and the lord sayith: Go Out and Distroy(GOD) (completed 12 track ep)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=655336

me(unseen prophetic visionary)
produced by SS...
and most beats made by archaic....
all 12 songs are heat....
theres no hate in this thred i have moved to a new level so you can like the songs and leave feedback or you can kill yourself cuz this is the next phaze of hip hop...the bands name is GOD or Go Out and Distroy...all songs are metaphoricle parables about religion in hopes to open your minds


uppen

ok so you made 12 tracks and you want me to listen to all of them and feed on them? okay thats to much man....I'll listen to one and tell you what i think. ANd P.S. how was my lyrics bad? I packed punchlines in the verses and multiples throughout. Unless you not feelin what I'm sayin with my words.

Anyway for your feed....
Listen to "Welcome To God" okay voice is kinda young soundin...Your delivery is very low and ya flow is off here and there. You seem really uncomfortable with the mic duke. Ya lyrics are okay i'm not focused on them cause i can't understand them when ya flow is everywhere. Ya vocals need to be turned up a bit as well man...the beat is boring to me needs somin in it. Ya quality is also kinda weak, it's not too bad but it's coo duke. no hate at all man just being honest with ya....overall decent job would like to see you deliver and practice ya lyrics a little more before you record.

thanks for the feed back ill except any feedback i can get...uppen on some more

oh and no hate on lyrics coment i didnt feel your delivery which made the lyrics sound off to me but to each there own and no hate....honestly ill go back and listen again cuz i cant remember any lines of your song as an example of why i didnt feel it...ill send you a message or something....

uppen

wow stop being a bunch of sleeping ass mother fuckers....
uppen

this CD aint a pillow so stop sleeping on it!!!

imma critique track 6 , if im feelin it ill DL it ,

beat im not really feelin , just not my steez ,

flow was ok sounded more like spoken word on a beat ,

not bad def a diff vibe to it . Ill check a few more .

-Kamikaze Lyricist

that wasnt me in track six i was puttin on my home boy....but thanks for the feed back


uppen

wut 1's ya fave? i'll feed that one.

wow thats a hard question...probably my dreams are all dead and burried or.....god is dead is phat i think evil as hell sounding...thank you religion is realy inteligent...the beat in almighty spoken word is insainly awesome....and the lyrics and in almighty warpig although alittle in your face i like alot....any one of those...idk just pick one...the only one that is a skit is the little city song...thanks for asking though....uppen

wow! how did my feedback get deleted thats bullshit

uppen sence somehow my other feed got deleted

i listened to a couple...i think with the delivery or w/e, it sounds more like you're just stating your lyrics instead of feeling them, i still have problems with that myself....on the dreams dead n buried one, i think u might be trying to squish to much in one line which is messing ur flow... the main thing tho is getting into your lyrics, like para said, pracitce them and feel them, instead of just saying them...that's pretty much it, lyrics r str8, maybe vocals up on track 1 likepara said, otherwise, it was good stuff...

thanks...you made my day...this CD was recorded so fast i realy didnt memorize all my lyrics like i usualy do and i no the vocals need to be mixed better...so thanks for the feed main...

uppen

dude i love this fuckin CD

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Originally Posted by Xdicy

thanks...you made my day...this CD was recorded so fast i realy didnt memorize all my lyrics like i usualy do and i no the vocals need to be mixed better...so thanks for the feed main...

uppen

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u really should take ur time when makin a cd, even if u aint gon push it, u want ppl 2 feel it so they will becomes n possibly cop a cd in tha future

take ur time when u do shit, it turns out better

yo i realize that but it was such drive i took most time writing with this cuz its a wordy CD... i tried to change lives in this CD not move bodies which is different then not only my own CD's befor this but most shit out at all right now... so what if in 1 or two songs my delivery sounds off...unless there trying not to hear the lyrics they will and hopefully they'll see this CD is more then hiphop...atleast thats how i feel about it...i learned shit writing this CD and researching for this CD...fuck i find shit in my lyrics that touches me in ways i didnt even mean to do...but none the less i hope people take it for what it is;the first addition to an assortment of CD's that will change and save those who allow it too...

