KempMRK (1-0) vs K (1-0)

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

:2thumb:

in...who? drop early.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3535478
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post3538835

Check.

Votes:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3549392
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post3549439
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...90#post3556090
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post3556115
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...48#post3556148
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post3556188

how did he win last week? Lmfao

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.

please.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by K

when i started in my first season in jr i wasnt shit, really i was wack
i meen i ent great now

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First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

bump

N'


grind.

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.


V/K

by a hair

K:
How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box

Kempo:
First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

Overall:
Wow, didn't expect it. But this was a bit of a mauling. Kempo was
just original, and had hard hitting punches. K's wording killed him
here.. had some mean ideas but just couldn't connect. Kempo for
me is an alias. Props to both for showing.

Vote:Kempo

Hit up my battle with D.Zaster.

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show

Ok battle here, gamecube line was nice even tho it's corny as fuck, the jem line was also very good. The rest of Kempos verse was ok tho I hated the opponent says it for you and the lll jr lines and lmao at Trahedy quoting them. K I just didn't feel your verse man, your wording was off but the check mate line was nice. The shit hit the fan line was horrible, my version was way better. The black star line was ok but I don't like threat punches unless there's some really dope wordplay involved.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by demon pyrokronix

Every emcee gets booed once, it ain't nobodies fault
So when shit hits the fans... you'll get locked up for assault

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^my version

V/ Kempo

v. K

Just overall better.

You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig

lmfao.

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

V/Kem

kapa thor and d zaster your votes arent counting at the moment

explain the shit properly

check the voting thread if need be

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
alright
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
nice
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
weak
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
lol no this is so corny[B]
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
not bad

vs

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
alright
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
lmoa but worded terribly
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
lol
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
nah
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
cool

Basically its

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate

vs

I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are
punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

So V/Kem

thnk u thor

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
good concept, could of used some better wording
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
nice^
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
lol
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
hell no
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
decent closer, setup could have been better

vs

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
just makin statements here
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
decent
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
tired of gaming system lines played
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
nah
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
best line good closer and its fresh

v/K just felt he came more consistent, thought his verse would have hit alot harder with some re-wording though Kempo your verse was decent but the only line I really felt was your closer.

ummm......K what happened to the structure you used to have?
the concepts were good but your wording was shit
this is actually kinda surprising. i thought K would take this battle easily
Kempo had a few good lines but some of them were just corny as fuck
dont do this type of shit

Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,

that was just gay
but despite that........

v/ Kemp

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
ok
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
decent i liked it
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
lol humorous, not hitting hard tho 2 b honest
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
erm... it was ok, maybe u coulda changed it a lil to make it good though - i get the idea
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
ok-ish kinda weak closer imo

vs

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
ok
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
no, i thought u fucked this up and it couldve been aight... fuck the ^^^'s, gay shit imo
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
lol! liked it, decent
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
ok
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
ok closer

I gotta give my vote to Kempo here...
Didnt expect it before reading the battle in all honesty but heres why...

Firstly i felt K had some aight lines as far as flow and witt is concerned but they werent really hitting hard. I couldnt help feel u wrote this half heartedly.
Kempo ur verse wasnt way better, but i think the punches that were aight, hit harder than ya opponents. I liked the gamecube line.

Fav lines:
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
vs
First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are




V/ Kempo for harder hitting punches, and a more enjoyable verse.
No hate, just a honest vote.

3-6

thanks for votes..coo battle

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
Lol decent...
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
Good punch..
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
Blah not feelin it...
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
Good...
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
Lol basic but decent..

Vs.

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Decent...
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
Na...
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
Lol nice...
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
Decent...
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
Dunno if thats true but even if it is pretty weak punch...

Imo K had the stronger verse, both came consistant but K had more punches which stood out to me. With the zipcodding a box line and the check mate line. Whereas kemp only had the gamecube line.. Therefore Vote/K for more hard hitting punches. Good battle guys.

v/k.. will explain in mag. but by a fucking hair.

5-6

how is this not battle of weak?

vote kempo, close fuckin battle here tho

i think kempo got it, he edged it out by one line which was his closer, that knife line could've been better but it worded so poorly and made it corny as hell.

ain't 2 much i can say for you both to work on, except for make sure you watch your wording in the next battle.

vote kempo.

