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Licorice
Werd
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check
check , do we really need time till tomorow?
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just came from the club damn toked up!
any way check , then to bed
heard werd on a loosin streak ,wernt u that wack constant queer kid?
Namechange that starts wit W still wont help you come near it
also Heard u loosin it Having troubles with? Sorry to pop your bubble kid
But even your name knows where u heading , VV < only it even doubles it
BX native A vet? Comes to Necks the only thing u “pro........teck
talk is cheap, specially for this kid thats y he still be dropin from the projects
werd w/ jabs that make us fall........N laugh our ass off but that’s all
now watch me align werds with L’s so well like masters in scrable
please son lets stop the babble , i done split shit and get won!
and yea gotta admit that word is good ........ to be writing my shit on
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Hit u with so many punches, kid'll be left lookin retared
Ur trash, u dont have any good lines on ur disposal, ur style's garbage
You ain't ready to step, you'll get stomped by many
If u plan to head me, I'll knock ur teeth out cuz u shouldn't use any
Ur new but ur old news, should run when u feel the force fool
Wont feel remorse when I split ur personality, as if ur parents divorced dude
Dummy, its pretty clear that u lost bitch plus theres no doubt
That Licorice is wack, even little kids are equipped to chew u up & spit u out
Quit text till u get better cuz u might get lucky
I'd fight u on ur own turf but park benches doesn't suit me
-Werd Life
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Licorice - This was one of the most entertaining verses that I read this week. I believe that your verse was entertaining and really had some good wordplay within it. This made the punches hit hard and very consistent.
Werd - I felt that your verse was very simplistic. You had punches that connected, but I felt that your verse fell short compared to Licorice. Nevertheless, your flow, structure, and control of the verse made it a reputable contender.
Vote - Licorice
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322514
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Thank you tho ur link is already closed , XD
UP any ways
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also Heard u loosin it Having troubles with? Sorry to pop your bubble kid
But even your name knows where u heading , VV < only it even doubles it
please son lets stop the babble , i done split shit and get won!
and yea gotta admit that word is good ........ to be writing my shit on
vs.
Quit text till u get better cuz u might get lucky
I'd fight u on ur own turf but park benches doesn't suit me
Vote- Licorice, cool battle and props to both!
Vote DQed...wack..
-Smoka
Last edited by SmokaJoka; January 14th, 2007 at 12:54 AM
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heard werd on a loosin streak ,wernt u that wack constant queer kid?
Namechange that starts wit W still wont help you come near it
ok ok
also Heard u loosin it Having troubles with? Sorry to pop your bubble kid
But even your name knows where u heading , VV < only it even doubles it
stretched..need to watch that
BX native A vet? Comes to Necks the only thing u “pro........teck
talk is cheap, specially for this kid thats y he still be dropin from the projects
flow was off in that line
werd w/ jabs that make us fall........N laugh our ass off but that’s all
now watch me align werds with L’s so well like masters in scrable
doesnt rhyme
please son lets stop the babble , i done split shit and get won!
and yea gotta admit that word is good ........ to be writing my shit on
doesnt really rhyme...need to be more consistent
Hit u with so many punches, kid'll be left lookin retared
Ur trash, u dont have any good lines on ur disposal, ur style's garbage
nah
You ain't ready to step, you'll get stomped by many
If u plan to head me, I'll knock ur teeth out cuz u shouldn't use any
no
Ur new but ur old news, should run when u feel the force fool
Wont feel remorse when I split ur personality, as if ur parents divorced dude
follow up was stretched
Dummy, its pretty clear that u lost bitch plus theres no doubt
That Licorice is wack, even little kids are equipped to chew u up & spit u out
too childish, get more in depth
Quit text till u get better cuz u might get lucky
I'd fight u on ur own turf but park benches doesn't suit me
nah
Weak verses from both of you, i thought you both were gunna come a lot better than what you did. Licorice- ok verse, i see you tried at multiple personals basically all the way throughout your verse. But some personals and punches you had need to be worded better and need more work done. Watch out and dont stretch your lines and try to up your vocab a lil. Werd- Started out with a stretched and weak line, then had a few so so lines, then your closer fell off. You need to watch your lines and make sure they rhyme with each other and some arent off. Come harder with your personals and punches as well, and take more time and effort to word your verse better. Also, try to come more in depth and not make it look childish. Both need to step it up, But it was a close battle between the two of you
\/-Licorice with all that said
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yo i dont know wat everyone is lookin at, but in this battle it was clear to me that WErd took it, licorice ur verse was very boring no hate, and ur concepts were pretty basic and played..you know wat a battles supposed to look like, you just need to work on ur technique...Werd you verse was much better you punches were much better and the only thing i can critize is ur structure but besides that you took this....my fav line,"Dummy, its pretty clear that u lost bitch plus theres no doubt That Licorice is wack, even little kids are equipped to chew u up & spit u out "
lmao rofl...KO^^
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322898
thanks to all that voted
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