Owned Twiz gotOriginally Posted by Trahedy Siphon
Owned Twiz got
god... you can be so gay.
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
vs
Nothing
The fuck happened to you Def this is a joke somethins up
untold
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
Def Wok
So ya know ya suck, u tried to elevated but got suck, & then
Ya applied thinking ya got much better, & got rejected again
Overall I thought that Def Wok had more consistent and harder punches then untold, but that weak end (weekend) name play was sick, but that was your only good line in my opinion. So I'd say Def Wok takes this for better and more consistent punchse.
v/-Def Wok
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HERE'S THE BREAKDOWN
UNTOLD:
nigga's rock'n fake bling with shitty lyrics no ones felt
i'm'a burn you fool, 'n make the ice around ya neck melt
NO
wok ain't crack'n the combination, so easily i whore 'em
def's skills is on lock...
and his verse'll prove a key was never made for 'em
NO, BAD RHYME, I SEE THE PUNCH BUT IT WAS WORDED BAD
as for punches, i store 'em right where ya hear
but it makes sense...
cause hear'n you 'oud make anyone turn a def ear
NOPE,WEAK
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
GOOD,BEST LINE,NICE WORDPLAY AS WELL
watch, its finished, ima straight clock the win chump
then put my wrist in the air just to show ya times up
WEAK
then stop battlin in it, even tho callin you a newbies fair
and Frontlines only sucks MORE as long as u stay there
OKAY CLOSER
DEF WOK:
U believe ya getting better, but in reality u get much worse
Cuz u think they laugh at ya punch, when it’s really ya verse
DECENT,PLAYED THOUGH
Ya tried to fly off ya fake ill licenses, but didn’t last got see sick
Tried to keep it to yaself, but untold being wack isn’t a secret
WEAK PUNCH
Every1 knows that, & your saying that ya dope in FL’s BS, no hoe
Cuz ya think that elites think ya good.
……………………………but 1st repley to ya application was NO
VERY WEAK PUNCH, BE MORE COMPLEX,
So ya know ya suck, u tried to elevated but got suck, & then
Ya applied thinking ya got much better, & got rejected again
WEAK AGAIN, VERY BASIC AND BORING, BAD PUNCH
So kid just chill, ya playing with fire, ya not ready, it seems
Ya have a death wish, how ya can’t stop panicking from suicidal dreams
WEAK PUNCH, NO PUNCH, JUST A STATEMENT
We all have dreams, just your is to much to go & send
Cuz ya ain’t the only 1 saying ya good, ha, sike it was just pretend
NOPE
Overall, this was a seriously weak battle and Untold wins barely because he had one better punch.
Untold: weak punches except for the 4th bar and your sixth bar was decent,concepts were alright but word them better next time
Def Wok: all punches came weak and didn't hit at all, ya came to basic and extremely played,
my vote/-Untold for dropping better than def wok because of one better punch, for having more complexity than def wok and for not comin as played as def wok
Untold
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
Def Wok
Nothing
Untold came better with harsher punches IMO V/ Untold....
wok ain't crack'n the combination, so easily i whore 'em
def's skills is on lock...
and his verse'll prove a key was never made for 'em
vs
nothing.
come on guys. get DOPER.. lol decent battle. i only quote the 60% or above punches.
anyway v/untold.
hmmm... I could have swore I already voted on this... Darn computer....
Def Wok - you had some descent punches that flowed pretty welll... However, your wordplay is very basic. This category is making your punches suffer. You had some good flow and nice structure.
Untold - You have reach a new height man. You delivered a couple of direct hits. Dont stop here though... Keep elevatin til your in LLL. Nice flow and structure as well...'
Vote - Untold, better disses
Untold, You had some pretty good punches, some of it was a little bit played but some of your lines hit hard, structure and all was fine, you had a little bit of wordplay vocab n stuff was fine... but...i know you can come harder.
Def, You came alright here. Some of your punches could have been worded better. Your punches hit alright, but some were more statements that anything else. Your structure n all was fine vocab all good and stuff... but i just feel his punches were hitten ya harder and u repeated the "him getting denied lines" throughout your whole verse which got old pretty quick.
Both need to add a little bit more wordplay and wit into your verses
and you guys would come a lot harder in your verses.
v/UNTOLD
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
vs
U believe ya getting better, but in reality u get much worse
Cuz u think they laugh at ya punch, when it’s really ya verse
Ya tried to fly off ya fake ill licenses, but didn’t last got see sick
Tried to keep it to yaself, but untold being wack isn’t a secret
v/def wok
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
vs.
nuttin
v/untold
untold wins
im comin strong as fuck, but cant say the same for u, friend
if i dont school ya ass its cuz your stuck on the weak end
lmfao @ that line
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