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
Executed well, but concept is played to death
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
Cool, but kinda a statement more than a punch
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
Eh, just nothing special. The whole "black stars" concept coulda been used to mean like an african-american star rapper. If you'd have used that wordplay coulda made this dope
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
Cool concept, but I don't like using your own name for a punch
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
Kinda played cliche

vs.

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Okay personal, but kinda bland as this kinda punch has been done so many times. If you had added wordplay to this it woulda been better
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
Cool punch, hits nicely cuz it's true
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
Dope, nice punch
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
Wasn't feeling this, maybe better wording as yours was repetitive woulda helped
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
Jem's nameplays are played, but you used it nicely so not bad

Overall, these two guys have very different styles so I can understand someone voting for K, but personally I felt Kemp came much more fresh and hard hitting in his verse.

Vote - Kemp

K had superior use of internal rhyming throughout, with good jokes in each couplet.

Kempo had a really weak opening 4 lines followed by some much better stuff towards the end. I liked the advent calendar concept (first time I've seen it used, anyway).

Really close match. I'm going with Kempo, though, as his best lines outdid K's best lines.
Vote: KempoMRK

K

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
ok..
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
i guess,..not too hard tho
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
ok.. ok..
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
self glory too much so.. lol decent bar
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
decent..

decent verse..

kemp

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
ehh
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
i guess
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
played. corny.
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
i unno.. i guess its ok.
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show
ok ..

kinda close but i K gets it cuz he came more consistent.. and had the best bar of the battle.. that silent k jawn..
peace

How you 1 up? You suck so I wont postpone you’re loss
Shits nothing to write home about, so fuck zipcoding a box
ok
Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
heh
You far from straight, lightweight you throw nothing I can dig
Whereas ill have you seeing more black stars than my own sig
lmao
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K
naw
Ok and Kempo slow up you’re tempo, ill leave you hollow bro
Id say that shit hit the fan, but no one really follows you.
:) made me smile

vs

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
heh
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
naw
I slept during your verse, boredom won't take ya far,
Cos even my Gamecube's jealous of how square you are,
lmao witty
I got a cracker from #2 in my advent calender today,
So it's ironic how #2 from a cracker defines me vs K,
naw
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.
heh


kemp-verse was meh not bad but u had like 2 punches that i liked but the others was all self centered and i didnt like how you came like that you could of changed them statements into punches but werd

k-your verse was nice and all punches came decent some made me have a grin most of your punches had a lil wit to em i liked em structure was coo but i think you came more not played and less statements

v/k pz

Oh shit....lol..... Ay yo dis was good by both sides foreal....

Ill knock ya block of dun, but son hold up wait
We coo n’a’ll, so its good you’re check was followed by a mate
Fuck you pig, just a newb thinking he’s rude and can spray
I’m real, you’re like the spelling of knife, a silent K

vs.

First line for this dude, but I'm already through,
Cos punchlines are pointless when ur opponent says it for you,
Ya got 2 years experience so you could wreck in LLL Jr,
You've got the arrogance of a vet yet you're...^^^^^,
My punchlines are gems where as all yours blow,
Cos the only Jem you've ever dropped was due to a no-show.

K- Sick shit my man.....very...but i just felt u aint have the wit here yo.......i mean u had mad creativity foreal.....silent k line.... i neva woulda thought of it..... check mate line wouldnt of thought of it..... but the only reason i say u lost was cause u really didnt trash um personally...... i mean like all the punches were great jus felt u aint take the full time u had to drop ya verse and fry cause i kno u coulda......i jus felt u came less....Creativity was stormin but kempo hit u wit tha cold facts so tha kinda did u in.....

Kempo- SICK, suprised me when i read tha shit foreal....... cause u came witty as fuck, usually i would hold it against if someone used the same word for a punch at the end.....but u did ur homework and hit um wit the lll jr punch......Opener was witty......really u came out hard foreal wit the drop.....hit um wit the cold facts and made it funny..... creative as fuck.....and personal drop....that why i gave u da W....

v/Kempo

lol^

read everyone elses verse they all say i had the wittyness and also how do you get personals of a 16 year old with like 50 posts.

oh well thanks for the votes

Come on man dont complain yo i just felt that honestly......I could see if i voted and no one else voted for him but people did......and thats how i felt......so i guess this is a uppin for u...

Kempo wins

nice battle guys

KempoMRK (2-0)
K (1-1)