Trahedy Siphon (1-1) vs Diamond Mind (1-1)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 3

yup 3rd week of season

last weeks no shows are gone

2 more weeks and belts will be introduced

boot matches also as the league is too big currently

As for this week same rules as previous weeks

Check by wednesday drop by friday

no fucking around

Good Luck

[B.I.Detained.]

12 lines, g'luck.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...84#post3569984
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...74#post3579274
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post3580128

[Diamond Mind]

aiight u 2, chickity check

[B.I.Detained.]

nasty looking fag, << I'm direct bitch, no need for puns
Mind is so damn ugly, he fakes an orgasm everytime he cums
Diamonds been developing by taking the tips & rolling the hunches
bitch, you tried taking Demons style. . but forgot the fucking punches.
You've never been good, never had a title, its hard to see
cuz every belt you ever unbuckeld belonged to me
Killing this fuck, stealing his luck so he can't pick n choose
shit, its like you got the verse of the week the way u lose
DM's seriously bad, I hate saying Diamond but I deal what I'm dealt
DM cringes when its brought up.. now he knows how his mother felt
Aines lied, he promised he'd never match any no-shows for me
so week 3 comes along. . and puts me against a fucking nobody

[Diamond Mind]

stupid bitch last week was fixed, i knowingly dropped a week verse kid,
i went 1-1, jus so aines would find me another fucking mug 2 merk on purpose,
come get at me, what ama do is gna be a real tragedy trahedy,
brix changed his name, cos his weak style kept gettin spotted like acne,
how dare this lil fuck even consider droppin sum bars,
next time he looks at this, the verse'll be droppin his jaw,
but its first nature for this kid to walk about with his mouth open,
cos this shit was untolds,"his brix weigh a ton!" n he wasnt even joking,
bring on all the so called "tough battles", s'why i joined this league you ho,
bout to trade in ma verses for a hearse, thn i can book anuva few-in-a-row, (funeral)
brixton ya lost it bro, fuck it man, i doubt you ever had it,
swhy its gettin annoying, the way you drop we-akly, n you still dont have shit.

[B.I.Detained.]

Wtf? Vote.

[Keyser]

ok so i took longer than a minute....

nasty looking fag, << I'm direct bitch, no need for puns
Mind is so damn ugly, he fakes an orgasm everytime he cums
(meh, not bad)
Diamonds been developing by taking the tips & rolling the hunches
bitch, you tried taking Demons style. . but forgot the fucking punches.
(nice punch)
You've never been good, never had a title, its hard to see
cuz every belt you ever unbuckeld belonged to me
(decent)
Killing this fuck, stealing his luck so he can't pick n choose
shit, its like you got the verse of the week the way u lose
(meh, not feelin it)
DM's seriously bad, I hate saying Diamond but I deal what I'm dealt
DM cringes when its brought up.. now he knows how his mother felt
(not bad brix but doesnt seem lik your trying)
Aines lied, he promised he'd never match any no-shows for me
so week 3 comes along. . and puts me against a fucking nobody
(not bad closer i guess)
__________________

stupid bitch last week was fixed, i knowingly dropped a week verse kid,
i went 1-1, jus so aines would find me another fucking mug 2 merk on purpose,
(ok opner)
come get at me, what ama do is gna be a real tragedy trahedy,
brix changed his name, cos his weak style kept gettin spotted like acne,
(meh, not really)
how dare this lil fuck even consider droppin sum bars,
next time he looks at this, the verse'll be droppin his jaw,
(no)
but its first nature for this kid to walk about with his mouth open,
cos this shit was untolds,"his brix weigh a ton!" n he wasnt even joking,
(no)
bring on all the so called "tough battles", s'why i joined this league you ho,
bout to trade in ma verses for a hearse, thn i can book anuva few-in-a-row, (funeral)........(no no no)
brixton ya lost it bro, fuck it man, i doubt you ever had it,
swhy its gettin annoying, the way you drop we-akly, n you still dont have shit.
(noooooo)

Overall.....Diamond.....you need serious elevation in most areas no hate but its true your punches are just weak.....

Brix.....you came alright but could of been harder, just did what you had to i guess, few good punches n easy win here

v/brix (trahedy)

[Untold.]

the fuck, have u changed your name, i will edit and vote in a minute

yes.

