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I battled him once and it was a no show.
& Him beating me, would only be by a low blow.
Im gonna take this herb to school- to be enlightened.
He wouldn’t land a punch- even if he were a Titan!
Don’t get heated up and go into rage.
You’re a worthless piece of shit….
…That gets paid minimum wage.
Yea, you’re an element of the letter L, bitch hoe.*
Your gonna lose to me twice, so the equation is, L2= Never beating Rizzo.**
And when I write, you can say Im adequate.
But when he types, you can say he sucks-at-it.
*Element L- Loss
**Loss x2 equals never beating me.
I've been sittin' back thinkin' how exactly do I expect to beat Rizzo....?
I'll blow off his dome like this kid thought it was fun playin' with pistols
Ya steady showin' ya skills? Take the loss like I provided truama-tise
I've let this crew fungus grow for so long.........i mean garbage wise....
I like the certain fact you brought the battle, u lacking some stuff?
A verse that could bring some heat as if....hells packing your lunch....
I didn't mean to skimp the first battle, ha, its insane to think...breathe....
Rizzo cant put down a breath of a win for me that I couldn't squeeze...
I showed up the second time, and i brought ya to your knee caps
What was i doin' the first time?.....Puttin ya chicks brains back
There, i'll get my links.
votes up
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lmao weakest battle i seen in a while rizoo very bland very simple weak punches titan also weak punches but i lil bit more complex wordin than riz v/titan
Rizzo
I battled him once and it was a no show.
& Him beating me, would only be by a low blow.
ok i see where u were goin with this so/so
Im gonna take this herb to school- to be enlightened.
He wouldn’t land a punch- even if he were a Titan!
nope
Don’t get heated up and go into rage.
You’re a worthless piece of shit….
…That gets paid minimum wage.
nice flow on this one...this actually hurt a bit lol
Yea, you’re an element of the letter L, bitch hoe.*
Your gonna lose to me twice, so the equation is, L2= Never beating Rizzo.**
wasnt feelin it
And when I write, you can say Im adequate.
But when he types, you can say he sucks-at-it.
okay
Titan
I've been sittin' back thinkin' how exactly do I expect to beat Rizzo....?
I'll blow off his dome like this kid thought it was fun playin' with pistols
this one really didnt hit home
Ya steady showin' ya skills? Take the loss like I provided truama-tise
I've let this crew fungus grow for so long.........i mean garbage wise....
I LIKED THIS ONE. had a matter of fact feeling to it
I like the certain fact you brought the battle, u lacking some stuff?
A verse that could bring some heat as if....hells packing your lunch....
this was more of a filler bar no real attack here
I didn't mean to skimp the first battle, ha, its insane to think...breathe....
Rizzo cant put down a breath of a win for me that I couldn't squeeze...
this was ok
I showed up the second time, and i brought ya to your knee caps
What was i doin' the first time?.....Puttin ya chicks brains back
nothing hitting here
V/ Rizzo
this battle to me a bit to decide but Rizzo wasa bit more aggressive in his verse. his words were directed at Titan. while Titan had better wordplay, he wasnt as offensive.
Yea, you’re an element of the letter L, bitch hoe.*
Your gonna lose to me twice, so the equation is, L2= Never beating Rizzo.**
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Vote-Rizzo....both had decent flow, but rizzo had the only thing resembling a punch..all the other stuff, while meant to diss, was really just filler.
BTW Rizzo, lose the explenations...the lines aren't that witty...we'll get them.
Thanks for the feedback. And sickmaster what kind of vote is that?
Rizzo, lose the explanations dude most cats here can identify a punch and also add some witt, you had the minnimum wage line that hit pretty hard and well ST didn't really have anything that was hard hitting to go along w/ his verse. Both of you need to add some multies and Rizzo your lines are too short try make them like 9-10 words long like most cats here.
Yea, you’re an element of the letter L, bitch hoe.*
Your gonna lose to me twice, so the equation is, L2= Never beating Rizzo.**
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rizzo ur first verse was better than this one ur only good punch seemed a little forced on the rhyme but titan didnt throw anything but filler
V/rizz
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rizz, if ppl were voting on how well the verses were written, you wouldn't have all the votes you've got cuz in that respect your verse stinks. it's way too simple n it doesn't have any solid wit or creativity. just seemed elementary as fuck. i think titan easily had the best bars of the battle, even though some heads think he was throwing filler, his good hits were better than all of your hits really, he def weren't coming with nothing in my eyes.
3 to 1???
You seriously have to be kidding me... i've been gone a week, and this shit ain't over? i'm not gonna sway the votes here, but i think some people really need to read some verses... lmao Blurt had the best explanation here....
I battled him once and it was a no show.
& Him beating me, would only be by a low blow.
nope
Im gonna take this herb to school- to be enlightened.
He wouldn’t land a punch- even if he were a Titan!
nah...
Don’t get heated up and go into rage.
You’re a worthless piece of shit….
…That gets paid minimum wage.
wow...wack
Yea, you’re an element of the letter L, bitch hoe.*
Your gonna lose to me twice, so the equation is, L2= Never beating Rizzo.
meh...**
And when I write, you can say Im adequate.
But when he types, you can say he sucks-at-it.
wack
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I've been sittin' back thinkin' how exactly do I expect to beat Rizzo....?
I'll blow off his dome like this kid thought it was fun playin' with pistols
nah..
Ya steady showin' ya skills? Take the loss like I provided truama-tise
I've let this crew fungus grow for so long.........i mean garbage wise....
meh...
I like the certain fact you brought the battle, u lacking some stuff?
A verse that could bring some heat as if....hells packing your lunch....
nope
I didn't mean to skimp the first battle, ha, its insane to think...breathe....
Rizzo cant put down a breath of a win for me that I couldn't squeeze...
nah..
I showed up the second time, and i brought ya to your knee caps
What was i doin' the first time?.....Puttin ya chicks brains back
wack
guys very wack battle. Im giving it to Rizzo for that L punch, sadly the only thing that resembled one here. Elevate guys.
v/Rizzo-
dman this shit sucked like a leaf in a Hoover Vac.
Rizzo wins for better structure but just a bunch of statements with no real clever wordplay on either side, just played garbage, and Rizzo attempted personals but they were weak as fucking shit.
V/R