D.Zaster (0-0) vs Assasiin (0-0)

LLL Jr. Week 1

Rules:

New season starts here...everyones fresh so your all equal as of now

No show your gone no matter who you are

Drop 10-20 lines agree with your opponent

Check in by wednesday drop by friday midnight, i understand that were all in different timezones so i will give way for a hour or so late

No feeding = banned from league
No biting = banned from league and site
No recycling, come up with new un original shit of your own

You must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

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2EZ

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3503684
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...91#post3516291

Your wack and your dopeness aint never been seen fool
Comin so played...
...im startin to think your swimming in the shallow end of the gene pool
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
No descent crew would accept you, Listen up bitch
Now sit back and tell me this...Why the fuck are you rocking an A.I sig

*Switches to assassiin style*

KidS A HOMO, Your mothers A MOFO, get LYRICALLY RAPED
you cant DISS ME, your punches MISS ME, your raps are PATHETICALLY FAKED

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=assasiin

^^ LMFAO, MY REASON FOR A WACK VERSE

Pz

man whatever CHECK. ur too EZ

Quote:

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Originally Posted by assasiin

man whatever CHECK. ur too EZ

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So why not post then?

aight here's mine crazy HOcake.


You’re the bad-acting star of a prison rape scene after they punch your face in.
You a gay joke. You stay poked more than Asian acupuncture patients.
My moves be hyperactive... like crack kids doing back flips.
Yours like spankin’ diarrhea-inflicted children. I'll put the belt to you,wack shit.
Slash this. I'll grind you like an Axle. C0ck my gun. Give you a rose.
What's Curly is how I make your toes go, plus my pubes below your nose.
I thought you were some grimacing sinister mister, but on closer inspection,
I see you just want my penis as the centerpiece of your boner collection.
Rock out. You get knocked out. Dangerous. I'll harm you if you dare me.
Murder you. Hurry up and bury you in Mount Carmel Cemetery.
I’ma steal all of y’all women, and leave 5 men for you feelin’ badly.
'Cause they say my brain contains more game than the gang at Milton Bradley.
Who be the one you pray to? I'll split you from your nasal to your navel.
DeVill be ill like that, and ain’t no savior gon’ save you.

14 hahaha..............EZ.

the AI sig...........i was thinkin of makin that crew but didnt know if that crew is already made cuz if it is then ima switch it.........

I'll edit w/ vote.
Dope sig either way.

Your wack and your dopeness aint never been seen fool
Comin so played...
...im startin to think your swimming in the shallow end of the gene pool
(aight)
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
(aight)
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
(lol good)
No descent crew would accept you, Listen up bitch
Now sit back and tell me this...Why the fuck are you rocking an A.I sig
(aight)
*Switches to assassiin style*

KidS A HOMO, Your mothers A MOFO, get LYRICALLY RAPED
you cant DISS ME, your punches MISS ME, your raps are PATHETICALLY FAKED
(uhh aight i guess)

VS

You’re the bad-acting star of a prison rape scene after they punch your face in.
You a gay joke. You stay poked more than Asian acupuncture patients.
(hah aight)
My moves be hyperactive... like crack kids doing back flips.
Yours like spankin’ diarrhea-inflicted children. I'll put the belt to you,wack shit.
(uhh aight)
Slash this. I'll grind you like an Axle. C0ck my gun. Give you a rose.
What's Curly is how I make your toes go, plus my pubes below your nose.
(wtf? no..)
I thought you were some grimacing sinister mister, but on closer inspection,
I see you just want my penis as the centerpiece of your boner collection.
wtf was that? a filler? idk...)
Rock out. You get knocked out. Dangerous. I'll harm you if you dare me.
Murder you. Hurry up and bury you in Mount Carmel Cemetery.
(alright)
I’ma steal all of y’all women, and leave 5 men for you feelin’ badly.
'Cause they say my brain contains more game than the gang at Milton Bradley.
(self glory? idk wtf?)
Who be the one you pray to? I'll split you from your nasal to your navel.
DeVill be ill like that, and ain’t no savior gon’ save you.
(ok ending)

Close shit sorta, but assasiin was getting wack in the last 2 bars i think.
I think that D.Zaster had harder punches goin more smoothly...
assasin prolly took vocab, but for an overall more enjoyable n better verse
i vote for D.Zaster...

v/D.

