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Check Ins Due By Wednesday Midnight Eastern
Verses Due By Friday Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday Midnight Eastern
Rules.
^Read & Good Luck..
Check Ins Due By Wednesday Midnight Eastern
Verses Due By Friday Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday Midnight Eastern
Check... 12 lines
< undisputed champ..
unless you drop first i'll be going more than 12.
i'm too ill for you kid.. like i brought the plague round
i'll smash ya fucking teeth out jus to take the crown
now guv'll loose fit ya hips when i dislocate ya pelvis
tele win it?? i'll burn ya verse so all can smell the bullshit
duke's hollow.. cos what i do takes guts, literally
ya need to man up.. cos in test teens fail, an can't stomach me
you'll pay t, my punches charge.. like killa hordes
an you could never handle me, so you stay in doors
pray to gods.. cos i bring an end to the weak
tele'll write for 24 hours but i still sunday's, geek
an ya verse? already history replayed so i slavery quick
have this ijl soldier crippled.. an let the fag savour medic
you'll take what you get, slashed down an upper cuts
open shop on the hoes face.. drop grill an shutter up
bitch drops his all, bar: none.. so i fucking jump ya
flatten ya chest < that being the only time you get A cup, bra.
Die...
Im breakin backs…I’ll stretcher knees back to your neck
So call me doc cause if you procedure spinal tap ya legs
KO’d a pest with one punch… an murder with the next
And don’t need a .22 to see a parachute threw ya chest
Kid your text is bitch… watch me rape ya mental state
Cause I come raw with whores…so observe a procreate
Lets get real bitch…you can’t win…I leave ya wrecked
And im fixing to cash your mother fuckin reality check
Cause I’m burning bridges…and shit don’t float bitch
Ya think your dope and aint even made it to roach clips
While I Folder lips back like coffee, forget the net bruh
When I smoke u its eye poppin, like im tryna Cigarette-na
Shit Guvs whole style is dead… like it’s a pimp’s corpse
Cause it don’t take physics to see the wordplay G forced
Skills a valuable asset…an your broke…so it’s fitting
That this Guvnor died cause I raised the cost of living
Ok..I'ma break this down for you homos :)
Guv..
[B]i'm too ill for you kid.. like i brought the plague round
i'll smash ya fucking teeth out jus to take the crown[/I]
Eh..alright..
now guv'll loose fit ya hips when i dislocate ya pelvis
tele win it?? i'll burn ya verse so all can smell the bullshit
MEH.
duke's hollow.. cos what i do takes guts, literally
ya need to man up.. cos in test teens fail, an can't stomach me
Decent concept..needs better wording.
you'll pay t, my punches charge.. like killa hordes
an you could never handle me, so you stay in doors
Same as the last one. Bad wording, but cool concept.
pray to gods.. cos i bring an end to the weak
tele'll write for 24 hours but i still sunday's, geek
Ok.
an ya verse? already history replayed so i slavery quick
have this ijl soldier crippled.. an let the fag savour medic
Badly worded..unique flip on dick punch though.
you'll take what you get, slashed down an upper cuts
open shop on the hoes face.. drop grill an shutter up
Heh.
bitch drops his all, bar: none.. so i fucking jump ya
flatten ya chest < that being the only time you get A cup, bra.
Naw.
Tele.
Im breakin backs…I’ll stretcher knees back to your neck
So call me doc cause if you procedure spinal tap ya legs
Weak rhyming, meh punch.
KO’d a pest with one punch… an murder with the next
And don’t need a .22 to see a parachute threw ya chest
Ok.
Kid your text is bitch… watch me rape ya mental state
Cause I come raw with whores…so observe a procreate
Ok wordplay..not a punch though.
Lets get real bitch…you can’t win…I leave ya wrecked
And im fixing to cash your mother fuckin reality check
Reality check punches= played.
Cause I’m burning bridges…and shit don’t float bitch
Ya think your dope and aint even made it to roach clips
Eh.
While I Folder lips back like coffee, forget the net bruh
When I smoke u its eye poppin, like im tryna Cigarette-na
Naw.
Shit Guvs whole style is dead… like it’s a pimp’s corpse
Cause it don’t take physics to see the wordplay G forced
lol..punch of the battle so far.
Skills a valuable asset…an your broke…so it’s fitting
That this Guvnor died cause I raised the cost of living
Naw.
This was a close battle...I gotta give it to Guv though, basically because he came more consistent in his verse and had less bad lines. Both came decent though.
So /v Guv..but Tele had the punch of the battle with G forces.
Im not gonna sway but.... :(
Thanks for the vote anyway.
Can we get a some more?
I see you fuckers lookin! lol
I was a good battle. Have to go with Guv though. It wasn't that he came with in really hard hitting punches just that he was more consistant. Tele if u had have made the beginning like your last 4 lines you would have won easily. But honestly I wasn't impressed with the way u started.
