Lyrical Hustle

The BRIGADE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!



-Icey summers opposin frozen winters, soul get entered, folded splintered
-Frost bitten steel mitten, shock treatment eel dippin, real mission unmentioned.
-Unintentional heat blaze brows, singe cords, loosen grips and unhinge them.
-Subliminal repent for criminal intent locks picked on accident now run up in them.

-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.

-Hold crowns kings, rough knights in courts, holdin down, no sleep in the fort, heat the resort.
-Beach and weep, weak links for weeks, look down, streets is steep in the sort, check up, keep a report.
-Need to retort, hear voices on sheets, been unclear made choices on reef in the port, feet failin need to abort.
-Eatin is livin so they burnin ta eat, keeping frosted heat from them icey summers of course, time frame twisted, runnin its course.

-Elevated now elated, graduation been belated, movin through the hatred the hardest of things.
-Estimated then excavated, disseminated then decimated, now hoods is extra vacant, harness the strings.
-Circumnavigated then circulated work, perpetrated shirk then percolated, lawlessness stings.
-Discriminated but emulated tone, insinuated I emanated the throne, flawlessness signifies my signature, pardon the immature, pissin on raw sixteens.


Like it neva left...AY!!!!!

hey man this was pretty dope shit....i liked your word play. it had decent imagery, which you could work on just a little bit, but overall, pretty dope.

to me....these were your best bars....

-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.

how long did it take you to write this?

took about 20 mins to key up

damn dude nice open mic homie. you had some good ass wordflow dude. damn.. you skilled dog. good verse good verse.

damn thats nice...........
that was crazy man......you keyed that?

wow

it was tight..... keep spittin

yea that was dope, Keep spittin. You gonna convert that to audio? if so, let me kno when that drops, stay atop. peace

Ayo Its Was Dope Keep Up The Good Work Aight Playa



Keep Spittin

I loved this...it was tiight...good stuff here...keep it up!

-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.

Good multis...That shits dope...keep sending me shit and I'll comment on ya stuff...Return da favor and leave me feed...*Most recent* (Gone, Life in the eyes of, and then the others...) Peace keep it up..

supremely dope. dis shit full of multis n had me lyk dam dis nigga a monster

yeah, i agree... dis is dope shit.. u relating evry experience dat u felt at the moment...
nice choise of words too...
especially near the end...

yo for real you got crazy skillz and talents bro you gotta keep writting and droping new shit cause this right here really wowed me good shit bro

it was straight...

lol...

good flow, liked how it was easy to read, vocab was good, just made the piece stand out more...


"-Elevated now elated, graduation been belated, movin through the hatred the hardest of things.
-Estimated then excavated, disseminated then decimated, now hoods is extra vacant, harness the strings.
-Circumnavigated then circulated work, perpetrated shirk then percolated, lawlessness stings.
-Discriminated but emulated tone, insinuated I emanated the throne, flawlessness signifies my signature, pardon the immature, pissin on raw sixteens."

dope.

nice job, keep doing what you do.

yiah dawg lovn the multis aait!!! u got mad skilz. keep it commin brah.

picture yourself a young dude tryin to make in the rap game...you gotta do the what?...lyrical hustle...atcha boy...hunid

should i throw this in the nomination for that hall since you dudes figgadeal?

ayo nice ass peice of work u got here, yea dope, keep up tha good work

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238823

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241039

^^two links i left decent feed on...forgot to put um in before....

yo if you really feelin the piece then nominate and participate figaadeal me?

dude that stuff was ill beyond belief.
keep that up and you'll get yerself a record label mayne.
good work

aight mayne that wuz ill.
yer multiz were sick mayne STRAIGHT UP SICK.
da flow was PERFECT and da structure was nice.
that was sweet
keep that shit up.

that was wassup feelin ya werdplay

thas wassup...

uppin for feed

back

loven the wordplay metaphores adn vocab... adn i see the way u put it together and how u formed ur multis.. i can tell that u have tru thought and passion for rap adn life.... u have potential to be one of the greats.....the only tihng is with the words u was usen the syllables waas thowin off ur stucture in sum places.... dont matta much thought... still a very dope peice homie....

feed me

tryin to get more feed

yo ur links r dope as well, dawg u just found ur self a career!

[QUOTE=ApOsTaSy]hey man this was pretty dope shit....i liked your word play. it had decent imagery, which you could work on just a little bit, but overall, pretty dope.

to me....these were your best bars....

-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.


i agree

i dunno tht was pretty whack but its better than anythin tht i could come up with so yeah it wasnt bad

hmmm...i dunno it was pretty whack...so it wasnt bad...oxymorron maybe?

yo this got rave reviews a while back so imma up it and see what today's crowd thinks of it...cheers and such

nice,

vocab was complex the flow was great.. the multis were everywhere and good at that
unlike most the multis werent just words put together to rhyme they actually had a meaning to em..

-Elevated now elated, graduation been belated, movin through the hatred the hardest of things.
-Estimated then excavated, disseminated then decimated, now hoods is extra vacant, harness the strings.
-Circumnavigated then circulated work, perpetrated shirk then percolated, lawlessness stings.
-Discriminated but emulated tone, insinuated I emanated the throne, flawlessness signifies my signature, pardon the immature, pissin on raw sixteens

^ loved it

preciate the feed...uppin for more new age opinions lol .

yo nigga dat shit waz bangin espeacialy dat cerry poppen line.

you got ill vocab and word play but it really aint lead no where, there were no particular events, you keep describing a lot of emotion but the emotions dont describe a scene or a story. id like to hear something personal and to the point, something not every one can relate to, something that strays beyond nice rhymes and shit. it doesnt have a homely feeling, its hectic.

dont think im bein an asshole, i think the shits hot, so why say good stuff, its obvious.

-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.

you should give more credit to these lines and elaberate, tell a story i think it would compliment your style better

tight shit man...you got flow for days...
fav. lines were:
-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes....liked how you opened up on this one....

8/10

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