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LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck :2thumb:
check, lets go 14
check ,coo
If u wanna drop early let me know...
Ill drop same day as u, no point waitin until friday for the win its only 14 lines.
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,Quote:
Originally Posted by Barburyin
$10 and i will get u a name wit a 20-0 record just tell me da name u want
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
-weak attempt here.
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
-too simple. n weak
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
-nah, not feelin this.
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
-noweight shit are played, n this is toooo weak.
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
-uhh best line so far for you.
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
-naah.. weak
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
-umm, another weak attempt, not the best way to close up ur verse.
vs.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
-weak punch..
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
-uhh ok..
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
-kinda played concept, but atleast tried to punch.
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
-weak punch here.
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
-alright decent i guess.
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
-haha best line so far from u.
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
-lol decent closer here.
barburyin came waaaaaaaaayy weak.. i didnt like one line of his at all.. all of his shit were weak attempts at punches.. none connected at all.. gotta come better in this league.. and archileez wasnt too great.. but atleast he attempted to make some punches, n actually connected on some.. arch definitely had more wordplay.. which helped his case alot.. he started off real slow.. somewhat picked it up in the middle n closed up his verse solid in his last four lines.. barburyins verse was verrrrrry weak.. n needs to step up, I think i seen your work before n i know you can do better..
v/arch
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
no
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
no
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
ok
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
personal but naw
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
heh
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
naw
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
naw
vs__________________
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
no
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
......^wtf that say lmao naw wack anyways
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
naw
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
wtf @ the bolded letter are you quoting him or you lmao diss ya self lmao how u know wahat they smell like :ROFL:
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
ok could of came not basic but ok
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
no
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
no gay/sex/faggish shit is played
b-wow you came wack wtf happened like u rushed or somthen most of the punches wasnt hitten at all your verse got boring after the first couple punches dunno what you was doing not came direct structre was straight though id give yuo that and one punch made me chucky "touch yo lips"
arch-you came just as wack in your verse wtf you keyed it yeah i know still wasnt good should of tried you stated shit and nothen came direct but the out of this league line other then that err thing was basic and wack and i thought i was finn give it to you after i read his verse and left feed then i got to your verse came worse nothen dope n it at all
v/b for having like a bar that was ok. nothen else in each verse though both came superb wack
^^I was saying he sucks, and it was his breath that i couldnt stand the smell of...hence the line after it... but nvmQuote:
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
wtf @ the bolded letter are you quoting him or you lmao diss ya self lmao how u know wahat they smell like
And whilst means, u are doing one thing "whilst" doing another...Quote:
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
......^wtf that say lmao naw wack anyways
Thanks for the vote anyway
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254563
both hit up the link
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
(Wack.)
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
(Naw, not really.)
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
(Eh.)
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
(Dude..no.)
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
(Lame.)
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
(Igh)
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
(Hell no.)
vs. Achileez
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
(Nope.)
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
(Ugh.)
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
(Eh.)
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
(Played.)
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
(Ight.)
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
(Naw.)
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
(Ug)
/v Archileez. Just came better and more complex IMO.
2-1 Uppin
V/arc................i'll edit with my vote l8r
3-1
More votes?
damn dickriders
^ Lets not start any beef in here,I see that as swaying ^
I know none of these people,
Uppin
no beef and dats not swayin im just speakin da truth
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
no punch to this
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
yuck, no
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
self-glory
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
not even true, it will change, lol
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
doesn't make much sense logically
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
finally something okay but played
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
not that funny actually. would work if his name was more wack
vs.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
ass shit is so played
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
not really a good use of wordplay lol
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
statement, no punch
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
dick shit is so played
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
best line of the battle yet, not that bad, but a tip, you didn't need to say out twice.. just say out..... of the fucking league with dots like that
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
Statement, no punch
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
baber shit was good, but you used this awfully
Hmm, this was a pretty bad battle honestly fellas. Y'all need to get more creative with the concepts. After reading this a few times, I'd have to say Archileez had the outta of the league line which was the line of the battle. Not much else in his verse was really that good, but it was slightly more consistent than Barb so I'm giving this to him. I've seen better from you both though so step ya games up.
Vote - Archileez
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
Na
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
No
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
SG, and bad anyways
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
No
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
huh?
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
Ok, but played
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
No..
vs.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
Played
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
not feelin it, but better then Barbs bars..
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
No punch, good set up though
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
lol good
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
lol nice, the repeated 'out' isnt needed though..
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
Where's the punch?
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
Good wordplay of his name, but doesnt go well with what u were talkin about.
Kinda a one sided battle, Barb had no good lines in this, u need elevation homie. Keep up. Arch had 2 good bars, and took this pretty easily.
V/ Arch
5-1
Rise
Meh drop from Barburyin, nothing exceptional.
Archilleez had better lines throughout and was funnier.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
Vote: Archilleez
cool 6-1
this battle sucked seriously
it's like both of you came off like a 2 year hiatus or something because some of these lines were so played it wasnt even funny
barburyin's structure was well......bad
i dunno, arch came more consistent and was a little more creative so
v/ arch
omfg
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
Nah, real weak
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
Nah
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
No, this was weak and terribly worded
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
No, way too simple
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
Nah, wording was terrible, the ...'s make it worse
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
This was ok
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
Concept was ok but wording was poor
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
Meh, ok I guess
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
Nah
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
Not bad
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
Not bad
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
[b]Getting rid of the second out would have made this hit harder, played though[/b
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
Nah
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
Funny but pretty weird
Archileez took this comprehensively. Barburyin had nothing to quote at all, Arch was just more consistent and came with better lines.
v/ Archileez
Arch wins
Archileez (2-0)
Barburyin (1-1)