4 bars
u first
i set up
no c h dr votes
ill spit tom or asap
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4 bars
u first
i set up
no c h dr votes
ill spit tom or asap
aiight I'll spit either tomorrow or asap ~1`
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***Pics up Tha Mic***
Yo
Battle wit Mentally Kursed das a (W)rap Gladly (Glad wrap), you all burned out
Im energized like a battery//
You baffle me sadly, rhyming so badly, thinking you got a chance,
If you had “STYLES” like “JULIA” I still wouldn’t Save You The Last Dance//
This is ya last chance throw in da towel, I will verbally plant seeds in ya ass,
And let them grow in ya bowels//
Wit me you not a contender, you pretender, I put ya rhymes in da blinder, hit u wit da
Whip leave bloodstains all ova my fender, stab you and bribe da public defender,
Lyrically castrate you and claim you lied about ya gender//
Im mean wit my lyrics dey say im a jerk or a menace, Im tying you down
Makin others witness dis “MERK” till’ im finished//
You couldn’t fuck wit me if ya name was “LIFESTYLE” or “TROJAN”,
I spit so hot I close and make ya respiratory system re-open, my words is potent,
Cloud up ya lungs as if you jus began smoking//
***Throws tha mic to Kursed***
Aight check it
Ill leave you brain deceased from repeatedly gettin stabbed in the head//
Tearin you to shreds, leave you washed up like sand on shore, drowned then dead//
Im disconnectin your life like bankrupted people wit unpaid phone bills//
Get into your brain and molest your dreams like I was "Kelly Krugar" so your dreams are "fulfilled"//
Gat leave you deep underground "readin dirt" so youll be a "book worm"//
Punches leave you unconscious on ground knocked out wit contorted squirm//
Pastin money on those who did you wrong spines is the only time you "pay them back"//
Im leavin your skull cracked, like a gay quarterback player you wanna get a sack//
You defeatin me in this battle is incorrect, ima use F7 for a spell check//
Bullets hittin your deck, leavin a slit under you throat from your ear to your neck//
You beatin me aint happenin like a black man found innocent from a racist jury//
Your not focused enough better adjust your eyes because its comin in blurry//
look...........i would love to comment on each line, but im too much in a pissed mood to do that so ill do it this way
Flow = MK
Multis = None
Punches = MK
Metas = MK
Wordplay = MK
Creativity = MK
dis was one sided
straight merking in my opinion
hit dis junk up........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81559
uppin
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uppin fo votes (1)
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Originally posted by Mentally Kursed
uppin fo votes (2)
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vote-MK
way better verse, better structure and punches, be brave u need to work on that structure a little bit.. it was messy at time. elevate ur thought process a lil bit, and ull get better. but my vote goes to MK.
ayo hit this up and poll your honest vote here..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81763
yo mentally kurseed ripped that shit everything was tight basically one sided be brave had some hot shit but couldnt match it good battle though no hate no d/r hit it up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
mentally merked this kid his shit was crazy tight.......... he had flow and punches.........anyway hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81772
^^yea ill peep yall battles in a minute
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MK hands down BIATCH's lol but MK won this easy
BREAKDOWN
Mulitz....None really
Punches.....MK
Creativity....MK
Flow....TIE...leanin towards MK a lil more...
Wordplay....MK....
MK...start battlin vets...
errbody hit dis battle up plz.....FAIR AND HONEST VOTE...NO D/R...NO HATE!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81559
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Originally posted by Mentally Kursed
^^yea ill peep yall battles in a minute
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81757
^Hit that up^
and i'll return the favor here
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yea i agree with everyone else..i think MK took this one...
he just had a overall better verse....better flow...
punches...wordplay...he just took it in every catagory.....
overall vote- Mk
yep...
pz.....