Mafioso vs Personal

[Bender]

^^ well i guess i can't vote anyways cuz i dont have 150 posts yet so its all good...

[Mafioso.]

will u noobs pla gtfo with this swayin shit...dlb stfu and die already kid...its obvious I wasnt feedin cuz I said i asked him to join in my verse thats a feed?.,..fuck outta here faggots

[Moti]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
Cool concept and nicely executed
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
Not feeling this punch so much
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
Weak punch to be honest
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
Cool punch nice and creative
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
Nah this wasnt that good in my opinion
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
Ehh, in 06-07 these were in style, not so much now
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
The concept was ok, but it wasnt as effective w/ the wording
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
Nicely done, good closer

vs

I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
cool personal, and good opener
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
not that effective
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
fresh flip on a played concept
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
Nice wordplay good and creative
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
Idk if this has been done to dos, but it's nice
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
not bad
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
Played against him, coulda been done better
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
cool closer

Feedback, hope you appreciate it. If not take it as an up. Also, peep my battle w/ Moose35.

[Mafioso.]

uppin

[KRACK]

can't poll but givin feed back....
maf..dat was somethng dope nice punches good flow nice nameplay...damn mayne u take it..

personal...ur was good too...but u were weak in punches den mafioso...nd yeah ur concept in yo 5th bar is really fresh...

nice battle...

[Mafioso.]

uppin.

[Mafioso.]

uppin.,

[Mafioso.]

smh,

[Rich Porter]

You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
Ehh, would've been a lot better with harsher wording.
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
Nahh.
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
Lol. Ok.
and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
Dec-o.
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
Nahh.
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
This was cool.
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
Nah.
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
Naw, this was weak.

vs.

I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
Alright personal.
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
Nahh.
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
Alright, this was cool.
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
Lol. Alright.
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
Aha. Good.
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
Naw, wasn't feeling this.
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
Naw, wording threw this off.
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
Naw, this was weak.

All in all this was a pretty good battle. I liked Personal's approach on his verse but a lot of his shit was hit or miss. On the other hand I thought Maf's verse was a lot more consistent. So he takes this on here.

Vote Mafioso.

Link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...087/index.html

[WordzWorth]

December 24th, 2009
You could say I'm from the government, my job's to see what all the fail's about
I saw the mob's been depressing from the start, so I just joined to bail them out
3/5 good
cuz the crew ain't launderin money, they ain't cheatin either, it's fuckin wackness
so when I'm saying dude's a 'fraud', it's only cuz he talks shit but can't back it
2/5 just sounds bland to me
mafs had a fascination with scarface since he was young, dude was movin mad penny's
but he couldn't do "say hello to my little friend", cuz we knew he didn't have any
5/5 lmao very nice

and I found out he's from Windham, though the name he calls it is old now
either way I can beat maf at will, like I was doing it in his own town!
4/5 good
but I'm proud of where I'm from, that ain't the thing vexin me
cuz the only thing bad about my state, is that he's in the one next to me
5/5 lmao liked this
and I heard people touch up his verses, yet surely he won't acknowledge it
I can polish one up for him tho, if it comes off my shoe when I'm fuckin stompin it
1/5 nah
he also tries to claim he's tops on the site, but that shit really is dumb
cuz getting a win is something he can't manage, like the fuckin business he runs
2/5 meh
and he's been askin me to be mob for months, but it shoulda been me appointing you
when the first good bar mafiosa's ever had, is when skillustrious joined the crew
4/5 nice personal

26/40

I slum vets, u claim ur dope and the crown is sumthin u goin come get.
but you've been in 898908908 champ matches...and havent won 1 yet
4/5 lmao nice
and keep sayin young is wack, in the end he's gonna beat u too.
cuz ur arms are to short to box wit god...Tay, or any1 else in the crew.
3/5 nice
back then u were OK, but now you'll neva be a beasty raw cat.
cuz u use so many old concepts u might ass well write in B.C. format.
3/5 nice
ur called wack, I never heard anyone say they feel ya shit.
so if ur skills are infinite... I'ma fuckin bently out the dealership.
4/5 lol liked this
I'ma kill this bitch, he's classifed as one of the single ladies.
cuz once young BEAT em he bitched and said Dos more than Bilinguel babies.
5/5 lmao very nice
I'm fuckin wavy, u crazy if u think ur dope! to join us yea I asked u.
I thought u had good heritage...but u make us looker wacker than that crew.
5/5 lmao
after this he'll cry N make a om, claimin we're nerds in a ditch.
but he's a clown and I dont need played namplays to prove that Pers is a bitch.
2/5 nah
u will always be a wack textcee! we will neva see u on smack or grindtime
cuz onlytime voters say "dope, Personal"...is after they read my lines.
4/5 nice

30/40

very close battle...
v/maf for having more consistent verse