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LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck :2thumb:
Letz Drop early son
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...chmentid=17582
^His pic, Peep this to understand some of my punches
Definitions of macabre:
adjective: shockingly repellent; inspiring horror
Listen up..
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
26 Lines in runnin'...
Lets see if your really as good as ppl think you are
:ROFL:Quote:
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Get the fuck outta this thread you little herbs. Ren, nice shit, get your fucking worshippers outta here though, I'ma try and make this dope.
Sorry, i tend to laugh at funny stuff. *leaves thread*
Yeh. I would appreciate if know one posted until both verses are dropped.
Ty. Pz. Pz.
I give compliments where compliments are deserved...
I have never once quoted that i liked at Rens stuff before...
If i am going through your verse, and saying that i like certain bars, i am convinced you would be happy for me to do so, herb.
*also leaves thread*
Lmao. You posted again? Damn, I must give you a hardon or something.
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Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs
Vote NO 1 in next weeks mag
will vote shortly
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
^^ok
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
^^heh not bad
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
^^meh, ok
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
^^heh, ok
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
^^lol
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
^^cool concept, coulda been used better
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
^^lol this is one of those where I say "why didn't I think of that?" not bad
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
^^heh ok
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
^^not bad
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
^^yeah yeah ok I spose
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
^^simple
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
^^heh
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
^^ok
vs.
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
^^cool concept, didnt like the wording
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
^^ren/stimpy was used in LLL few weeks ago, so only ok
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
^^haha not bad
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
^^coo simile
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
^^heh ok
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
^^heh, ok
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
^^heh fair point I spose
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
^^wordplay not logically linked in well, but creative
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
^^hah, ok
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
^^lol, corny fat diss, but funny
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
^^pretty coo
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
^^hahaha
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
^^heh, dunno about the biter part, but he is tryina fit into LLL, true
Honestly, I think Ren came consistently ok, but Mac kinda killed this one using his greater experience in battling.
v/Mac
vote on mine dudes
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Na
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Lol nice
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Haha good
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
Ok...
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Lol decent
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Lmao dope
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
Na
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Ok
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Decent i guess
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Nice
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Ok
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Decent
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
Na..
Ren you had a consistant verse, with a couple of dope punches. There were very little weak punches, although i did think your finisher was quite dissapointing.
Vs.
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
Decent
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Ok
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
Na..
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Lol good
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Lol decent
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Haha true
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
blah...
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
simple but ok i guess
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Lol good
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Nah...
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Nah...
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
LMAO DOPE
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Decent finisher
Again a consistant verse, you also had some dope bars and also you had a lot of witty and creative puns in there. I was Lmao at the olympics concept.
Alright, this was damn close, i had 2 read em both over agen to decide. Both had your dope punches and creative lines. But im goin with mac because of a couple of his punches that just made me laugh for ages. Rens verse also had sum witty lines, but mac more so. So...
Vote/Mac
Cool Drop Mac
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See as though its a long ass battle, I thought I'd break it down
bit by bit.
Renegade:
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
eh, not for me.
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
ok, just not harsh enough.
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Noooo.
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
lol, cheesy but yea.
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
good idea, but dissing his hair?
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
good idea again, but forced as hell
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
nah, c'mon Ren' step it up from here
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
ok
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
getting better
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
creative, cool.
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
I chuckled lol[/b]
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
lmao, I thought it was just my school haha
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
aight, good idea
Macabre:
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
ok
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
ok, again. Seen a stimpy line.
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
nah, poker lines?
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Lol, you seem to work well with aids punches, funny.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
ok, flipped well
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
ok nameplay
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
true, not funny though
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
cheesey lol, funny.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
LOL, good one.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
nah
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
good wordplay, weak punch
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Noooo.. I cringed.
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Bland.
Overall:
Really tough. Still not sure who's won when I'm writing this.
Renegades verse took a long time to get going and to me
he had the funniest punch of the match with the 5 second
rule punch. But there was a lot of inconsistent punches which
just didn't hit at all. Where as Mac had like one really good
punch and then a bunch of consistent average punches.
