Blinded by Reflections of Old (SS verse)

Allign differences decided by decievers measured in meteres
creatures invited to watch among the millions of believers
recievers bound to distort and twist the facts, and wrongfully
accuse thousands, reminisce their glory upon the gully

His own distinct intelect percieves the difference differently
yet not amongst all, the sections divided indecisively
decisions almost seem unchallenged and decided alone
the pain distributed to many others seems to cut the bone
zones, bountries, walls!!! none could stop his apparent wrath
math done by many at home, as well as around his "craft"
some find the actions as revenge for his own simple family
shamefully he denies all accusations, and stands firmly
but in doing so is faced with possiblities of hurting his loved ones
so includes cover up scapegoats, and squirmly allows all guns
the big run as the small hide, their efforts of gliding seem to fail
as the intruders snide ways allow the existience of their hail!!

His greed and decieving grin blow the minds of millions
as his father did, he infultrates lifes of perhaps billions
fill-ins arrive as others depart back to their country of dividers
men and woman crying at the arrival of their long awaited providers
apparently unaware of the effects of millions of people and faculties
he perciedes to send more and more to possible casualties
why? seems to be the undisputed question amongst the population
but in the attempt to revive his perception from his family, full infultration
his belief is to end what had begun with his father 8 years before him,
appears without the usage of words but the association of his fellow kin


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this was nice dawg.nice emotion, flow, creativity and sceneed vocab...man u good..nice...i liked how i felt the RAW FLOW of this piece.....uppin for tumtum


RTF on the OM in my sig dawg...

I didnt get it? This is why hard topics make me pissed. I got your lines and all, its just I didnt get what the piece was about. Anyways, besides that, I liked everything else about it. You had some words at the begining that had me going like "WTF?". Next time, just dont try that hard, I guess its just hard for me to read the good ones. Ight, now that I know what its about, this was a little better than at my first thought. I actully liked the concept, if you just would have put something in there a little more at the beginning, It would have been alot easyer to understand, of coarse, im not a master at writing complex shit, but this was pretty nice.

lmao...just re-read and really think about it

ummmmm yea

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Very nice Tum Tum..
It was intriguing the way that you captured the mind
state of your charecter without stretched lines and
unessasary words and also without a piece to long to
read.. keeping my intrest and making it easy for you to
stay on topic..
Ive seen few of your pieces in the past, but from memory
i can tell your improving alot as a writer

Keep writing and ill keep reading

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...85#post4163385
^A link so you can return the favour

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yall must be tired

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leave links ill leave feed as well

goddamn yall some sleepers

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good flow and nice rhymes

Hye tum, just wanted to let you know, this was much better, thanks for applying yourself in SS. We only want you to come dope, so I hope you can understand why I was tough on you and the rest of the new writers. Just keep doing what your doing week in week out,l that is all we ask. Good use of topic, you would have won against another oppoenent.

Thanks bounce will continue to come dope.....

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very good. topic was well written and the perspective on it was made your own. which is the best way to do it. your scheme on it's pretty nice, nothing too special but it's good. Internals were alright, some points off but not too many. Your storyline was VERY attractive. it was odd and good at the same time. very different. overall this was nice. keep doin' what you do in SS .. pz.