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Peer Pressure
.. my friends tryin to get me to do stuff thats cool but that i aint want to do
inside of my mind i dispute....... thinkin if i should have fun and attribute
its not a very intricate altercation.. but still inside its a very big complication
my friends are waitin.. for an answer, and im still in my mind debatin..
i dont wanna try it, i cant deny it, its somethin thats not right thing to do
... i gotta make up my mind soon, but im still askin my self what should i do?
all i wanna do surmount this confusion, this situation has got me feelin stupid
this battle between my good and bad side of my mind is gunna make me lose it
.. i dont wanna be another statistic, but to my friends its hard to admit it
when i say no to them all that im gonna hear from them is bitchin
this is it kid.. its the time to make my discision........ im not gunna contribute..
to the bad acts my friends do, ruinin there lives wit drugs.. if you ask me its stupid to do
ima rise above this complication, rise above this occasion.. ill quit the debatin
.. did you know 98% of teens tried or do marijuana in this god damn nation!?
yeah its messed up, and im fed up.. i aint doin somethin i really dont have a desire for
ima stop doin what my friends want me to do.. and start doin what i want more..
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dope structure, lines were about perect in length, not too stetched, not too short, dope imagery and multies were pretty nice too
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uppin before i fall asleep. Zzz
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Pretty dope piece Tuckzz. I was liking the concept of it, because, I, myself, was in this same situation. Obviously, you got through it better than I did... Besides all that, the piece is obvioulsy heart felt to you for the sense you don't want to be a statistic and thats good. But the thing that I wasn't feeling about this piece is the fact that there was no real big vocab. Start using more verbiage in your pieces and I see a brigt future for your OMs. Also, the way the last line flow'd, dopeness...
Stay up. 0ne.
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thanks for the feed homie.
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kinda cool... i like how you hold true to your morals in a way... not much to say on this peice... basics where coverd... short and to the point... nothing really amazing... but defiantly nicely done... nice wordchoice and all keep it up...
hit up one of my peices... there is plenty.
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anybody know a nba team thats sure to win tommorow ?
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dont freepost fool!
*smack*
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rhymes were good..pretty complex..this was pretty dope man..topic was cool..interestingt and creative..i enjoyed this the whole way..flow and stucutre is even and smooth all the time..nice drop..keep it up homie...peace...
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good shit im new and everything but i can see you've got great vocabulary and flow im gonna be look for more from you good shit homie
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uppin again.. drop some feed people.
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come on ppl.. drop some feed
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This was alright.
Lmao @ you acting like weed is a bad drug lmfao. I thought this was about your firends tryin to make you do pills or crack or some shit then I seen the marijuana line and was like wtf.
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this isnt a true story at all..
.. its just a topic i chose, i no weeds not a bad drug.
Attention : none of my om's true storys.. i will state at the end if an om is a true story. so, as you can see there is no "true story" under my om.
