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checkmate
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7680613
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droppin
Call my spits "ASIAN PAINTS" ...way they CHILL this cheap rapper's "Diss-Temper" for nerd plays...
N way I crash his "MULTIE(S) STORIES"...you'd think that I brought down anotha CENTER FOR WORLD TRADE !!!
Like "FAECES" from "CHURCH LOOS"...he gives "HOLY SHIT!"...just crap that he'll try ta write...
But way fool "SCRAPES" against my "THUNDER"...I guess he juzz prolly tryna "MATCH" with a "DYNAMITE" !!!
Like "Dot-Matrix" printers…..he "FAILS" when his AIM "Shifts" n comes ta whippin hard text…..!
N find his "Para–Lacks" the MOST, just when it comes ta hittin Targets!!!
Always linked with "POTATO-Heads"...He can't "CHIP-In" between battles without meeting my "BOIL Pots"...
Plus m creepin ta "Foil Plots"...Cuz he been tryin "OPEN SESAME"...So all we been gettin was "OIL"-"DROPS" !!!
His "Outlines Started Blurring" guess he "Poorly Focused",so Collabs / Collapse or not he gon Faint or Fall...
Guess his Brains Gon Crawl...Cuz ya'll won't see this fag "Do A MENDIS"...when he AIN'T GOT "BALLS" !!!
*1-his multies suck,asian paints-paint...diss-temper-DISTAMPER(related to paints)
*5-DO a MENDIS-do a men diss-and MENDIS-sri lankan bowler...
You’ll see ‘KRACK lines’ disappear like a fight to a pacifist
So fast as if they lingered too long near an addicts nasal passages
I’m famous for pointin out intentional played lines to you son
So another drug punch: There’s a reason Krack illegal for distribution
A massive bitch, that’s who he is, I got you sittin in last
KRACK the center of attention…maybe when you consider the ass
No petty theft, it’s like robbery the way I leave you jacked and broke
We all snickerin and laughing and the reason be: Krack a Joke
What am I gonna do? Well it’s true, the answers de-limb him
And ‘Rack will come up flat just like breast cancer victims
openers-malice.
multis and punch was nice butweak that mite make sense to you but idk.u still get the opener cus multis was nice.krack you whole first bar didnt make sense if you had to explain it and i still didnt get it dont use it bro lol.Quote:
You’ll see ‘KRACK lines’ disappear like a fight to a pacifist
punches-malice
your punches were nice a bit playd but nice none the less
multis-even
you both had dope multis krack wuda had it but a lot of it seemed crammed and shit so i make it even.
personals-none
nameplay-malice
cus you had word play lol
vote malice
dope battle from both both had some good lines n wit kracks closer. bro i dont watch cricket so i wont catch that line n proli other people wont either jus memba that for nxt time bro.
Call my spits "ASIAN PAINTS" ...way they CHILL this cheap rapper's "Diss-Temper" for nerd plays...
N way I crash his "MULTIE(S) STORIES"...you'd think that I brought down anotha CENTER FOR WORLD TRADE !!!
would've been better had u worded it properly and shortened it
vs
A massive bitch, that’s who he is, I got you sittin in last
KRACK the center of attention…maybe when you consider the ass
okay
No petty theft, it’s like robbery the way I leave you jacked and broke
We all snickerin and laughing and the reason be: Krack a Joke
I get what u were doin..didnt come off smooth but still decent-ish
This battle was an easy win for malice tbh..didnt have to do too much in the end for the win..couple of decent hits in his verse was enough. Krack ur opener was okay-ish but u really need to stop with the CAPS and "" coz it makes ur shit forced, disrupts ur flow and makes ur punches weaker. U need to elevate in a lot of aspects. No hate to either, keep up.
v/malice
1-0, thanks for the vote, upz1
2-0*
rtf vs fourloko btw
No probs at all :) i'll improve
Nd good battle malice
Call my spits "ASIAN PAINTS" ...way they CHILL this cheap rapper's "Diss-Temper" for nerd plays...
N way I crash his "MULTIE(S) STORIES"...you'd think that I brought down anotha CENTER FOR WORLD TRADE !!!
vs
A massive bitch, that’s who he is, I got you sittin in last
KRACK the center of attention…maybe when you consider the ass
No petty theft, it’s like robbery the way I leave you jacked and broke
We all snickerin and laughing and the reason be: Krack a Joke
Malice takes this easily with more consistency, and just making pure sense and having easy to read shit. He had way harder punches, better flow.
Krack, you're the first person I've seen on here that's actually getting TOO creative lol. Not many people know about cricket bowlers, and all those crazy wordplays you had there. The punches need to be direct and easy to understand, ya get what I'm saying? But you had ok concepts, just work and making easier to understand punches, formatting it right (You were way too stretched out, plus those capitals will annoy just about anybody). Good luck in your other battles.
v/Malice
Thanks for the vote moose, you forgot to poll it in though
3-0 upz3
Always linked with "POTATO-Heads"...He can't "CHIP-In" between battles without meeting my "BOIL Pots"...
Plus m creepin ta "Foil Plots"...Cuz he been tryin "OPEN SESAME"...So all we been gettin was "OIL"-"DROPS
vs
I’m famous for pointin out intentional played lines to you son
So another drug punch: There’s a reason Krack illegal for distribution
A massive bitch, that’s who he is, I got you sittin in last
KRACK the center of attention…maybe when you consider the ass
vote=malice,
better overall verse, better punches...krack, ok concepts, work on that strucure....seems so strtched...
4-0 upz, thnkz for the votes all, ill return the favor asap
4-0 upz will return votes, leave a link or pm it
4-0 upz6
good drops on both sides but malice had way better structure and flow and slightly better punches.krack had good concepts but the punches didnt connect and the flow and structure was all over the place.lines too long to,tighten it up some,usually the better it looks and easier it is to read makes a difference.
v=malice