Agh, I still don't know but I have to give a reason..
& this time its gonna be consistency. Soo. .
Vote:Macabre
Props for showing and making an interesting battle.
Good battle man. Gave me a good run for my money.
Renegade:
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
(no kinda suprised by this below par opener aswell)
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
(lol this was decent but couldo f been stronger)
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
(nope)
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
(lol funny ren)
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
(meh not feelin this)
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
(lol decent, but not hard enough)
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
(no)
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
(no)
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
(yeah nice punch)
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
(yeah pretty good ren, kinda sick of these anagrams and backward punches tho)
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
(meh it was ok)
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
(lol, best punch so far)
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
(yeah decent closer ren)
Macabre:
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
(meh not bad)
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
(decent i guess)
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
(played, not feeling it)
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
(good mac)
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
(nice punch well worded)
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
(decent)
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
(not really)
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
(lol nice)
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
(cool punch)
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
(meh not really mac)
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
(poor punch but well done on the wordplay)
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
(alrite)
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
(meh, could of had a stronger closer)
Overall.....Good battle guys you came real nice at times, ren you was more funny than hard hitting here, and inconsistent at times....mac your verse was similar in quality, good verse on the whole more consistency and puches that hit harder than ren, but one of the better battles this week, good job guys, close battle, mac just edged it.
V/Mac
Renegade:
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
-meh
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
-decent
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
-nah
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
-no.
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
-decent
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
-good
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
-aiight
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
-aiight
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
-decent
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
-decent...its hella creative but the setup was fucked and stretched
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
-aiight
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
-niiice
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
-not bad
Macabre:
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
-decent
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
-decent
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
-pretty good
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
-coo
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
-not bad
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
-decent
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
-meh
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
-nice lol
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
-LMAO sickk
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
-coo
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
-okish
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
-aiight
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
-meh
this battle was hella close, you both had some lines i didnt like and some lines i liked a lot. Ren's best line was the 5 second rule and mac's best line was the IP address lol. Overall i think Mac edged it with slightly more consistancy.
v/ Mac
worth the fucking read...
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
..lol. good opener..
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
..pretty good..
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
..meh. aight..
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
..lol. good..
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
..lol. good concept..
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
..funny..
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
..aiight..
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
..lol. aight..
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
..lol..
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
..pretty good..
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
..aiight..
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
..lmao. dope..
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
..pretty good closer..
vs.
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
..lol. pretty good opener..
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
..lol. good..
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
..lol. real good..
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
..lol, 'nother good one..
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
..aiight..
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
..meh, ok..
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
..yea, fair i guess..
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
..aiight, maybe better wording..
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
..hah. pretty good..
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
..yea, good..
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
..lol. dope..
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
..nice..
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
..aiight..
well, this battle was pretty close for the fact both dropped real dope verses. ren came with alot of nice lines and consistency. he had witty punches, good set ups, nice structure, great presonals and he held his own in the battle. mac, he came out good as well. opener was aiight, but the rest of the lines were kill'n this. mac had good lines, with consistency as well. good punch after good punch. mac basically did his thing and came hard. after reading and breaking this battle down, i think that ren just edged it. good job to both.
v/ renegade.
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
lmao
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
lmao even more
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
nah
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
meh
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Dayum!
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
good but seems like the wording was off
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
no
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
not bad
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Pretty good
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
your get extra points for including me in that 10 lol
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
this one made me chuckle
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
ajfo;iehdf Roflolmao, ok i know ppl say lol n lmao n shit but this one literally mad me lmao
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
meh
dope verse, i mean renegade kinda had an unfair advantage though cuz he had a pic to work with lol
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
decent
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Good concept, needs better wording
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
This is played but not so much, good punch i suppose
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Rofl
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Ok not bad
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Ha!
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
na
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Nice wordplay
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Played mayne
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Haha
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
another dope punch
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
na, not feelin this
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
i don't know if this is true or not so.......?
ok i thought renegade has this one won for sure but you dropped hard as well
seems like you were kinda meh at the beginning then really picked it up at the end.
