Inner Voiced-An Spartan and ADR Collab werd

Inner Voices

Spartan Navy
ADR Black


Meditating and Going Nuts and while My Mindz Craving
Putting My hand on my Face While My fingers Ingraving
Hearing a Thump From My Heart Beeping and It Stops
Felt from The Knife was the Key and Then i Just Dropped

stop~im in ya mind dont fight the feelin nor lifes temptations....
lets face it~deaths pavement u cant replace it so paint the pic like wes craven...
im satin~ya ear drums ring from the terms i speak and drives i desire...
a none liar seekin revenge in a deadly form sickness is what i inspire

Trying to,and Hearing Two Sides,from a fellow friend
then The Other steped in and told me to Do it Again
So I Tryed to recommend death and Give Honesty
And Gave me a New time Sequel to My Dynasty

first ressurect my mythology~follow me as we take the course thats behind ur mind..
in due time we'll set aside crimes to watch heaven and hells battle collide..
just to show u what that'll provide~im no longer a voice im an image...
with no gimiks behold ur true limits let darkness fall overshadowing ur few spirits

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235547
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235651

....I liked this and yalls other peice.......the thing i like about yall two peices is yall complex.....i can invison the shit yall talking bout...........yall were even in this one....yall both had nice lines and like i said a good peice.........keep it up .........btw......i liked Suicidal Thoughts better.........lol.....but really keep the good work.....

lol if you liked Suicidal thoughts wait till this one that is coming we making another 3 way collab in a bit

chea but Spartan u an alias???????

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Originally Posted by !.VeRbZ.!

chea but Spartan u an alias???????

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lolz

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Originally Posted by Spartan

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lol whats so funny...........u well known or something??????????............

yes lol every one know me

.....nuff guys....yea he's well known.....

uppin can we get some feedback

Pure... Dopness... that was an ill spit my niggaz... well put 2gether, rhyme scheme was good, wordplay was nice liked the multis in that, good message 2 it, Title suited the piece well... good ending 2 the piece aswell... also i liked the format u guys layed out... 4lines 4 lines 4lines etc. well done guys keep it up...

Spartan try and pull off sum more multis tho... keep it up

ADR i'd like 2 do a collab wit u sum time... so hit me up... pc

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Great drop, Very good wordplay, multis, all that was extremely well put together, I liked that one alot.

...werd word we can do that ...u got aim hit me up on damnfuqindykez....
thanks for the feedback fam really appreciated

uppin

Yo i aint got AIM sorry man...

...ite no doubt then word ima get at u threw PM or some shyt so we can drop some ill shyt



uppin for some feed back peepz

ADR- good shit lol...I like your topical shit better than your battle verses...Topical stuff is where your strengths are..keep that shit up And I look forward to reading more...Your last verse was sort of force rhymed but it came pretty nice anyways...Good topic to write about...It's a simple topic and you helped turn the shit around good job...

Spart- Heh...this was also very well written...enjoyed the whole complexity of it...you had great vocab and wordplays...Looks good...words good...fits in with its subject...keep dropping both of you...hott shit....Leave me some feed in my OM's Mmk?

Peace yall...

aight later tonight i will thanx

good lookin nash...no doubt i got chu on ya OMs fam....

uppin for feedback good or bad dont matter i like knowin what i did wrong

strong message man real shit homie nice piece

strong message man real shit homie nice piece 7/10

good vocab, the flow was good, didnt lose track of the reader...topic was ok, i did some shit similar...but overall good piece

props

....uppin for some decent feed back...let me no down falls good points and ish like that

...upsssss


some decent feed plz

uppin for some respoces fams ...whas good

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that was some real shit lil' oc very lyrical but u could have went deeper with it

ite good lookin...

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yo uppin this good ass shit ya heard