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No fucking noob votes!!!
RidiculeCloud999
AeRoDyNaMiXz
10 - 15 lines due in 2 hours after check.
No fucking noob votes!!!
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mvar!o vs scoobie
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=429159
badboikilla92 vs licketysplit96
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=428685
Look.....
Im the type to give credit where credit is due
But I got a feeling the credits Im givin dont belong to you//
Spit flow thats wack is something I dont do//
I take you down by myself I dont need a crew//
Its just me, myself, and numeral uno
I sent new trends like I was a black Bruno//
And yes for you all im reffering to the movie
I attract more attention than big titted groupies//
I got your girl screamn Aero just do me//
Im a volcano thats yet to erupt
And I need to get out so much that ive got bottled up//
ANd Ive decided to take it out on you
Cuz honestly I have nothing better to do//
This verse may be weak but I put out my soul
I wont give a damn if I dont get 1 fuckin vote
Off the top off the head, my rhymes are never wrote//
At least I had the balls not to choke
Good. This is good. Can't vote. But if i could this would go to Aero.
Fav line:
Its just me, myself, and numeral uno
I sent new trends like I was a black Bruno//
And yes for you all im reffering to the movie
I attract more attention than big titted groupies//
EL Diablo= I have sinned again.
you're not aerodynamic, cause your lines are a drag
you're rhymes are drawn out, shit this aint anime
mixz "tongue twisted", got nothing to say
he has a "prism in his mouth", words are rainbow displays(gay!)
when im finished he'll be crippled trying to spit a crutch out
witness my linguistics. this is ridicule cloud
take acid and rain, yo i'm ending my drought
with a one-two punch, man you can't even count
so its says you're getting heavier, but you're looking anerexic
you've got a thin chance of winning
even with the 999 fitness essence
hooked on those and anti depressants
quit bitching, get the message
i didnt need to kill this fool
he killed himself after the check in
999 fitness essence- an herbal dietary drug that comes in the form of a capsule and aims to assist women with weight reduction. This weight loss pill endeavors to “decompose” fat.
Nevermind forgot to refresh the page. I think this one goes to RidiculeCloud999.
Fav lines:
when im finished he'll be crippled trying to spit a crutch out
witness my linguistics. this is ridicule cloud
take acid and rain, yo i'm ending my drought
with a one-two punch, man you can't even count
EL Diablo= I have sinned again.
Im the type to give credit where credit is due
But I got a feeling the credits Im givin dont belong to you//
No punch, weak, lame, and no creativity, you had one word in there three times, and it just killed it dude.
Spit flow thats wack is something I dont do//
I take you down by myself I dont need a crew//
I liked this line, but you didn't really punch him with it... neither one of yous in a crew... so it didn't work out as a personal or nothing.... no...
Its just me, myself, and numeral uno
I sent new trends like I was a black Bruno//
no.....nothing.
And yes for you all im reffering to the movie
I attract more attention than big titted groupies//
......same dude...nothing.
I got your girl screamn Aero just do me//
Im a volcano thats yet to erupt
And I need to get out so much that ive got bottled up//
ANd Ive decided to take it out on you
Cuz honestly I have nothing better to do//
This verse may be weak but I put out my soul
I wont give a damn if I dont get 1 fuckin vote
Off the top off the head, my rhymes are never wrote//
At least I had the balls not to choke
........no dude... you ended the way a newbie would choke on the end of the verse dude.... never go out blamin' ya self, or expecting a loss, you bring ya head up and bring out a killer closer fool, ... you lack creativity , bring ya punches outta ya ass man....
Vs
mixz "tongue twisted", got nothing to say
he has a "prism in his mouth", words are rainbow displays(gay!)
You coulda worded this different but i liked the way you came up with it... but still you were way off on it... you shouldna put tounge twisted... it didn't work in it... props...
witness my linguistics. this is ridicule cloud
take acid and rain, yo i'm ending my drought
Aiight.... your workin' on it.... lol
so its says you're getting heavier, but you're looking anerexic
you've got a thin chance of winning
even with the 999 fitness essence
There we go... woot woot, shoulda worked more on the delevery... work on it
i didnt need to kill this fool
he killed himself after the check in
There you fuckin' go... you ended it the way it fuckin' needed to! congrats... i thought i was gonna read through it all and you not have an idea still, but that was a punch that i liked. lol. nice one.
I didn't qoute the rest cloud, cuz they were fillers, nothing to really bring up and show you... you need to work on the rest, its not just a couple that count, bring heat through the whole battle.
Vote - Cloud.... elevate n hollah
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uppin
both of you had some horrible styles, lol Not talking shit though when i first came on this site i was the same but try reading some battles from the veterans on this site look @ their style and add your own twist to it. Aero you had alot of lines but not alot of it was dirrect some of it was self glory and other parts were irrelevant dude. Cloud you didnt have anything very hard hitting as well but you were dirrect. so Not a very good battle but my vote goes to RC999
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