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Vs
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Nice battle, battle of the week most likely
I got Rene takin this one but just barely
V/ Renegade
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
lol nice opener
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
lol yup
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
nope, not liking this
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
lmao, nice
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
nah i didnt like this, was weak imo
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
lmao funny personal
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
ok-ish nothing special,
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
aight but no hard punch
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
ok
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
yep i liked this one, good idea
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
lol ok, wouldnt say its 'good' but was funny
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
i dont get this?
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
okish but kinda weak for ur closer, didnt par with most of ur other lines.
V
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
this was an aight personal opener
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
naw i dont like it, weak
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
lol nice, decent
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
this was aight, but no hard punch
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
ok again but no hard punch
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
nah weak
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
haha, very true. funny
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
didnt get it first time, but it was aight after a 2nd read.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
lol funny, aight
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
this was aight. not great but aight
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
lmao, nice
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
ok
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
aight closer
This was a dope as fuck battle. And if it isnt battle of the week ill be very surprised. Both came really good but to me Ren was slightly more consistent with the harder punches. Both were humorous but Rens verse just made me laugh more and say "oooh".
V/ Ren for more consistency as u can see in my line breakdown, and a more humorous verse with some decent personals.
But both came dope fo real.
Mac:
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
Zaed:
And ya'll better joke.......when ya going with that joker Aes
Coz cards aside, i fill your head with holes..
..................................and i don't even gotta poker face
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showpos...466&postcount=4
It's a completely different concept, but same wordplay.
Anyway I'll break this down.
Renegade:
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Macabre:
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
V/ Renegade. Great punches but Mac had that Poker line and.............
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
^that is feeding. Good battle though.
5-4!
hmm suspicious oh well
this to close, i'll edit this post later with feedback & a vote perhaps
I smell a battle of the week.
Renegade:
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Consistently strong lines throughout and some nice multi-rhyming in the second half of your verse. Although witty, I thought that waaay too much of your drop was based on the visual gags, reflecting laziness concept-wise. Plenty of great lines, though.
Macabre:
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath? I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Lovely punning as usual, but your drop was much less consistent than Ren's with some bland lines between the gems. Also, two 'Ade' jokes was overkill... not to mention all those 'fareal's. Very close battle, but although Mac's good punches outdid Ren's good punches, Ren's verse was more solid overall.
Vote: Renegade
Okay, so this was a good ass battle. Both of you showed up this week. This was some LLL type of shit. Well, im not suprised since both of you have been in LLL. But This was by far the best battle of the week. Ima give a full breakdown because of that.
Renagade.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/att...achmentid=17582
^His pic, Peep this to understand some of my punches
Definitions of macabre:
adjective: shockingly repellent; inspiring horror
Listen up..
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Good punch. okay start.
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
good punch, concept was cool, and good play off the pic
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
lol..
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
lol, look at his hair.lol.
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
meh, good punch. just meh though
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Yours is just REALLY big
lmao^
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
nah.
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
nah
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
lol, i liked that concept.
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
clever. Ten.Net
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
yeh. heh.
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
meh. cool.
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
bleh @ the closer. could came harder in the end.
Macabre
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
cool. easy start, Renegade911
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
lmao^
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
cool concept. didnt like the wording in it though.
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
good nameplay
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
cool.
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
blah @ usin the same nameplay again.
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
word.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
sensual...nice.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
lol.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
fat jokes. lol.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Dope^
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
nice^
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
nah, weak closer.
Dope battle. Ren you came with some good ideas and concepts, the pic helped you out alot though. Mac I thought youd have to post a pic of Ren to even things up if you wanted to win, but you came fresh with a lota original concepts. Both of you put forth effort and it showed. Mac just seems like he knows more about what hes doing. I think the fact that mac didnt have to post a pic and still came dope was what won him the battle. Good shit.
