Rock, Paper, Scissors.

Rock

He stare’s with no remark...
Unspoken art dwells in the coldest hearts,
Frozen, parched– his eyes never show the part,
Of a life that’s been too shattered, unfocused starts
Broken, dark, and vengeful; It takes its toll..
Until no one can ever penetrate his soul,
And he strains his growth, never forgetful, so
Everyone around him never gets too close,
Never mention those .. – He’s silent instead,
Yet violently is portraying all his spiteful regrets,
And the prideful expects that he’ll come around,
But his emotion goes unmoved on ferocious grounds,
Hopeless now; It sucks, but given his wrath,
The future seems unrealistic, he lives in the past,
Unforgiven, he’s trapped; No one could try to relate,
So the steel covers his heart, hiding his hate.

Paper

Precisely humble..
Yet when confronted, his pride will stumble..
He’ll likely crumble, fitting in,
A crises, tunnel of broken endeavors
Never up to face anything, he’ll fold under pressure
Scolded, the effort...he puts in for being liked
But he’s fleeing fights, struggling, ducking beatings, life
Is a tease, deceiving wife; Confusing and more,
He gets abused, then thrown away, he’s no use anymore
Choosing to store...his problems in the back of his mind
Never grasping the time, his paths lead
To pain and laughter combined
Awkward, but after, it’s fine;
`Cause he’s patient, in spite
Because he knows...
That there’s another page to his life.

Scissors

Goes unexplained to others..
Why he inflicts this constant pain..on his tainted lover,
Estranged marriage; Covered, devoured in strife
He never bothers to explain..cutting her out of his life,
It turned sour despite all the hopes for the better,
So their hope became hopelessness, the hoping was never
Yet the coping was treasured, but the bargain was hard
The bleeding became too constant,
From the scars on their hearts;
Overpowering parts, but the love lately hurts..
So to avoid problems, they remain cautious,
And use safety first.

-Nique.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326936

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326959

When/If you respond, I'll RTF.

This was a pretty dope piece. But some parts fell off, but you managed to pull back through with it. So no hate, I enjoyed reading it. You stayed on topic, and the flow was on point, definitely..... keep them comin, and ill be sure to check out more from ya....

Please Nique, write more :)

I love the way you write Nique, it's so smooth and the fluidity of every line is outstanding. I love the way you took the topic. I think Nahlidge did this topic a while back, but I can't say I like his more. The word choice is very much a strong point for you. The last section was your best IMHO, the Scissors section, just mainly because it brought the whole thing together really. Cool piece again. Might nominate this in a bit, gonna think though.

Could you please...
Mariah ft. Engivale "Self Denial"

I love the whole concept and how you tied those three parts together into a story
innovative - who thinks to make rock paper scissors into three different phase of a relationship loved it .

I saw this topic on WYR, but there was no way i was touching it. Risky topic, but you pulled it off well. The stories coming together at the end isn't surprising, because knowin a writer as strong as you would somehow weave the stories together, but you did it seemlessly as possible. great piece, im gonna check out your battle too, i havent gotten the chance.

Thanks.

A god take on this topic. I liked how you used the verious objects to represent a character and the description was on point...wasn't sure how you would do the scissors but yeah the aggrasive..thing was done good. Personally i liked the rock part most, to me it was the most solid and best described, though it is mostly a preffered thing. OVerall, this was quite a good read and very enojyable..one that i could read throughout without it seeming to drag on. Good work, stay up^.

some comments
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327168

I thought this was one of the most creative OM's i have had the pleasure of reading for a while, you had a good idea and did a great job. your structure was there, but the important part was that the content kept me wanting to read it. i also thought you had good complexity, but not over the top, overall much props like always for your OM's nique.

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Original as fuck sweetheart, kept me reading til the end and taking every word in. You never cease to surprise me. Good vocab, strong as hell imagery and a decent use of multi's to help the flow along. Consider this nominated. Shit like this was worth getting back on the net for.

Keep posting.

Wow, dope shit there was imagery there and lots of creativity in this peice very well put together, emotion was good and the multies were nice as hell..the scissors part for some reason was my favourite part of all...they were all good but that part was best and I liked how you put a twist into it aswell this was just good in alot of aspects man overall a dope drop.

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this piece was difrent from ma normal reads as it doesnt lack much.
u had a pretty dope topic to write about an you did make a good read fo me.

You came with nice rhymes which i think everyone would agree on and so what if you fell off a few times, this was a pretty hard wun to write. You done good in this piece with the emotion and also your great vocab. Keep writing coz u can only get beta.

Thanks guys I'ma hit your pieces up.

One of the rare pieces I actually enjoyed reading here on RB.
I like your style more than anything`
The portrait of struggle that goes on everyday you painted was pretty dope`
Plus you have -Aristotle quote on your sig
Coolio`

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134876

Dope in every aspect. Good shit Nique.

Upping over bullshit because this deserves more feedback

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327810

I thought this flowed really well, you made this really good. Took thought & developed throughout... You are really good at OM's, I liked the way you portrayed this peice. It was origional. They way you used expression with a known phraise, and charectoristics almost for each different one, that a person could pick the path... One of the better peices on here. Truely.