Who be the one you pray to? I'll split you from your nasal to your navel.
DeVill be ill like that, and ain’t no savior gon’ save you.
Im assuming this is a personal, and u jjust spelt Savir wrong, like the head on rapbattles?

vs

Your wack and your dopeness aint never been seen fool
Comin so played...
...im startin to think your swimming in the shallow end of the gene pool
lol
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
nice
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
good

V/ Cannabarz

V/D.Zaster

for having a much better verse

the other guy not even close,

good shit D

Your wack and your dopeness aint never been seen fool
Comin so played...
...im startin to think your swimming in the shallow end of the gene pool
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs.

You’re the bad-acting star of a prison rape scene after they punch your face in.
You a gay joke. You stay poked more than Asian acupuncture patients.

ass, you came weak. i only quoted to be nice. but d, sick nigga. dope shit.

v/ d. zaster

D.Zaster had a much better verse then that guy who spelled his name wrong

Everything D said before his little style switched landed pretty effectively while the dopest line the other kid had was self glory... i think D got this by a long shot

vote - D.Zaster

You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black
Best Line Of THe Battle

Vs

You’re the bad-acting star of a prison rape scene after they punch your face in.
You a gay joke. You stay poked more than Asian acupuncture patients.
Iight Bar...


V// D.Zaster

Your wack and your dopeness aint never been seen fool
Comin so played...
...im startin to think your swimming in the shallow end of the gene pool
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs
nothin

v/D for an overall better verse

Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs.

nuttin

v/D

/v D.Zaster

D had an ight verse compared to Assassin's verse, which was completely horrid. Ass came ass, with stretched as fuck lines, played or weak punches, and basically, absolutely nothing. D didn't come good but didn't need to. "I's" line won this thing for him.

Pz

this was an aight battle, here's my breakdown

flow: definatly D
structure: D
wordplay: neither (no wordplay whatsoever)
metaphors: D
vocab: assasiin

overall: D-good flow, that was the best thing in you verse, work on wordplay and thats it, assasiin, your lines were streched, hard to flow, not very enjoyable because you didnt really directly diss your opponent, try to add some wordplay and metaphors in as well

v/D.Zaster

You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs

nuttin. step ur game up kid.

v/canna.

You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black


b00m

that there was coo

rest wasnt great

vote zaster

Well yeah.

The I`s line was the only on i tried on.

I knew his shit was weak.

And you fucking fag, taking the A.I sig outta your sig.
Pfft at you

v//Canna

Itz pretty obvious he won

LMAO! @ that kid making a line about putting his pubes under your nose

Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain

vs

nothing


V/ D. Zaster

You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs. nuffin

v//d.zaster

D.Zaster

took this easily

Assazin, this aint RV Kill that shit

d.zaster took this one.. his punches were much harder hitting.. and his structure was much better than assasin's.. assasin had alot of stretched lines which made his structure bad. d.zaster had better wordplay also. so for those reasons my vote is for d.zaster

Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain

^Beat Assasin.

V/ D.Zaster

Vote D Zaster. Both assasin and Cannabars came with some good stuff, but Cannabarz took it light on him and did enough to get the decisive victory in my view. Cannabars used better disses, but both textees were very good at delivering solid disses...

Another wack battle..

You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs

Nothing really.

V/D

YO D. nice you TAKE this battle......................UNANIMOUS decision.


FUCK YA'LL HATERZ................TALKIN SHIT let me see you FAGZ STEP UP TO ME AND BATTLE................FUCKIN HOCAKED NET THUGGISH HOMOS.

AI was a crew name i was thinkin of.........but wasnt sure if it was used already...............appleseed is the crew name now......

meh at assasiin recycling his whole verse off rv

Your wack and your dopeness aint never been seen fool
Comin so played...
...im startin to think your swimming in the shallow end of the gene pool
Dawg you done fell off, Id never add you to my crew mayne
And your only not the weakest link.. Cos id never add you to the chain
You cant spell so ill just throw you a dictionary to take back
See spelling your name wrong just gives me more I`s to make black

vs

nada

v/ D.Zaster for a much beta verse

Lol at the blacken I's line and Assasiin you just made an ass out of yourself

V. D

24-0

D.Zaster wins

D.Zaster (1-0)
Assasiin (0-1)