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Visions Of Realness
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships...
As time passes, mighty clashes amongst gladiators
I was abandoned by neighbors & left surrounded by hater players
Visions of death is what I rep, quite as kept
I acquired the desire to spend the rest of my days in eternal fire
Retired, Returned, nothing to earn, nothing to lose
Still playin the blues, just another day in these shoes
And as I keep layin these clues...
Who in the hell are all these ppl?
None of these niqqaz my equal, they evil, deceitful
Opportunistic, boarderline sadistic
Quicker than an instant leave'n negative imprints on infants
For instance.. incest on your princess
Incensed, enraged, from the cradle to the grave
A mental slave from bein' played from back in tha day
Goin' thru Full Circles, you dont come back the same
And it really leaves a niqqa vulnerable
What a fucckin shame
I used to shoulder the blame, and I still do, now for different reasons
My mind was misleadin', tellin me to conceed when..
When you know your bitc# is cheatin..
When you know your friends are stealin..
When you know haters are squealin
Dont catch feelins, visions of realness
Any real niqqa in da field can & will feel this...
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships...
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships...
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damn dawg - im really feelin dat shyt - ne nigga in the game can relate, my only problem is u coulda gangsta'd it out a bit cuz its so hood
9/10 - jus cuz i could relate
I used to shoulder the blame, and I still do, now for different reasons
My mind was misleadin', tellin me to conceed when..
When you know your bitc# is cheatin..
When you know your friends are stealin..
When you know haters are squealin
Dont catch feelins, visions of realness
Any real niqqa in da field can & will feel this...
imma get dat shyt printed on a shirt or sumthin
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lol thanx homie nuttin but love right?
uppin 4 feedback
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oh and yeah imma gangsta rappa its my job homie
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can i get some feed back damm
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nice peice
good flow, structure ext.
i like the vocab
this was a nice peice
overalll everything here was nice
grade: B-
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thanx uppin 4 more feedback
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i enjoyed reading this one homie,the words where deep and had alot of feeling to them.i respect niggas when they spit the real,and it paints ah picture at the same time,that to me makes ah great mc homie.
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thanz alot homie bigg
uppin 4 more feedback
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ermmm, i have something to point out here, hate me for it if you will..
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
the first lines to a song, as soon as i find out which song it is ill post it
sorry dude
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thats gangstarr i know that
i didnt know i was bitin tho
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so stop bitching you lil pussy
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LOL, its biting, you knew the song, and the artist, sound like perfect biting to me, and yes your right, its gangstarr, heres the chorus
Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
You may not know the harships people don't speak of
It's best to step back, and observe with couth
For we all must meet our moment of truth
perfect biting it looks like.
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homie i took 2 lines wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2 lines
so sdfu you stupid lil bitch azz kiss ass
mod dickridah
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LOL, you were quoting about the rules earlier, dont post open mic more than once, leave feedback, ive done it all now, and now its my turn to dickride.
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