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Check... ill drop when i get back home in bout an hour...
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you not and artist and thats a fact
when my gun go off you will get more claps then a noya clap
you should name your self artifiction cause you a fake ass nigga
you talk big but you just a little ass nigga
after this you wont rap no more you'll be sittin on the bleacher
i got a picture of you dead like im an art teacher
there no coming back from this get it thrugh your head
i'll lay artifact down like you ready to go to bed
on this mic im like a person in college an you an you a elementary kid what s a problem with this
you still hook on phonics
my flows so hot i got you beggin for water
killa flows make threat like you need a lawyer
Ill 'start this off with heat' like a 'throttle-&-ignition'
The stories Enid Blyton wrote could topple-his-prewrittens
He claims to be a guy, but that image must be ruined
Coz he hasnt had a dick since his father gave it to-him
Hes far below my level, man this kid-can-get-shanked
Its known that ive got 'Cash in check/cheque' like 'trips-to-the-bank'
He raps sloppily, so its clear that he aint stoppin-me
One punch will put 'Cash in a bag' like an 'armed robbery'
If you copied my whole verse, you still aint matchin-me
Your nuthin but gas...
... so when your touched with flames its a catastrophe
Artifact-wasnt feelin the begining but gotta better in the middle and end. Vocab was iight, Structure was good, it flowed goo, had some nice punches in there, you had the better overall verse
CashBoy- elevate homie, most of urs didnt make much sense at all, lacked vocab, structure was weird in some spots, flow was off in certain spots, and not many punches were in there
v//artifact
word i tottally agree i was'nt feelin da begining but u fized it up towards da end man nice overral drop and casboy dat was not good at all man seems like u attempted abslutely no punches here so art gets ma vot and art hit me up on aim my aim is Inquirin mindz same as ma alias hit me up
v/artifact
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=266634
Thanks both of you for votin...
Still needin more...
Uppin #1
It would be much appreciated if we could get some votes on this...
Uppin #2
Wow... this is really gettin slept on...
Uppin #3...
artifact busted that nigga over the head...yeah fact broke cash off somethin serious...
my fav lines of the battle...
CASH:<--Not a damn thing from u cuz ya shit was as weak as a newborn
FACT:"He claims to be a guy, but that image must be ruined
Coz he hasnt had a dick since his father gave it to-him"
________________&____________________________
"He raps sloppily, so its clear that he aint stoppin-me
One punch will put 'Cash in a bag' like an 'armed robbery'"
VOTE: ARTIFACT
Dis battle was aight. Artifact came wit a lil more harder punches.
my v/artifact
Artifact took this one easy.Yall both had some punches and personals but I felt that artifacts hit harder.The other guy had some basic soft hitting punches but you'll improve on that if you keep on battling.Second off adtifact had a good structure and good wordplay too all on his verse.The other guy had a fucked up structure and basic wordplay.To the other guy not artifact even out your lines cuz it looks like your all over the place with it.And artifact had a good complex creative verse and it amazed me.The other guys verse was too basic.So after reading both verses in this battle I came with a final descion and artifact gets my vote.
vote/Artifact
Thanks all for votin... still needin more though...
Uppin #4
A yo vote on my battle wit Bobby Bunny so i can close itQuote:
Originally Posted by Bone$
Artifact killed it. I liked your flow and punches. Stay on your game man.
Thanks for the feedback... appreciate it...
Uppin #5...
IP: 70CD 0DDF
you not and artist and thats a fact
when my gun go off you will get more claps then a noya clap
aiite..flowed well at least
you should name your self artifiction cause you a fake ass nigga
you talk big but you just a little ass nigga
nah,, rhyming nigga with nigga wasnt too good holmes... and a basic punch
after this you wont rap no more you'll be sittin on the bleacher
i got a picture of you dead like im an art teacher
uhm.. a bit undeveloped.. i mean to say an art teacher is dead?...uhm? which art teacher is dead then.. gotta be more specific really
there no coming back from this get it thrugh your head
i'll lay artifact down like you ready to go to bed
ok ish.. too undeveloped tho as a wordplay attempt..
on this mic im like a person in college an you an you a elementary kid what s a problem with this
you still hook on phonics
my flows so hot i got you beggin for water
killa flows make threat like you need a lawyer
flowed ok but no effective punch really
vs
IP: 7300 0AEE
Ill 'start this off with heat' like a 'throttle-&-ignition'
The stories Enid Blyton wrote could topple-his-prewrittens
ok..nice rhymes
He claims to be a guy, but that image must be ruined
Coz he hasnt had a dick since his father gave it to-him
...uhm? not great creativity.. but nasty still
Hes far below my level, man this kid-can-get-shanked
Its known that ive got 'Cash in check/cheque' like 'trips-to-the-bank'
..yea! i liked this one fosho...haha
He raps sloppily, so its clear that he aint stoppin-me
One punch will put 'Cash in a bag' like an 'armed robbery'
decent play still
If you copied my whole verse, you still aint matchin-me
Your nuthin but gas...
... so when your touched with flames its a catastrophe
nice rhymes.. at the same ti,e catatrophe spoiled the play a bit.. decent still
vote-artifact....for he used more lyrical elements to effect.. a few wordplays.. a couple og creative punches.. cash just needed a lil more thought into his lines to add originality.. and to strengthen up the wordplay a bit more and fix the flow/structure rhyme scheme sum more
pz