Lyrical God (0-0) vs L.I (0-0)

LLL Jr. Week 1

Rules:

New season starts here...everyones fresh so your all equal as of now

No show your gone no matter who you are

Drop 10-20 lines agree with your opponent

Check in by wednesday drop by friday midnight, i understand that were all in different timezones so i will give way for a hour or so late

No feeding = banned from league
No biting = banned from league and site
No recycling, come up with new un original shit of your own

You must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

Have any problems/requests PM me and Pm me early

Last of all come hard and get yourself up to LLL.

good luck. :2thumb:

Check 12...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250644
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3492417
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...22#post3516222

How about okay.

This kids wackness is self explanatory, so I won’t even try,
Reverse your name, your IL?, turn it back to see that statements a LI,
Your whole lifes a LI, kill yourself now ill even supply you with rope,
I guess you thought of your name, right after you told yourself you were dope,
Enough with the name play, but it would be a LI if I said it started to bore me,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250630

^^I guess I would diss your crew, but this guy did it for me…^^,

You showed cockiness in your checkin, and for that I give you props,
But to let the truth be known, that’s the wittiest post that LI has ever dropped,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&page=1&pp=15

Fag has a habit to no show, anything above a Noweight gets him shook,
And even when he does drop, he gets 1 reader who only posts to say he sucks….,^^
You don’t get wins in Jr by rappin bout how u “gunna pull the trigga”,
So come back when you don’t get mocked off heads with names like Wigga…

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic
dont flaunt and try to sell ya lines. lyrical god? shit
if i wanted to bible i'd go to fucking mass kid
dont fire at me. u dont want to get crunched in
cause you have NO chance the way u missile your punches
im at a loss for words. this bitch aint even ranked dude
i have nothing to say to ya other than tell your mom thank you
what your album dropped? i can say wack in alotta ways
but im sure peeps'll flee to the stores...thanks to the holidays
ull never be famous. like i said ^ no one will buy it, right
bitch if your in the limelight...they made a new diet sprite

nothing

vs

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

V/ L.I

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

everything else...was garbage.
vs

nothing...



This kids wackness is self explanatory, so I won’t even try,
Reverse your name, your IL?, turn it back to see that statements a LI,

This had potential..but wording fuck'd it..

v/ L.I..this a league must come much stronger than a reg. battle.

nothing but decorated shit

vs.

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

v//L.i

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

^That > God's whole verse. Sorry.

V/ L.I

Even though the reverse name bars are played, I still like the opener:
This kids wackness is self explanatory, so I won’t even try,
Reverse your name, your IL?, turn it back to see that statements a LI,

L.I, you didnt put enough into your verse. It flowed properly, but it just didnt have enough personalized disses to win. Lyrical God beat you easily with better disses & deliverance of better punchlines...

Vote - Lyrical God

this battle was just strait for me, i think the only things that were quotable in either verse were the openers, but it seems like L.I put more thought into his verse than lyrical god (although niether verses were really clever), i'd give this one to L.I
~clisk~

nothing

vs

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

LG-if your lines weren't so damn stretched then it really wouldnt have been so bad
v/ LI

Weak battle.

Nothing at all.

vs.

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

V/LI

This battle is pretty much already decided, but here's some constructive feedback for you guys.

This kids wackness is self explanatory, so I won’t even try,
Reverse your name, your IL?, turn it back to see that statements a LI,
coulda been worded better. Also, LI nameplays are played.. in general, nameplays are played, but yea one per verse is aight
Your whole lifes a LI, kill yourself now ill even supply you with rope,
I guess you thought of your name, right after you told yourself you were dope,
Eh, not worded well and too stretched
Enough with the name play, but it would be a LI if I said it started to bore me,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250630

^^I guess I would diss your crew, but this guy did it for me…^^,
Don't use links for punches unless they are like REALLY funny. I don't want to have to view a link for a battle.

You showed cockiness in your checkin, and for that I give you props,
But to let the truth be known, that’s the wittiest post that LI has ever dropped,
Nothing bad about this, just kinda basic

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...06&page=1&pp=15

Fag has a habit to no show, anything above a Noweight gets him shook,
And even when he does drop, he gets 1 reader who only posts to say he sucks….,^^
That's really not true actually.. only would be effective if it was
You don’t get wins in Jr by rappin bout how u “gunna pull the trigga”,
So come back when you don’t get mocked off heads with names like Wigga…
Again, LI isn't a newbie so this doesn't really apply to him

vs.

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic
dope bar right here
dont flaunt and try to sell ya lines. lyrical god? shit
if i wanted to bible i'd go to fucking mass kid
don't think i've seen bible wordplay before, not bad
dont fire at me. u dont want to get crunched in
cause you have NO chance the way u missile your punches
I feel this was a bit forced, but it decent
im at a loss for words. this bitch aint even ranked dude
i have nothing to say to ya other than tell your mom thank you
wack and you know it, lol
what your album dropped? i can say wack in alotta ways
but im sure peeps'll flee to the stores...thanks to the holidays
decent concept really, but coulda been worded much better
ull never be famous. like i said ^ no one will buy it, right
bitch if your in the limelight...they made a new diet sprite
Decent once again

Overall, Lyrical, this ain't Front Lines, your at a new level here. You gotta work on having more wordplay and more complexity as all your shit was too basic. LI had the 1 really dope bar, the opener. The rest was actually not bad at all, some fresh wordplay I haven't seen before and not much filler. LI got this pretty easily.

Vote - LI
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Nothing

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dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

v/L.I

Lyrical God started off well with the "Reverse your name, your IL?, turn it back to see that statements a LI" hit, but then repeated the same joke, which is too wasteful for a 12 line drop. Rest of it was OK, but I second the comment that any linking should be worth the effort of clicking on it.

L.I. came with a more solid structure and the lines
"I've beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic",
"If i wanted to bible i'd go to fucking mass kid" and
"you have NO chance the way u missile your punches"

Vote: LI

Lyrical God
I guess you thought of your name, right after you told yourself you were dope,
.....
Fag has a habit to no show, anything above a Noweight gets him shook,
And even when he does drop, he gets 1 reader who only posts to say he sucks

L.I.
im at a loss for words. this bitch aint even ranked dude
i have nothing to say to ya other than tell your mom thank you
what your album dropped? i can say wack in alotta ways
but im sure peeps'll flee to the stores...thanks to the holidays

Great battle, i thought both your shit was hot...good punches, good flow...blah blah blah

Victory goes to Lyrical God
All his lines were good, L.I. had a few weak ones
better punches too

im at a loss for words. this bitch aint even ranked dude
i have nothing to say to ya other than tell your mom thank you

lol had ma self laughing at this shit, weak

but LI still come n won

v/Li

nuttin

vs

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

v/LI

i got my ass kicked
vs.
if ur in da lime light...
dey made a new diet sprite

This kids wackness is self explanatory, so I won’t even try,
Reverse your name, your IL?, turn it back to see that statements a LI,

vs.

dude your name basically explains the situation. i wont miss it
ive beaten so many god members on this site im polytheistic

openers were the only thing good in this battle, but L.I. delivered a a better flowing more consistent verse
lyrical lose the links they just break up the flow.

v/L.I.

L.I wins even when i took away his votes for missing links

Lyrical God (0-1)
L.I (1-0)