you feel like
H1
I'm representing N.J., show ya` sets if you with me.
I'm representing S.C., throw up ya` hometown if you with me.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
T-R-A-P, if you doin` the same, walk with me.
T-R-A-P, you doin` the same, then we the same nigga`,

V1
I came up a youngin`, raised an out-cast.
Out on the streets, my life about cash.
I can't picture me in rap without Cass.
He influenced what is me, no doubt that.
My first son on these park-a-lot buisnesses.
Had his first and last bullet hole, noone witness this.
But don't mistake my son for a son.
He was a homey who was young, not a son.
Now I still haven't got straight on that subject.
Can't trust no girl, they fake, and love just checks.
I ain't never use a gun, except to blow up.
Who would to know? That Trap would grow up?
I ain't came from the gritty, N.J's my city.
And the love comes auto, like a semi.
Now that my mind-frame completely warped.
Even if i'm a nice guy, I still will attend court.
So don't try that steppin` on me shit, I need no clips.
I will gut ya` ass where you sit, come try O, bitch.

H1
I'm representing N.J., show ya` sets if you with me.
I'm representing S.C., throw up ya` hometown if you with me.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
T-R-A-P, if you doin` the same, walk with me.
T-R-A-P, you doin` the same, then we the same nigga`,

V2
I roll around these blocks, just out-lining.
I can't say I want world peace without lieing.
Fuck these Gs, who give up their lives without trying.
And I done lost hope for Hip-Hop since pac's dyin`.
But Nas is stayin` strong, Jay-Z, props to Styles P.
So many other emcees, but we out-weight by the phony.
Thats why most hate it, generalized us into gang-bangers.
Fiends who know just ass, money, and image with the same anger.
But its not, i'm the fiend from out-town, just an insane stranger,
Like a robber, i'm takin` over ya` rights, takin` ya` chain and ya`.
Respect, rap stats, all of that, its goi`n down the drain.
Niggas like ,"Damn this man is the truth" No lie, that nigga` true.
I can enter any studio, enter the booth, and leave electricuted like Took.
Plus I ain't like you, not a fool, these gimics in a loop.
"Yeah I got jewels, plus a tool. Yeah I got jewels, plus a tool."
And it ain't cool, yeah call me a hypocrit.
I'm guilty fo all charges relating to it.
But unlike you, I don't be fake with the shit.(Unh)

H1
I'm representing N.J., show ya` sets if you with me.
I'm representing S.C., throw up ya` hometown if you with me.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
T-R-A-P, if you doin` the same, walk with me.
T-R-A-P, you doin` the same, then we the same nigga`,


V3
I'm a real rapper, I ain't with that crook shit.
Give ya` audiences crap, you hide it in a cool booklet.
Sayin` you a gangsta cat, you desguised, I know you a shooked bitch.
On the top, bet you was surprised when Trap fuckin` took it.
What you expect? You made ya` life up, you ain't real nomore.
Cause you gave up that plate when you didn't want the meal nomore.
You want to be another DMX, but you ain't a rider.
Even your family says you a fuckin` liar.
Can't go home 'cause they digust their own.
Lied to the world, so you can't trust the phone.
WHat if its ya` old boy, ya` old homey.
Who can vouch, you wasn't gang-bangin, you was playin` sony.
On the couch, sippin` Pepsi, never even heard of cris.
Saw SNoop Dogg sayin` it, now you sayin` you was birth on it.
You's a snitch, shawty I know you tip the polices.
Your kind the reason, they always get the dro pieces.
Because of you, hIP-Hop is dead, and before we revive it.
We gotta` disinfect the viris, so this time, we can survive it.

H1
I'm representing N.J., show ya` sets if you with me.
I'm representing S.C., throw up ya` hometown if you with me.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
I'm reppin` my city, you know the name.
T-R-A-P, if you doin` the same, walk with me.
T-R-A-P, you doin` the same, then we the same nigga`,

Damn, must've taken awhile to type all this out...

Ashame though,....

...So much time spent...So much time wasted.

Read the Rules for Open Mic before you post.

Just a heads up.

And incase I forgot,...The rap sucked. =)

kinda a weak piece, you didnt have any form of imagery, and the wording wasn't great, it had a meh. flow, so i would look at some of the doper guys a round' and see how they do it keep workin at it cause ya got some potential.

Thanks for the heads-up, this site knows how to treat its new members, this the kinda` shit we need in the wold today. THANK YA`LL, and it only took like 20 minutes to write this, because I love the site that much