uppen
(sorry for spelling errors)

fuck this garbage

here's a real track

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326276

well i hope all is well yo, hope u help some1, do what u gotta do, im jus sayin, tha more time u take in perfectin ur cd/album/lp or w/e u puttin out, tha more ppl will think "this guy is really serious bout what he is doin" cause u kno, ANYBODY can rap, ANYBODY can make music, it takes a certain SOMEBODY to do it right tho. im jus sayin, perfect ur craft, take ur time, make sure everything is as perfect as u want it to be n then ur all set

also, try to get a job n upgrade ur recording equipment, from tha looks of what ur typin, u take what u do serious, so save up bout $400-$1000 (possibly even more) n head over to tha audio help/tips section n they can work out what u should get

hells yeah main...thanks for the word of advise...i am looking into upping the quality...and agree with the statement of perfecting your craft...

oh and to syndicate....i said in the first post that im not on any hate shit...dont bring your own insicurities to my fucking table and ask me to lower myself to your idiotic levil...as i said battle me or shut your fucking mouth...your fake and whack as all hell...find the balls to off yourself befor someone does it for you....and about that song you left a link to....hahahaha...your delivery sounds like your retarded..and your 19? you should inlist so you can shot over oil bitch...your not even flowing!dude why would you leave a link on this shit with a shity song....you quote GW?hahahaha i think you and him got the same IQ probably...you clowned yourself leaving this shit here...second verse sounds like another overcompinsaiting idiot...hahahaha...the rhymes are like 2 year old shit..if this is your def. of a hot song then your retarded...you said the iraqi people arent taking our lives in consideration...lol your the dumbest person i've ever heard...the third verse got better delivery but the perpetual ignorance in you song makes me sad for how dumb you are.. i cant even finish listening to this...fuck goerge W bush and fuck you for being fake...you could inlist but you'd rather make songs about it...real tuff ..grow up little bitch
sorry for mis-spelled words...

uppen

1st off...callin yourself GOD is really ignorant...seriously, you might wanna consider a name change...its hard to respect someone using that alias...especially when they are wack

lmao@ya quality...what the fuck, are you spitting through ya headphones or somethin? I actually stopped the track after the intro cos ya voice sounded like it's yet to hit puberty...don't ever talk shit about me again...and yo talk about my fam one more time and i'ma hire a hitman to merk ya ass...trust me, shit can happen...

LoL calm down on this mofucka syndicate... He's off in his own fucking world dawg, you aint the only one seein that shit don't worry.

yall are the only to in here who've said that...oh and retard i didnt call myself god..your a fucking retard...look at the whole thred the name of the CD and the whole reason behind it is 'the lord sayith:Go Out & Destroy' do you no what an acranim is...probably not..your song sucks and jayfro didnt leave feed and obviosly is rhyding on syndicates dick if he says that the prisoners of war song was anything better then a piece of shit that is left in the toilet the morning after your eat white castle..for real get the fuck out of my thred cuz im not an ignorant piece of white trash lik yall and if your black then we all no what black white trash is...i'm not gonna lower myself to say it....fuck off or atleast leave feedback damn!
uppen

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Originally Posted by #1 Syndicate

1st off...callin yourself GOD is really ignorant...seriously, you might wanna consider a name change...its hard to respect someone using that alias...especially when they are wack

lmao@ya quality...what the fuck, are you spitting through ya headphones or somethin? I actually stopped the track after the intro cos ya voice sounded like it's yet to hit puberty...don't ever talk shit about me again...and yo talk about my fam one more time and i'ma hire a hitman to merk ya ass...trust me, shit can happen...

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dude if your talking shit about my Cd and think your song is better then your lying to yourself...if you saw me you little bitch you would shit your pants...im 17 so yeah im a lil young but my voice comes off high on the mic cuz my nose is broke in 2 places...kinda makes breathing hard on the mic...and through headphones your shit sounded like you were rapping into a dixie cup with wax string inbetween..your playing yourself...your nown for being a mark ass little hater...i give real feedback to pleople you suck dick and make songs about going to war but your too afraid to so fuck you you fake ass bitch...


oh and "shit can happen" ahh i see.. im so afraid you gonna make a song where you dont mention my name or throw any punches at me? are you gonna shoot me with the guns your fake ass doesnt have...i dont even care your dumb as shit and anyone who hears your whack ass overcompinsation of a song knows that...goerge bush is the worst president we've had maybe excluding nixion and you quote him in a song like you look up to him..soo cool im in my own world...right i hope osama bin laden him self drops a dirty bomb right on your house with your mom and grandma cooking dinner and you sitting on your computer trying to be half the MC i am....now put your foot in your mouth cuz your 19 with the brains of 5 yr old and im 17 with the brains of a 25 yr old...deal with it

First of all... Learn how to spell "ACRONYM", and learn what the fuck it is before you use the term. Got the brains of a 25 year old bum stupid fuck.

