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Last edited by #1 Syndicate; February 9th, 2007 at 09:57 PM
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lyrics weren't bad. though i'm not gonna lie, i'm feelin like not only did you not put enough emotion in your voice, your flow was choppy in alota spots. before you go dissin on me like you do everyone.. realize i'm just being honest
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ok
what spots were chopped?
I just went to listen to it again... And I was gonna tell you, in a little more detail, what I thought was chopped and could have been better... Why you delete it? The concept was there... Lyrics were there for the most part. Just needed some work homi
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I'ma fix it...you was right, I was listening to it through headphones and it sounded good...my crib is real strict about noise so when I got the chance to actually hear it I noticed what you was sayin...
fix it right...you new it sucked and ggot scared cuz i was clowning ya...your such a lil bitch..battle me already so i can officialy say i whiped my 17 year old "young" ass with your fake wonna be gangsta military ass..please battle me...just one audio battle...ill make my song a minute and yours can be 2 ill still rip you to 4 pieces and then pass you out as after battle snacks to my boys...hahaha...bitch
Xdicy... Will you seriously shut the fuck up please? Quote: "so I can seriously say I whiped my 17 year old ass". Bro your so fucking ignorant, proof read your fucking posts 5 times before submitting. New rule for you.
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in comparison to his song my ignorance of spelling is very unimportant...so your playing yourself bitch...jayfro would you seriously make an audio that doesnt suck...then you can talk shit to a real MC till then im laughing at you while you make yourself look dumb supporting this whack ass song....
your story of a criminal song is fucking horrable...your fake as shit..with your no emotion at all.hahahahaha...lyrics corny and voice sounds like you want to be street...realy WANT TO BE.....but not...yer fake...
Last edited by Xdicy; February 13th, 2007 at 03:00 PM
Gay
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Bro... I'm not supporting his song first of all. And if my shit is so wack why the famous Bheat thinkin bout lettin my verse get featured on his song? Not boosting myself up... But yo, I just don't understand HOW you seriously call yourself a real MC. I mean, your claiming someone to be fake when you've never met them homi, I don't even feel the need to talk shit bout how wack I think you are... Cause not only can you not spell, nor rap, you try tellin peeps they fake over the internet cuz you know dam well you a scurry ass bitch in person. Oh well.. Edit... Godam, you seriously hatin on my one lil track I didn't put much emotion into? The emotion was in the lyrics yo.. Just listen to the feedback you get . "sounds like you talkin into the beat". hahahahahaa
Last edited by JayFro407; February 13th, 2007 at 09:22 PM
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