10 lines.....5 barz
30 minute max
Blind Spit-jus drop in 30
no hate
no dik
no crew
no recycle
no bite
no feed
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10 lines.....5 barz
30 minute max
Blind Spit-jus drop in 30
no hate
no dik
no crew
no recycle
no bite
no feed
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ahhahahah carson man ...your abck huh wut ahpen to battlyn like 100 odd battles an uwanted to retir your back huh..well i wanna get a shot at u..an so does my buddy...wehn u doen ill set a clena abttle.up if udown
Imma bout to de"jet" this "Carson" and leave him before his "time"// (before 2k4)
You a "cop", hell betta call ya Sheriff tha way ya "steal" tha "rhymes"//
Committin these "crimes", hell you aint dinner you only a lunch//
Even if you trained wit "Tyson" you still wouldn't pack a "punch//
Bitch livin "Daily", so you behind, betta "speed" up "Car"son//
Imma rap salesman, leavin you 2 votes ahead, just for tha bargain//
Betta say ya "sorry mr. virus", before i make ya a "outkast"//
Ya flow stays slow, ya rhymes couldn't be "phat" if they wuz on "slimfast"//
I'll leave ya in Reincarnation, you in World War 3 wit outta jet//
You in shape?, i'm not, but this battle for me, no need to break a swet//
lmao....aight letz roll
White-Virus
Yo chek it...
He's a White'Virus/ Watch Out...
His Lines'Put peeps ta sleep like Linus-(charlie brown)
Can't Figure Why u even Cheked'IN aint even gon'moistn my pallet-
I disable Dis Germ wit Childrens'advil tablets'
Look...He thinks he's adlibb-
please....
Im too hot'Can't mess wit me'wanna feel?lemme Drop a few Degrees'-
lets burn em knees'cus das'the only way u front wit C's-
lil 15 yearold junior mint'aint even got a whip ta tint'
i leave ya like vick..de'feet'd an strung up in splint-
bitch get the hint, dis cats Pre'writs are more like lint'
wasted cash flow spent'my time has been wasted'on a hopless baby shady'
more like boby brady gettin played' by his sis miss Marsha ...daily-
hmmmmm................lets get sum votes runnin
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Punches:Carson
Flow:White
Personals:White
Structure:Both
Vocab:Carson
Opener:Carson
Closer:Carson
Wordplay:Both
Overal:Carson
This was a pretty good battle. I liked both MC's verses and they both hit pretty hard. I was feelin carson mroe though, his shit was good. White nice stuff, keep it up and keep elevating. Props to both MC's.:)
Hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80975
i dunno about dis one man.............its a hard one..............i think imma have ta go wit...............white virus...........dunno man.........i was just feelin his one more than the other kats one
=> white virus
a yo any of yall wanna battle n shit.......................if any yall wanna jus pm me first man............then we can set some shit up and get it goin.......holla at ya boi
Good battle...
Nice rhymes on both sides.
Still kinda one sided.
I believe Virus came ok, just didn't bring the complexity, the wordplay, or the punches that Carson did.
Plus, one thing I really like is imagery.
Carson outdid him there too.
I laughed imagining a "baby shady" and "bobby gettin jumped by marsha"...
That shit was funny.
I'll give Virus the flow, but Carson took the rest quite handily.
Holla
Born vs. Sauce
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I belive that both emcees came wit it but carson wuz on another level wit his junk. Virus you did good man you just went up against someone else thats really good also.Quote:
Originally posted by Born To Kill
I believe Virus came ok, just didn't bring the complexity, the wordplay, or the punches that Carson did.
Born vs. Sauce
Vote Carson because of complexity and wordplay.
aight let me break this shit down right quick
multi's carson
wordplay virus
punchs carson
complexity carson
structure tie
flow tie
vote carson
CarsonJet is DQ'd for having more than two active battles...
Next time follow the rules...
That is all...
^Quote:
Originally posted by CarsonJet-2k4
Chrit Dq'd me from a battle cus i had to many active battles-
However i only had 2.....untill Brookylnn re-opend a previosly closed battle......so i didnt really break the rules..
THIS IS TRUE & TECHNICALLY WONT ACCOUNT FOR THE "2 BATTLES ONLY" RULE
RE-OPENED
-BROOKLYN
nice battle but somehow carson had senseless punches no offense some didn't make sense but nice verse n white's verse was wierd but somehow i felt it more overall he came harder cause his shit was orignial and carsons shit was hard to understand and read
Vote=WV hollaz
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Close Battle.. But Carson Edged It Out By An Inch. I Was Feelin Both But Damn Carson Had A Few Killer Lines, Like the c's line.. White Had A Better Flow And Thats About It.
Vote-Carson
Hit This Up..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&pagenumber=4
I'll vote here,later
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81757
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Oh My Bad : Breakdown
Punches=White Virus
Personals=Carson
Flow=Carson
Multis=Carson
Structure=Carson , Virus's Verse Was Sloppy
Complexity=White Virus
Overall= Carson
"I diasbled this germ with Children's Advil tablets".
That Was Some Tight Ass Shit.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
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Oh My Bad : Breakdown
Punches=White Virus
Personals=Carson
Flow=Carson
Multis=Carson
Structure=Carson , Virus's Verse Was Sloppy
Complexity=White Virus
Overall= Carson
"I diasbled this germ with Children's Advil tablets".
That Was Some Tight Ass Shit.
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This was how it was suppose to lok
yea i think carsoin got this.....heres how ima put it....
flow-Car
structure-WV
punches-Car
personals-Car
wordplay-WV
creativity-Car
complexity-Car
comedy-both
enjoyment-both
overall vote- Car
not a bad battle...stay up
yep..
pz...
->Je@!<-