Vote.Macabre
also
Vote.BOTW
ah fuck. vote nobody yet. cause u both are fucking making my job harder. next week in EVERY battle one drops good n other wack. understood :mad: will edit later will final decision.
no hate or nothing... but besides that poker line..
ur flippin alot of other people's concepts...being close to bitten.. like that Sensual line from Odin from RM.. unless u are Odin under this name..and the IP address line was used in the RBL not too long ago..maybe last week.
just for reference.. alot of Mac's stuff is flipped close to bitten... u should be careful Mac.. pplz r definetly sharking ur shit out to see if it is...
its flipped ... IMO
If i had to vote.. i'd edge to Renegade..he came wittier.. had the forehead line and aiite wordplay.. Mac had a few flipped punches that i jus saw a bit ago.. both came coo. best battle i read in the LLL so far.. im only postin coz Mac's concepts were interestingly close to some heads i noe..
I never go on RM and ain't since I was Stigmeta, and that was before even the North and South shit. Your vote don't count btw. No hate, but it just seems biased.
I'll break this shit down for ya fellas...
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
creative and harsh, nice
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Hits nicely cuz he's white
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Nah, just not a harsh punch
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
eh, haven't seen it, but average
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
hot bar, I liked this
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Okay, but played
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
I saw a foul line like a week ago, but nice try
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Pretty nice
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Drop shit is played. I used a line against lay awhile ago like "I'll make ya jaw drop harder than any of ya verses"
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
I liked this
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Average, doesn't hit hard but witty
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
lol, i liked this
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
I feel coulda been worded better
vs.
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
nice, but 911 is gettin' played on him
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Also played, seen something almost identical to this on him
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
poker face.. aight, okay wordplay
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
I used ade's wordplay a long time ago but not bad
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
nice use of the cliche, hits hard
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
lol, dope nameplay
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
very basic line, but honestly probably the hardest hitting of either verse
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
cool wordplay, haven't seen it
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
lol, pretty cool
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
hehe, this was decent for a fat joke
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Another dope nameplay, pretty fresh
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Another hard hitter
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
why didn't you close strong man?
As we all know, this battle was close as fuck. Pretty much LLL quality right here, and I've been waiting to see a battle like this in JR. Here's the thing that bugs me about this battle. Renegade came really fresh and had some really funny shit, but the thing is, he used Mac's pic for too many bars. I love pic punches, but using more than like one when you yourself haven't posted one is a bit cheap n' Mac's personal about that hit hard. Overall, I felt Renegade came mad consistent. His verse was very polished and I'm extremely impressed with what I saw from you. However, I feel that Mac's wordplay was more fresh and in total, really had more "dope" bars, rather than decent bars. Great battle fellas.
Vote - Macabre
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
vs.
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Vote - Macabre
P.S. -
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
^ That's real though, just not worded into a punch. It's mad gay to use dude's pics without giving them yours.
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Not bad
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Liked this, nicely worded
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Nah
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
Nice line, simple but hit hard
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Wasn't feeling the wording
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Real nice
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
Nice, played concept though
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Nah
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Not feeling the concept
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
I don't get
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Nice, feeling this
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Eh?
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
Not bad
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
Nice, cool bar
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Not bad
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
Bitten word for word from standard artist on b-boys. Shame b-boys is down otherwise I could show proof
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Wasn't feeling, bit of a stretch for a nameplay
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Nice
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Same concept again, better flip though
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
Nah
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Nice bar, cool wordplay
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Haha, nice
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Nah
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Pretty nice
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Niiice
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Nah
This was very even at 6 decent/cool lines a piece, if I didn't know that that poker line wasn't bitten Mac would have had the vote here, but as it is, Renegade got this.
v/ Renegade
LMAO, I don't care since it's not my verse y'all voting on, but I DO care about the quality of voting.
Everyone keeps saying that
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
these two lines "nah, used the same concept". But y'all are being dumb cos the first one uses AIDS as the concept and the 2nd one uses aid i.e. help that you send to poor countries as the concept. How is "help" and an STD the same concept?
Y'all need to up the quality of voting in this league
Both are a nameplay on ade, hence it being the same concept.
if you think about it like that, ok
oh and thanks for voting on mine :)