"Shit Guvs whole style is dead… like it’s a pimp’s corpse
Cause it don’t take physics to see the wordplay G forced"
^nice line though
v/ Guv
guv-
i'm too ill for you kid.. like i brought the plague round
i'll smash ya fucking teeth out jus to take the crown
seen styles like this before.. decent i guess
now guv'll loose fit ya hips when i dislocate ya pelvis
tele win it?? i'll burn ya verse so all can smell the bullshit
blah.. boo.
duke's hollow.. cos what i do takes guts, literally
ya need to man up.. cos in test teens fail, an can't stomach me
hm.. intestines wordplay was a lil forced. not bad tho.
you'll pay t, my punches charge.. like killa hordes
an you could never handle me, so you stay in doors
=\
pray to gods.. cos i bring an end to the weak
tele'll write for 24 hours but i still sunday's, geek
heh. ok
an ya verse? already history replayed so i slavery quick
have this ijl soldier crippled.. an let the fag savour medic
just ok.. hate sexual punches even if its creative.
you'll take what you get, slashed down an upper cuts
open shop on the hoes face.. drop grill an shutter up
eh..cool.
bitch drops his all, bar: none.. so i fucking jump ya
flatten ya chest < that being the only time you get A cup, bra.
alright.
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tele-
Im breakin backs…I’ll stretcher knees back to your neck
So call me doc cause if you procedure spinal tap ya legs
boo for an opener.
KO’d a pest with one punch… an murder with the next
And don’t need a .22 to see a parachute threw ya chest
heh cool.
Kid your text is bitch… watch me rape ya mental state
Cause I come raw with whores…so observe a procreate
lol
Lets get real bitch…you can’t win…I leave ya wrecked
And im fixing to cash your mother fuckin reality check
nah, old concept
Cause I’m burning bridges…and shit don’t float bitch
Ya think your dope and aint even made it to roach clips
nope.
While I Folder lips back like coffee, forget the net bruh
When I smoke u its eye poppin, like im tryna Cigarette-na
blah didnt like.
Shit Guvs whole style is dead… like it’s a pimp’s corpse
Cause it don’t take physics to see the wordplay G forced
nice.
Skills a valuable asset…an your broke…so it’s fitting
That this Guvnor died cause I raised the cost of living
bleh.. almost.
-- i'm gunna have to go against the majority here and say tele got this, barely. really wasnt feelin guv's verse at all, while tele had his ups and downs.. but, when he did hit it was good. pretty hard to decide, but tele came better imo. good stuff though.
v/ tele
i'm too ill for you kid.. like i brought the plague round
i'll smash ya fucking teeth out jus to take the crown
ok...good wordplay
now guv'll loose fit ya hips when i dislocate ya pelvis
tele win it?? i'll burn ya verse so all can smell the bullshit
nah
duke's hollow.. cos what i do takes guts, literally
ya need to man up.. cos in test teens fail, an can't stomach me
ok wordplay...wasn't feelin the punch
you'll pay t, my punches charge.. like killa hordes
an you could never handle me, so you stay in doors
ok
pray to gods.. cos i bring an end to the weak
tele'll write for 24 hours but i still sunday's, geek
not feelin it
an ya verse? already history replayed so i slavery quick
have this ijl soldier crippled.. an let the fag savour medic
good worplay...good punch
you'll take what you get, slashed down an upper cuts
open shop on the hoes face.. drop grill an shutter up
meh....ok
bitch drops his all, bar: none.. so i fucking jump ya
flatten ya chest < that being the only time you get A cup, bra.
no
Im breakin backs…I’ll stretcher knees back to your neck
So call me doc cause if you procedure spinal tap ya legs
Nice wordplay, nice punch
KO’d a pest with one punch… an murder with the next
And don’t need a .22 to see a parachute threw ya chest
good wordplay...ok punch
Kid your text is bitch… watch me rape ya mental state
Cause I come raw with whores…so observe a procreate
meh..good wordplay, but more self glorification
Lets get real bitch…you can’t win…I leave ya wrecked
And im fixing to cash your mother fuckin reality check
ok...kinda played
Cause I’m burning bridges…and shit don’t float bitch
Ya think your dope and aint even made it to roach clips
ok..nothin special
While I Folder lips back like coffee, forget the net bruh
When I smoke u its eye poppin, like im tryna Cigarette-na
ok
Shit Guvs whole style is dead… like it’s a pimp’s corpse
Cause it don’t take physics to see the wordplay G forced
Dope
Skills a valuable asset…an your broke…so it’s fitting
That this Guvnor died cause I raised the cost of living
not feelin it
Both came nice with the wordplay, but Vote Tele for a more consistent verse
Lyric crew votes aren't allowed
and if they are wdf..this is confusing me
seriously...Not to take away from Tele but
it's confusing me...
Guv is in our crew. So I dont think it matters.
Im not going to tell who he is. I dont know if...
he wants people knowing or not. :/
hence my vote also.Quote:
Rule 6:
Crew Votes Crew Votes Crew Votes...
You bastards should know better than that shit...L.L.L. might take it...but you can shove it here....I dont care how honest it looks..it's shady unless it two people in the same crew their are to be NO crew votes in LLL Jr. battles...if so..they will all be DQed.
Vote: Tele
How does pelvis and bullshit rhyme, guv?
good match i enjoyed but vote tele more quotables and i love good wordplay therefore he gets the win nice try guv
vote tele