sence wen did speling detrmin yur brain learning levil...

sence that fag wanted to rhyde on 1 sydicates dick...fuck the whole lot of them cock cowboys...listen to the music forget the fact that i cant spell cuz when people other then you retards online open there eyes my spelling wont matter...my music is better...my flow though not perfect, is better. my lyrics though not the best are way better...fuck everything i do is better then 1 syndicate and his gang of gay boy friends...so non retards leave some feedback please

uppen
hahaha like i dont no what ACRONYM means...G stands for go...O stands for out and D stands for destroy...if you didnt get that then your dumb for calling me out over nothing you fucking bitch and yeah im talking to jayfro....or #1 sydicate its hard to keep track with all these ignorant white trash or black trash(we all no what black trash is i'm not saying it but it starts with an N and ends with a R) dumbys talking shit...so make your music better and stop worrying bout my spelling

oh also I notice the fact that jayfro's obvios cock rhyding ass still couldnt say sydicates song was better... i wonder why...

This was pretty decent.

Despite you not being very good at absorbing feedback.... I'ma give you some. My first bit of advice would be... Stop rapping... However, I doupt that's gonna happen so i'll start wit this. LISTEN TO THE FUCKING BEAT, AND RIDE IT. I swear yo it sounds like you're trying to be twista in some parts with no rhythm. I mean for people like you rhythm usually comes with time... So anyways. Most the time it really does seem like your talking... into the mic.. work on dat... And oohh yea, just so you know i'm being honest, I do think most your tracks were better then syndicate one I heard, havn't heard much of his shit though... Guess that makes you feel better?

no not feel better...but i dont think your a hater....thanks for the feed

uppen

You sound hella like Eyedea. .

Actually, come to think about you've kind of got a whole Rhymesayer feel goin' on. .



i'm diggin the Thank You Religion track. . *looks up zerosterism*


i'm diggin the whole concept album idea, and for the most part it's hard to tell that you have shitty equipment. . I think it's masked well because of the hot mixing. .

but sometimes it seems as if you are trying to get ahead of yourself to the point where you fall off the beat. . which gets annoying. . try slowing down a little? I dunno. .


With that being said, for the most part your content is on point, it's just seems as if you are trying to do too much sometimes. .


buttttttt. . .

I just downloaded that Religion track, so take solace in that. ^_^

wow...your the first person to compair to eyedea who is one of idols so thank you...rhyme sayers is the shit...thanks for the feed..the next CD will be done in a month or so...its called "sorry!Gone Out Drinking" or GOD....ill take all Feed from this thred into consideration while doing so...unless its retarded
uppen

ok im listening to track 4..man i hate this beat
you remind me of split a lil, i dunno i think you picked the wrong beat..vocals a lil low..no doubt your lyrics are nice..have alot of meaning to them..i think your flow is a lil fast for the beat..maybe its just me but...
overall.. its not my type of music at all. but if its you n shit..good work

thx for feeding my shit man

yo man thats a skit not a song...but thanks for the feed......that beat was a joke i did on purpose....but thx anyway

uppen

that song wont be on the cd as of 6 o clock today..

that is the only song i skip when i listen to this cd..

and i dont want to have one of those cds

w e ne ed some ne w feed back hur

well..flow was pretty good...lyrics are on point...i was really throwed off by the beat..wasnt feeln your beat of choice with a lil old school drums and sum scary samps..but delivery is there..and it was not bad..keep it up..

k I peeped "god is dead".....wow this beat is SUPER amatuer.....ok u trying the fast flow but u stumbling over alot of syllables...it sounds sloppy...def not feeling your voice...its really nasally but I wont hold it against u, on verse 2 it sounds like u trying really hard to mimic aesop rock...lyrically u had simplistic metaphors, but u had metas so that counts for something....the hook is terrible man....u needed a melody or something to make it catchy....awww outro is bad man u shoulda jus echoed the "god god is dead" instead of saying it over an over that was beyond annoying....all in all I can respect your religion focused EP but this song needs alot of polishing.

second verse wasnt me...but thanks for the feedback...the chorus was originaly going to be trent rezner from NIN singing GOD is dead but i didnt want to use anymore songs without permision so we did it ourselfs...
ill take the feedback into concideration on the next CD...thanks for the feed

uppen

this is very different not bad just different raps skills are shown so fix the sound and u straight

this cd sucks...ass...

i wouldnt pay 50 cents for this shit...
you should just quit tyrying to rap so you stop making yourself look stoopid


and whats with those terrible beats and lame ass production...

quit now and save yourself the trouble