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stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
lol
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
My fault man.
My internet has fucked up, but it's straight now.
I will drop within 30 min.
Finally someone in FL who drops decent.....
...but not decent enough
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
nice try
uppin.#1
This battle was too good to be slept on.
UP
v//coop
harder 10 linez overall
datz simple to see
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
lol, uppin this..
vote titan obviously he merked son. other kat came weak ... wtf break a nail fuck outta here man
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
Tightan - nice punchlines...ill word play
Coop - clean flow and a couple punchlines
bottom line... tightan came harder....takes it ...
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
k
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
kool.
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
k
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
k
lol
lol...no
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
stretched but cool
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
this flow iis off..hella nice flow and cool punch
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
lol this is kool mayne flow is ill
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
lol
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
dont kno history here so...
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
k
tightan ur verse was cool but coop hit it off with that verse!!
coops verse had me in stitches and that flow is prolly best i seen in a text battle it was some punchy n cool shit..
and coconut pete... wtf at u sayin get outta here at nail line that was funny as fuck...
obvious vote goes to coop here !!!!!
props
lmao... someone.. lol... help... roflQuote:
Originally Posted by tensor rating coops punch
yeh i felt that when i read ur verse too.... its all funny shit nigga x................................................. ...............burn.......................
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
( attempt at a personal. but weak)
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
(meh)
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
(nah, what the fuck)
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
( ight)
lol
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
( creative but weak)
overall a weak verse ya didnt come with hard punches, some showed crativity but others jus flopped, ight flow and structure, descent use of vocab
average verse
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
( nice personal, lil played)
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
(meh)
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
( meh)
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
(ight, bit basic)
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
( ight)
came weak with punches as well, but ya had some personals that hit, (not very hard) but they atleast hit. Ight flow and structure, basic wordplay and vocab, descent showing of creativity. but ya got it with yea personals
v/coop
better personals
im guessing you never actually looked at a box of oatmeal in your entire life.. lamo
seriously uppin..
Tightan clearly hit harder this battle. Wow, by a lot. Nice drop here, much better then your 2v2... MUCH. Drop like this some more and ur win record is gunna rise high.
Coop your flow and wordplay was tight, and i felt all of it, but you never went after tightan, never even hit him hard at all, gave you the loss in this one.
Decent drop both of you.
v/tight
Ok, great battle, it's close.
Not swayin, but:
Aflac is an insurance agency.
Insurance agencies give out quotes.
When voting, you 'quote' lines you think were nice.
Figure out the bar.
^
For those who didn't understand.
OK, resume voting, leave links, and make sure you poll!
Lol @ these votes.
Da Patriot and Coconut pete, please explain more than you did.
WTF kinda votes are those?
Anyways... uppin
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
not bad 7/10
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
decent 7/10
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
its aite...setup could have been better 6/10
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
nah...5/10
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
could been worded better but decent concept 6.5/10
31.5 Overall
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
coulda been dope, but denzel...come on man...denzel aint in the battle. The punch wudda been better if you used a setup about football and then the punch imo, the setup can draw the reader in and the punch knocks em down...7/10
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
ok...6.5/10
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
decent...7/10
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
terrible execution...good concept 5/10
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
not bad 6.5/10
32 overall
I got Coop barely edging this one out. Yall got good concepts but maybe work the concept into the setup a lil bit more?
V/ Coop
If I could vote I'd choose -Coop-. It was kinda close but what I liked the most was his clear rhythm through his words, and his smoother serve.
Tightan was aight and had a few clean punchlines, but overall i know the call goes to coopie's bust rhymes.
Up #4
Lets get this over with.
Leave a link when you vote.
v// coop
it was a close battle but at the end coop had better punches..both yall droped dope though...props
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
ok after reading both verse like times
was still hard to decide
Tightan
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
^ ok , i like the concept , i felt like it could have been used much harsher tho
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
^nice-ish in a way
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
^ok , decent
those lines came of as the most appealing , nice flow, smooth maybe you just did not take this seriouse enough? , some of your lines seemed to lack , effort
rushed? cuz some of the punches were not appealing or was kind of askrew no real stand out punch ,
-Coop-
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
^ is there truth in the first line? ny ways ok-ish
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
^ nice
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
^this seemed a lil lacking , got it only when u explained it
also smooth -ish flow , like tightan nice concepts, some punches were lacking
and no real stand out punch , but i would say it just came off a bit more harsher than tightan's , more consistent verse
hard battle to vote on but
VOTE:-Coop- for just tipping it of
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
(ite.)
