Shelter Me!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...74#post3350974 Here's my 2 posts

Verse:

Life to me....my biggest obsticle dat I regret,
dat includes my debt, my bad credit check,
and being beaten by my dad as a lad,
'shit'.....How can i forget, or better yet,
when's it set to step forward and prefect?
'Yep'.....I aint perfect but who is?
what I need to do is learn to except,
so I can pull through this concept,and earn me a check!
But to do this, I need to earn me some respect!
Not off my step-dad or my bank,
but in the streets where I rep.
Only here will i weep things dat shuda bin said,
along time before I for-saw the visions in my head!
Some I try to burry for dead, but instead,
I'm to clever and tread through this deep water im in way ova my head,
This depth smells of death, so I'm left with 1 option,
do I go to bed in a coffin, or make bread as a offering?
And gain inner peace with myself with no help,
from pills i keep popping.
The Doc said if ya plotting to kill ya self,
the prozack will definatley stop it.
I shuda know any twat who prescribes that,
may aswel of supplied the body sack for me to hop-in!

Peace