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lots of good rhymes vocab and good flow...i felt some more imagery would of done this piece more justice, like give me some more to envision and feell...
all well worded tho.. above average writing
stay up
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This was a nice piece, u had some good rhymes and kept on point. Good vocab and the topic was well potrayed. Both verses came strong and i felt you were saying. Good drop
yo....vocab there.....but thats it..............rhymes....cant believe these kats eyes poppin over a few internals....but topics been done and done again....at times alot better then this one here......Wordplay/Metas would add depth and imagery
iight... your entitled to your opinion... mo feed plz.Quote:
Originally Posted by Mic_Dareall
could I have some more feed please
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bump!!!
ha ya nice vocab there i liked ur shit 8.9/10
yah Man. Good Flow. Really Liked It. You Had Good Vocab And From Me If I Rated It I'd Give You A #8....peep Mines.
Thnx yall.... leave some better feed next time tho... lookin for more feed.
I liked the concept to the piece it was different ive seen a lot of original concepts in Om lately seems the place is improving about fucking time.
Your vocab was good it helped you describe your feelings and thoughts in great detail so i thought it was a good read. Your flow was nice but i know all about flow so i know you got inconsistant with it in some of the bars so next time you write keep that flow more consistent. The imagery and vocab was perfect for the piece so all i can say is next time you write come up with another original concept and keep that flow more consistent.
Return the feed on my OM:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238600
Thanx warchild... will take on board... more feed yall..
Anymore feed??
was good...u shoud make it more detailed..7/10
yo it was good especially wit the vocabs
iight... bump...
last bump.
just read, it was some pretty sweet shit.....structure, flow, creativity, sense--> all 9.0