okay you know the rules but for the special voters *looks at people* here they are
12-16 lines
no hate
crew
dickriding
feeding
biting
prewriting
thats about it anyways spit soon Specialized
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okay you know the rules but for the special voters *looks at people* here they are
12-16 lines
no hate
crew
dickriding
feeding
biting
prewriting
thats about it anyways spit soon Specialized
okay i've been gone for a while so if you dont spit by tonight im calling this a no-show, not that i want to win like that but i dont want to have to wait
i'm gonna spit in about 10 minutes, i've bin workin and only jus got in................................................ ...........................................
^thats cool, i'll be waiting for you .
i'm just about to spit so take to long to spit yours............................................. ..........................................
Yo, you sayin i'm a no show, what the fuck!
stop your bitch ass moanin dawg, my shit is off da hook,
u cud ov jus spat first, or do ya need ya time,
but there's no point in you spittin, cos this battle is mine.
Your jus another punk ass kid who thinks he's it,
sat at your your computer now with your rappin starter kit.
Your spits are unlyrical, your style is unsinicle,
u should just give up, before this shit gets criticle.
Just lay down now bitch, so that i can get past,
Y u so far behind dawg, am i movin to fast.
I'm a spittin machine, so y u goin dissin me,
just cos your locked behind a verbal door, and i've got the key.
peace!
yo dope, how long are ya gonna take to spit?............................................. ................................................
sorry, i just looked in here gimmie like 15 minutes to spit aight or is there a problem with that? i swear just give me like 15 minutes
Aight here we go *nervous* my first battle *shakes*
Yeah how ya doing homie how ya doin, oh sorry forgot i put you in ruins//
Take a shit and thats your spit, hmmm, well your rhymes so bad im suein//
If i improved your lines to the max they would be something flyin out of my sisters mouth//
She is a baby, cant talk, ya takin this in too quietly, i think ya minds flyin down south//
lets see you give me a punch, ha yea right, this is like some movie, a chick flick//
You might not take my punches so lightly, cant dodge 'em, even with the matrix//
You that kid that got duck taped and noone ever cared, they just stared//
I think that you think you won this, well if you did your vision is impared//
Lay down and take it soft because nothing else is a better option//
Your lines arent too oringinal, i think you bought them off an auction//
well if it makes you happy, this loss is for you, its Specialized//
Yeah im new, so are you but YOU will watch ME take a rise//
Now im done, your finished, now you are deminished, i ate my spinnache//(popeye)
Yeah this had strategy, like a game of cards, and you just lost at cribbage//
im out peace
specialized nice verse, lets see how this goes down, man this was my first battle *shakes again* man this should be good *man im nervous*
i havent seen anything happen here so i'll just up this for you guys, because if i do anything else it could still fall on my dr rep which i shouldnt have but i do so...........UP UP UPPING for you
This was a gud verse from both of ya peeps, and i dont know who 2 vote 4................................................. ............
it was good drop by both of ya and i keep comin up with a draw ether way i figure it so jus kepp elevating tha both of ya and dope you style kinda reminds me of amps, prolly just me tho
..resp..
yo dope, nice spit.............................................. .................................................. .....
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ................................................
still uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ............
is anyone gonna vote on this battle?........................................... ................................................
I think dope name got dis he had da structure and the flow
nice verses from both yall though
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still uppin 4 votes yall.............................................. .................................................
I can't vote yet, but this one's too close to call anyway. both need to elevate, but not bad all around
yo anyone that reads this hit my shit up and GET IT CLOSED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=72836
can people plz vote on this battle............................................ .................................................. ..
Pretty good from both. I'd have to call it a draw.
Peep Dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=73298
i give it specialised jus,both good anclose but i liked his verse better,drop a voteon these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...819#post705819
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...d=73060&perpag
still uppin for votes yall................................If ya vote on dis battle den i will vot on your battle......(Fairly)
uppin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. ......................................
Dope Name got this cause he had better punches. This was pretty good for a newd battle.
Vote=Dope Name
uppin............................................. .................................................. ..........................................
dope name got this one...betta punches and wordplay...props too both.............................................. .............
vote= dope name
o well..........still uppin for votes............................................. .................................................
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................
i lyked em both, but if I could vote I'd vote for Specialized. I just liked his verse better.
vote here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...D&pagenumber=2
aight im back i was over at a friends house, beside the point uppin for votes on this mutha right herr lol anyways VOTE!!
ya'll both need to elevate.....
but i'll do you a favor and vote....
lol..
close battle, after reading it twice...
hmm...
specialized, your verse was shorter which means nothing, but your punches were kinda weak until the middle....
the only line i liked was that starter kit line....
no meta's or wordlay, learn wut that is for text batteling, it'll help you out alot....
dope-name...
you had a couple ok lines...
sister thing...but the following line under it was weaker then ghandies arms after he starved himself for 80 years....lol...
overall verse...
punches wise...dope game got it clearly....
vote-dope game...
peep
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=73307
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .......................
still uppin............................................. .................................................. ....................
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................
uppin for votes, i've been gone for like three days exlcuding that one post, lets vote, or else your mom will reveal a secret about her :: which i dont know but it sounded threatening right :: lol
upidy up up up upping for this shit right up in hurr .
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................
if yall vote on these, ill come back and vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=72551
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=74067