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    Exclamation The End Of It All

    This verse is dedicated to all victims of terrorist attacks,
    for all those who lost loved ones from terrorist attacks.
    This verse is dedicated to all of the marines that have,
    died serving their country, and to their familys, god bless.
    This verse is dedicated to all of those who died or lost
    loved ones in the most recent hurricane tragidy in New Orleans...


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    Theres a big problem with this government overun with constant war
    Looking for battle, while the people r asking "what are we over there for?"
    Everyday, some1 has to put their son who fell in battle into the soil
    President Bush isnt fighting, but hes trading american blood for oil....
    Seeing my country react in times of need... really quiet a prodigy
    God cant even save us now, and we created this, a natrual tragidy




    September 11th

    They lived among us for 2 years, no body looked at them strange or suspected
    These people's plans to kill many civilians, they wanted muslims to be respected

    Terrorists filled with hatred, directed their attention against american powers
    Took flight lessons, killed many people as they drove the planes into the towers

    Osama bin laden, scrambled there brains and rearanged their helpless thoughts
    Told them to die for their religion, all because thats what allah allots?

    If i could, id break all of his bones, tie his arteries into triple knots
    And let all the family and friends he has effected, take their best shots

    I watched from my tv, i remember feeling helpless and i was dumstruck
    President Bush that dumbfuck, knew it was coming and ignored it... some luck

    As the towers collapsed, people realized... nothing left but memories, letters, love
    Rest in peace all of those who have lost there lives, now resting in the heavens above



    Theres a big problem with this government overun with constant war
    Looking for battle, while the people r asking "what are we over there for?"
    Everyday, some1 has to put their son who fell in battle into the soil
    President Bush isnt fighting, but hes trading american blood for oil....
    Seeing my country react in times of need... really quiet a prodigy
    God cant even save us now, and we created this, a natrual tragidy




    The Reaction

    We send troops that have been hated into Afghanistan since the Soviet Union
    We marched in and wanted respect? To them it was just an unwanted reunion

    Bombarded the tailban, got them to turn in there weapons, now there in the past
    Little did we know that Al Quada was gaining more followers everyday, growing fast

    We dropped bombs, shedding inocent blood on the holiest of ground
    Bodies laying down, aint getting up, family will never hear another sound

    Good work bush, where are those weapons of mass destruction, u said u knew where too..
    The truth it the only weapon of destruction ive seen, killing innocent people, is you

    Couldn't pull out then before we got in to deep, the war was getting him aroused, and....
    He never faught hes a coward, so he let the marines stay... death toll rises... over a thousand




    Theres a big problem with this government overun with constant war
    Looking for battle, while the people r asking "what are we over there for?"
    Everyday, some1 has to put their son who fell in battle into the soil
    President Bush isnt fighting, but hes trading american blood for oil....
    Seeing my country react in times of need... really quiet a prodigy
    God cant even save us now, and we created this, a natrual tragidy




    Moving on...

    So we moved onto Iraq, was there a reason for that? no..,, and thats a fact
    We rolled in on tanks, imposing customs, they thought we were telling them how to act

    Of course they retaliated back, car bombs blew up our own men, waste of lives
    Maybe the president should grab an m16, go to war for once.. ill watch as he dies

    Dont get me wrong, id defend my country too if there was a war worth dieing for
    Like the civil war, die with honor rather then be a corpse, Iraqi war? i deplore

    We found Saddam, that fucking coward... he was living in a fucking hole
    Growing old, living with moles.... now wheres he going.. he'll be sittin on death roe

    Katrina stikes, we could have used them back at home, instead of dieing overseas
    But no, stay over there... what are we thinkin?... theres never gonna be world peace


    Theres a big problem with this government overun with constant war
    Looking for battle, while the people r asking "what are we over there for?"
    Everyday, some1 has to put their son who fell in battle into the soil
    President Bush isnt fighting, but hes trading american blood for oil....
    Seeing my country react in times of need... really quiet a prodigy
    God cant even save us now, and we created this, a natrual tragidy





    Hurricane Katarina

    No matter what god you have listen to me, pray to god, for spirtual nourishment
    natrual disasters happens... the world is at war... maybe its a sign of punishment

    The levy breaks, flood waters rise... people mad at god, theres nothing left to praise
    Sorta like noahs ark... end of the world... it was flooded... rained for 40 days

    Familys serperated from loved ones, people died couldnt escape cause they were poor
    and yes again i blame bush... what the fuck was F-E-M-A relief crew waiting for?!?

    Embrace eachother everyday, every second is a precious moment that you can spend
    Cherish the time you have here, knowing the world we are in..................
    ..............................You never know when life can end...................



    Theres a big problem with this government overun with constant war
    Looking for battle, while the people r asking "what are we over there for?"
    Everyday, some1 has to put their son who fell in battle into the soil
    President Bush isnt fighting, but hes trading american blood for oil....
    Seeing my country react in times of need... really quiet a prodigy
    God cant even save us now, and we created this, a natrual tragidy



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    Sorry about the structure, I can't fix it... anyways links here...
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post3337315
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post3337327

    Leave feed... again sorry bout the structure

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    Upp and im out dont sleep on this....

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    Uppin this some more... common wheres the feed

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    nice drop
    structure wasnt aall that great but i unerstand ya whole concept, it was really deep, but alot of people right about this kind of subject

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    nice drop man, touching subject........... almost made me shed a few tears..... those visions never go away dawg an i totally understand why this is a must do subject.
    peace to all september 11th victims and the lives lost in the war...... bar the taliban!lol

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    dam i was feelin this spit....ur best verses were the one on 911 and the one on Hurricane Katrina and maybe moving on.....i was feelin the emotion in those verses..in the otheres there was little...i like the hook the best...it brought it all together..i think everything u put donw is for the most part too, but then everybody has a diff opinion about current events like that...i think its a great topic to address...great job o thos verses..the other one was more or less simple...good shyt
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    thanks for the feed man, uppin this

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    strucutre was good..i liked how the lines went to tow linea and on the bottom of the long lnes mutlies were used...creatvie and different..i liked it a lot....flow was smooth..structure was even.......complexity was aight..touchy topic igot to agree with the perosn above....it was relaly enjoyable to read...nicely done..peace

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