[Diamond Mind]

lol enuff wit all this yo, lets get some vites man plzzz lol

[Philly®]

You've never been good, never had a title, its hard to see
cuz every belt you ever unbuckeld belonged to me

vs.

nothing sorry kid

V/t

[>Inertia>]

nasty looking fag, << I'm direct bitch, no need for puns
Mind is so damn ugly, he fakes an orgasm everytime he cums
(eh. not really.)
Diamonds been developing by taking the tips & rolling the hunches
bitch, you tried taking Demons style. . but forgot the fucking punches.
(decent.)
You've never been good, never had a title, its hard to see
cuz every belt you ever unbuckeld belonged to me
(ok.)
Killing this fuck, stealing his luck so he can't pick n choose
shit, its like you got the verse of the week the way u lose
(heh, pretty cool.)
DM's seriously bad, I hate saying Diamond but I deal what I'm dealt
DM cringes when its brought up.. now he knows how his mother felt
(naw, not really.)
Aines lied, he promised he'd never match any no-shows for me
so week 3 comes along. . and puts me against a fucking nobody
(ugh, weak closer.)

vs.


stupid bitch last week was fixed, i knowingly dropped a week verse kid,
i went 1-1, jus so aines would find me another fucking mug 2 merk on purpose,
(Naw. Not really feeling.)
come get at me, what ama do is gna be a real tragedy trahedy,
brix changed his name, cos his weak style kept gettin spotted like acne,
(ugh..bad wordplay.)
how dare this lil fuck even consider droppin sum bars,
next time he looks at this, the verse'll be droppin his jaw,
(Naw.)
but its first nature for this kid to walk about with his mouth open,
cos this shit was untolds,"his brix weigh a ton!" n he wasnt even joking,
(EH.)
bring on all the so called "tough battles", s'why i joined this league you ho,
bout to trade in ma verses for a hearse, thn i can book anuva few-in-a-row, (funeral)
(Hella forced.)
brixton ya lost it bro, fuck it man, i doubt you ever had it,
swhy its gettin annoying, the way you drop we-akly, n you still dont have shit.
(Hell no.)

This battle was bad. Difference between the verse was that Trahedy came consistently mediocre whereas Diamond was consistently bad.

/v Trahedy

[Archilleez]

nasty looking fag, << I'm direct bitch, no need for puns
Mind is so damn ugly, he fakes an orgasm everytime he cums
ok-ish, not the best opener though
Diamonds been developing by taking the tips & rolling the hunches
bitch, you tried taking Demons style. . but forgot the fucking punches.
haha, nice punch.
You've never been good, never had a title, its hard to see
cuz every belt you ever unbuckeld belonged to me
lol decent again
Killing this fuck, stealing his luck so he can't pick n choose
shit, its like you got the verse of the week the way u lose
naw, this is no good, weak
DM's seriously bad, I hate saying Diamond but I deal what I'm dealt
DM cringes when its brought up.. now he knows how his mother felt
ok, not great tho
Aines lied, he promised he'd never match any no-shows for me
so week 3 comes along. . and puts me against a fucking nobody
ok-ish, still fadin out tho,

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stupid bitch last week was fixed, i knowingly dropped a week verse kid,
i went 1-1, jus so aines would find me another fucking mug 2 merk on purpose,
ok-ish, it seems a bit stretched tho? need to shorten ur lines.
come get at me, what ama do is gna be a real tragedy trahedy,
brix changed his name, cos his weak style kept gettin spotted like acne,
i can see what u was tryna do, but it came out kinda weak 2 me. needs re wording
how dare this lil fuck even consider droppin sum bars,
next time he looks at this, the verse'll be droppin his jaw,
basic and weak
but its first nature for this kid to walk about with his mouth open,
cos this shit was untolds,"his brix weigh a ton!" n he wasnt even joking,
nah weak again
bring on all the so called "tough battles", s'why i joined this league you ho,
bout to trade in ma verses for a hearse, thn i can book anuva few-in-a-row, (funeral)
Naw this was like a newb tryin to be clever. sorry but it was rlly bad
brixton ya lost it bro, fuck it man, i doubt you ever had it,
swhy its gettin annoying, the way you drop we-akly, n you still dont have shit.
better than some of ur ther barz, it at least made sense but still kinda weak

Ok diamond no hate, but there was really nothing there. Im not sure how you normally drop i havent seen your stuff before, but u must do better normally to have one win. If you rushed it, in future ull learn not to. But ur punches were just weak and missing, and u attempted some wordplay that just didnt work, and looked newbish.
No hate tho, keep elevating. Just my opinion.

Trahedy ur verse was aight, wasnt great but was still enough for the win. Some punches that were funny and witty, made me laugh and gives you my vote.U did kinda fade out to me though, u was more solid through the middle, but next week if ur opponent throws a few punches at ya, u might lose if ur not solid all the way through. Luckily ur opponent came very weak and u came out a clear winner.

Basically:
Diamonds been developing by taking the tips & rolling the hunches
bitch, you tried taking Demons style. . but forgot the fucking punches.
You've never been good, never had a title, its hard to see
cuz every belt you ever unbuckeld belonged to me
vs
Nothing

No hate diamond. Just honest feed.
V/ Trahedy

Link for honest feed and votes
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254544

[B.I.Detained.]

4-0. Thanks for the votes.

[Aines]

Trah wins

Trahedy Siphon (2-1)
Diamond Mind (1-2)