To Kill or not to Kill...(p'rt-1)

To kill or not to kill that is the question
How do we tame these murderous intentions?
Hundreds & thousands of guns litter cities
Shall I grab one? or hope Grim-Reaper pities
My presence & angels guard my existence
Manifest blessed, breaking complex systems
But is my method enough to change mankind?
See sum signs its better to use brains than nines
Guess they’ll just forget, this chronicle is slept
So many times, they’ll just call it old concept
& claim they can’t see me or they all gone deaf
Ready for demise; gasp one last long breath
Exhale the spirit & swim in the darkness
As heartless horrors,-lurk amid the starkness
Showcases, silenced voices with no faces
Barely Gods children transcend to Oasis
According to prophets & men of the cloth
While soldiers place their faith in Kalashnikov

To kill or not to kill, to maim or not to maim
New angle same concept… rising up again

vortex want to battle me

your not meant to post that in here yo.. u etheir pm niggaz or goto bitchslapped

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238059
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237944

i was feeling what you were saying in this shit right here
the flow was a litle off, could have been better just needs to be leveled out betta and your topic was tight, i love killa type shit it was great had real feelin to it keep up the good work aight
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I was feelin this. I really like the fact that u have a wider vocab than alot of the others here. Good job on this.

yo hit thiz up with honest feed thanks, well appreciated if u hit thiz up for me returning favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=239009

thanks yo.. its inspired by shakesperares "to be or not to be" poem



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Flow was very strong in this piece. You dropped a pretty creative verse...You remained on topic with a poetic like drop...

I thought the vocab you used was very situated for this piece. You managed to take a poem and bring the words right at the audience and give them a feeling like WOW...
Almost like this was written in 3-D... Straight drop

flow was strong. youre vocab has improved vortex, great job, imagery was nice also

pz.

propa shit, 6 feet deep stuff, i reckon this is dope, how long it take you to make it?

good looking out to all



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Originally Posted by Pakaveli

propa shit, 6 feet deep stuff, i reckon this is dope, how long it take you to make it?

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yo man just something like 5-10 minutes while im smoking a spliff

maybe a minute of thinking b4 writing u kno

pz

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guess we all done with this knowledge then

cough

This was a nice piece i like the
way you took shakesphere poem and made
it your own nice creativity

peep my shit
Lost love and 9 months

good looking blud

I didn't care for the opening line, obviously working off a cliche. The word choice in the line:
Hundreds & thousands of guns litter cities
That guns litter the city I thought were interesting. With short lines, the flow in audio probably would sound good fast. Rhyming was solid with inner and some outer multis.
Thanks for checkin out mine.

good looks out crazy

uppers

this peice was really good u had a real strong flow and good wordplay I give u 10/10
keep it up homey lookin to hear u more

yo im waitin for a part two where u could make a collab wit me if u want aight man

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Originally Posted by J-Hova

this peice was really good u had a real strong flow and good wordplay I give u 10/10
keep it up homey lookin to hear u more

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wow 10/10 thanks man

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Originally Posted by SkullBreaker

yo im waitin for a part two where u could make a collab wit me if u want aight man

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yeah maybe fosho... ill hit you on the pm a lil later

pz


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