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
(Mess up his blocks? blah.)
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
(Blah, he sees old men doesn't hit hard.)
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
(Eh.. blah.)
lol
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
(Hah, this was actually pretty cool)
Not bad, i'm surprised.. usually I expect nothing but wackness from
heads like you. Sign up for LLL jr. I can put in a good word for you.
Consitancys a problem, as well as wording.. concepts could have
been a lot better also.. but I see potential in you, closer was nice.
VS
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
(Eh. I guess its decent nameplay.)
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
(lol, didnt like this. gayish.)
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
(wording was a bit off, alright tho.)
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
(Decent, could have been a lot better.)
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
(Statement. No punch really.)
Major conistancy issues, and wording.
Your concepts are a bit weak also... you din't come hard
enough in this one Coop. But I see potential in you too.
Hopefully you'll get at this kid in Jr. and get him back.
For explained reasons... vote Tightan.
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
nice
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
rofl
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
ok
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
ok
lol
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
nice nice nice
Vsssssssssss
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
The end punch was good
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
eh kinda weak
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
it was ok
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
lol
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
think imma vote for him tho ;\, so this backfires ur ending
Tightan came more origional & harder.
V// Tighton, awsome battle.
one of the better FL battles iv seen in a while
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
[not great use of the wordplay-could have been dope]
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
[havent seen a tetris bar in a while, ok]
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
[stale doesnt rhyme you'd have been better off with still...the setup really hurt this one]
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
[needs severe rewording]
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
[needs a better setup...you cant hit someone with a sewer system...could have made it beat you to death in the sewers... or cut off your shitty flow etc.... average]
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
[ok]
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
[nothing spectacular- average]
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
[average]
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
[k]
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
[nah...]
both of you could have used some better setups, but coop was far more consistent
tightan some of your concepts were pretty fresh and would have been better with different wording
v/ coop
i know my vote doesnt count but criticism never hurt ne1
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
and
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
^^^^this shit was nice
\/\/\/\/ I didnt get this shit
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
my vote goes to COOP
stop the hatin', and y'kno thats called a loss your tastein'
rot in placement, as I hit you twice as hard like coop...eration
Wow, sick wordplay, that was nice
who'd you think you was testin? ill bless the rest of your nest, shit
bring the best bitch, i'll mess up your blocks... like retards playin tetris
LMFAO! that was a one hitter
you got a slow feel for that copied style of a flow, stale
u got issues, so go deal,
cuz you see more old men than 2,000 boxes of oatmeal!
Eh decent lil originale
your all buttered up, you flattered fuck, your crew can cloan
cuz i swear you popped up with more aliases than if newmans own
lol decent
lol
u iight now, cant stop the bitchin tho... more than a slight sound
ill smack you to death with a sewer system..
.............................................. then tell you to pipe down
haha nice closure
Overall this verse was hella nice, with good wordplay nice flow and the originale structure i give this shit a def. 9.0/10
vs.
Forever he's bitin, my style. But it's an insult to whatever I'm writin.
He contends well, but even Denzel don't remember this tightan...
Ouch that hurt....lol nice hit
This faggot is fake and frail. He'll purposely get raped in jail.
That's why he aint throwin punches! He's too afraid to break a nail.
lol this was good
Most of his career's feeding, so this is a clear beating.
Course he can 'gimme an L'... as long as he dont quit cheerleading
lmao nice punch
This nigga is broke. Don't say he's improvin, it's givin him hope
He thinks he's past that, but even Aflac wouldn't give him a quote
Wow, another nice punch
After dissin this joke, everybody else admits that I'm dope
Only took a second to see you sucked, and even quicker to vote
Haha nice closure
Overall this shit was hot off the plate, nice punches, flow and orig. structure, u def. got elevation just keep it up, i give this verse a 9.5/10
Wow this was a classic battle, nice match-up def not worth being slept on good job to both u niggaz keep up the elevation. so for now my vote goes to coop, he came just a bit better close as fuck battle it was hard to vote on this 1 for sure...~1~